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Originally posted by shalini
"jee utha phir tere aane se, toot-ta mera ye ‘saccha_pyar’
tujh bin kaise chaleNgi, sansoN ko tu ye raaz bataati jaa…
sanson ko tu raaz bataati jaa.....bohot khoob!!
jana hai to is jahan ko apne hathoN se tu yaar lutaati jaa..
har sher ki akhir line badiya lagi...
Kar sakuN ise bhi paar armanoN maiN wo aas jagaati jaa…
shayd aur bhi bohot kuch jodaa jaa sakta tha..yahan.....ijhaare-mohabbat ka tareeka hi kuch aisa hai!!....naya tarotazza!...
apka likha behad pasand aaya.....likhte rahiye!!
Take care
shalini
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shalini...
behad shukra gujar huN aapka aap yahaN aayi aur khaksaar koa apni daad se nawaza ... aapksa sath raha to insha alaah hum likhte hi raheNge
aapka apna
kunal