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9th March 2009, 09:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Ek Ghazal View Post
Pyaare Dosto.N


Chand roz pahle is thread par meine kuch pesh kiya tha......... aaj ek baar fir se wohi kavish ko thode changes ke saath aap ke samne rakh rahi hoon..
AAp sabhi ne muje jo bhi suzaav diye the us ke liye mein aap ki shukra guzaar hoon..AAge bhi isi tarah apni raa'ye dete rahiyega............


Jab AAnkhe.n kisi ki sifaarish karti hai
Dil ko dhadhkane ki guzaarish karti hai

Ulzaan-e – mohabbat didar se badhti hai
aansoo.N se dard ki numaaish karti hai

Hus.N ka jadoo jab Ishq par chhata hai
Sunhare khawaabo.N ki khwaahish karti hai

Bewafayi se jab dil zaar-zaar hota hai
Koi nayii Ulfat ki aazmaaish karti hai

Pyaar ka fir ek naya fasana banta hai
‘Ek ghazal’ Banane ki Farmaaish karti hai

bahut umda...!! ek kahaani ki tarah ghazal aage badhi hai, pehle mohabbat fir bewafaai aur fir mohabbat, kya baat hai..!! maqta bhi kaafi ahcha tha. matla thoda kamjor laga mujhe par wo waqt ke saath nikharta chala jaayega. bas matle me jo aapne 'dhadkano ko' likha hai use 'dhadkano se' kar dijiye kyuNki guzarish humesha kisi se ki jaati hai kisi ko nahiN. aur saare sher ahcha the, padh kar wakaai mazaa aaya...!! yuNhi mehfil sajaati rahiye....!!



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