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14th October 2014, 10:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Hamdam View Post
Hi Mausam....
Aap kaisi hain ...humne tau ki thi dillagi ,
..tum dil se kyun laga baithe.

Chalo hum aapko buzurg nahin kehte apne senior keh dete hain ,umr mein main aap se bara hun , aap mujhe buzurg keh liziye
.
Rahi baat izzat bakhshane ki tau chalo poetry mein aapko apna senior tau keh sakte hai..
Pulkit mind nahin karega kyon ki vo janta hai senior or senior citizen (Buzurg) main kafi farak hai ...vaise ho sake tau humour section mein senior citizen ki love story zaroor paiye.

Vaise main abhi senior citizen ban.ne se koson door hun ..

Baki pulkit ki is ghazal ne raunaq laga di yahan per aur mujhe bahut sare seniors ke bare parne ka mauka mila ...

Gar aaye hai sab laut kar ab jane.nahin doonga,
Mil ke sab mehfilein sajao yehi iltiza karunga.

With warm regds,

Sanjay Sehgal

Sanjay ji....Mausam ki baate aisi hi hoti hai...eska acche lafzoN se matlab hai ki eski umr ke bare meiN kuch mat khiye, esko apne aapko chotta kehlvana bahut pasand hai, so next time acche lafz


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