[vikram23]

Sharddh aap ne bhoot acha likha hai lakin aap ko maine note kiya hai ki aap jab bhi likhti hai aap dard bhara hi likhti hai kya koi baat hai aap ko kisi ne dard diya, kuch to bato apne bare main ki mujhe pata chale kam se kam ki aap ki shayri main itna dard kyo hota hai



but i like ur kavita


Thank you very much

bahoot acha laga pad ker but plz. tell me


ok by

take care isi tarha likhte rahiye