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Love 21st June 2008, 02:07 PM

kisi ne haal na puchha mere shikasta dil ka
koi kharid kar tuta hua pyala bhi kya karta

rahila bohot umda likha hai n (tere naam ki thi jo roshni usse khud hi tune bujha diya..... ) khayal achhe hain or alfaz bhi agar ye tumhari apni likhi hai to ek salah dena chahunga or wo ye ke isme (makhta) use kartin to or zyada achhi lagti well aage khayal rakhna ok ............!!!
   
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