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4th June 2007, 12:22 PM
Nice words Saloni... Accha likha hai aapne... Zara shabdon ke uccharan ko saaf rakhiye, aapki kavita aur khoobsurat lagegi... Eg.. Saans in place of Shaansh....
TC...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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