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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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7th February 2010, 06:37 AM
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Originally Posted by ABABBU
vese ta tere bina mainu saah v laina aukha
tere te door 12 saal phr kive jiaondi rahi ...
SAT SRI AKAL HEER..
tusi sachi hi bahut bahut sohna likhea hai...
umm.. shabda naal khedana ik hor gal hai..
par handaye hoye poem de roop ch pirona sachi sabh to aukha..
tusi theeek likheya "JIS TAN LAGE SOI JANE."...
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UUmm...........
Thx Dear, dubara reply den layi, asal ch tuahdi pehli reply to hi samjh aa gayi c ke tusi eda hi reply kiti hovegi,sahi gall aa ke Iss nu shabada ch piron naal kina chhota ban janda aa, par jad handaya pawe ta phr ehi mukan da naam nahi lainda, baki kini ajeeeb gall hai na ke jindgi da ek eda vada Paida kuch lines wich hi khatam ho janda aa |
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