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25th June 2007, 10:55 AM

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Originally Posted by Mayank View Post

aapki ye ghazal bahut hi dilkash hai... alfaaz bahut hi seedhe haiN... ye ghazal mujhe bahut pasand aaii, khaas kar yeH sher....

gar shaam-o-sahar khanke pyaale.N!
a'iyyaashii me.n bik'naa hii hai!

waah! waah! bohat khuub, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne. ek khoobsoorat aur dilkash koShiSh par meri taraf se bahut mubaarakbaad.

Mayank
Mayank Saheb!!
Aadaab!! kaise hai aap!!
Aap jaise umdaa gazal-kaar ke nek dil se chand alfaaz agar kalaam ke baare me.n sun'ne ko mil jaaye, to kyaa kahne! phir taariif-o-honslaa afzaayi to subhaan allah! Aisaa mehsoos hotaa hai ki kuch kamyaabii haansil huii hai!!
aapne naachiiz ki gazal par nigaah-e-karam faramaayaa! bahut bahut shukriyaa!! aapkii daad-o-tahsin sir aankho.n par!!
aise hi kalaamoN ko apnii maujudagii se aabaad karte rahiyegaa, aur apne beshkimtii raa'i-mashware se unke husn me.n izaafaa kijiyegaa!
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