[Purvi]

Originally Posted by zainy

Beshak ye ek behtreen ghazal hai purvi jee, hmm...very romantic too...is khOobsurat ghazal per dil de daad qubool kijiye hamari aur se..yuhi likhti rahiye aur mehfil ko roshan karti rahiye

small note:shayed doosre sher me kaafiye theek nahi baitha, but its ok, ehsaas behad khoobsurat hain,

duaon ke saath

zainy

Zainyjee,

Bahot bahot shukriya.... Ghazal par aap ki comment se ghazal ki raounak aur badh jaati hai..Hausla afzayee ke liye aap ki tah-e-dil se sukra guzaar hoon..


Jaise ki aap ne kaha hai....

small note:shayed doosre sher me kaafiye theek nahi baitha, but its ok, ehsaas behad khoobsurat hain,

ghazal likh kar jab use padhi tab is ghazal mein kuch aisi kho gayi thi mei.N ke muje is baat par dhyan hee nahi gaya....

aage se har ek cheez ko dhyan se dekhungi.... bahot bahot shukariya

aage bhi yunhi padhte rahiyega aur apni raa'ye dete rahiyega.

khush rahiye

purvi