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naresh_mehra110 · 08:35 AM

Lamha Ji .. Namaste !

Aapki Ghazal ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe ... sabhi ashaar ki saadgi aur maasumiyat ko aakhir tak barqaraar rakhne ki koshish acchi lagi mujhe ... kuch sher mujhe behad pasand aayen ... khaas kar matlaa bahut asardaar laga mujhe ....

daikha nahi hai usko magar jaanti hun main
qadmoN ki aahatoN se pehchaanti hun main

Tahe Dil Se Daad Hazir hai ...

Reps +++++++++++++ Added

aise hi likhti rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ....

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naresh_mehra110 Anshumali Offline Posts: 7,420 Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: DELHI (INDIA) Rep Power: 87	30th October 2010, 08:31 AM Lamha Ji .. Namaste ! Aapki Ghazal ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe ... sabhi ashaar ki saadgi aur maasumiyat ko aakhir tak barqaraar rakhne ki koshish acchi lagi mujhe ... kuch sher mujhe behad pasand aayen ... khaas kar matlaa bahut asardaar laga mujhe .... daikha nahi hai usko magar jaanti hun main qadmoN ki aahatoN se pehchaanti hun main Tahe Dil Se Daad Hazir hai ... Reps +++++++++++++ Added aise hi likhti rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath .... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- Last edited by naresh_mehra110; 30th October 2010 at 08:35 AM..