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30th June 2008, 02:47 PM

nice good but sir do line justified c nai ho rahee
agar dil socha nafaa nuksaan ishq mein
to woh ishq nai vypaar hai



2nd thing me think
shayd pyaar dhoka nai
ehsaas hai jo do roohain de darmiyan hota hai
mean eh jismaini nai
sorry sir kuch interfere kiya
outstanding likha hai aapne
   
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