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Smile frnd 4 ever - 3rd January 2007, 07:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Mayank View Post
Thanks munfairy jee:

ess laRi meiN meer taqi meer kee ek aur Ghazal pesh karta huuN



ab jo ik hasrat-e-javaanii hai
umr-e-raftaa kii ye nishaanii hai

(This yearning for youth that I now have
is but a relic/sign of my past life/bygone time)

Khaak thii maujazan jahaa.N me.n, aur
ham ko dhokaa ye thaa ke paanii hai

(The world raised waves of dust/ashes
and I took it to be a ocean)

giriyaa har vaqt kaa nahii.n behech
dil me.n ko_ii Gam-e-nihaanii hai

(My weeping is not without reason
there must be some grief hidden in my heart)

ham qafas zaad qaidii hai.n varanaa
taa chaman parafashaanii hai

(We are prisoners who are fond of our cages
For the garden is but a wing's beat away)

yaa.N huye 'Meer' ham baraabar-e-Khaak
vaa.N vahii naaz-o-sargiraanii hai

(Here, Meer, we lower ourselves to the very dust
There, pride still reigns supreme)
Assalam walekum,mayank ji
kaise hai aap?

sabse pehle,,aapko eid_ul_zoha,,aur naya saal mubarak ho ..

mayank ji aapki bheji har ghazal hum padhte hain,,aur use padhkar ek baat zarur sikhte hain,
ki ghazal likhne ke liye sirf achhe khayal ka hona zaruri nahi hai,balki achhe alfaaz ka hona bhi laazmi hai,
thnx aapke bheje meer taqi meer ji ke yeh ghazal kisi ko achha likhne main madad bhi karte hai,
thnx again
plzz isi tarah achhi ghazal post karte rahiyega
tk cr Allah hafiz

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