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23rd November 2006, 02:30 PM
ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa ,
ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa
[ibtidaa-e-ishq = beginning of love]
qaafile me.n subah ke ik shor hai
yaani Gaafil ham chale sotaa hai kyaa
[qaafilaa=caravan; Gaafil=one who is careless/ignorant]
sabz hotii hii nahii.n ye sar_zamii.n
tuKhm-e-Khvaahish dil me.n tuu botaa hai kyaa
[tuKhm-e-Khvaahish=seeds of desire]
ye nishaan-e-ishq hai.n jaate nahii.n
daaG chhaatii ke abas dhotaa hai kyaa
Gairat-e-yusuf hai ye vaqt-e-aziiz
'Meer' is ko raayegaa.N khotaa hai kyaa
[Gairat-e-yusuf=Yusuf's honour; aziiz=dear]
dil kii baat kahii nahii.n jaatii, chup ke rahanaa Thaanaa hai
dil kii baat kahii nahii.n jaatii, chup ke rahanaa Thaanaa hai
haal agar hai aisaa hii to jii se jaanaa jaanaa hai
surKh kabhuu hai aa.Nsuu hoke zard kabhuu hai muu.Nh meraa
kyaa kyaa rang mohabbat ke hai.n, ye bhii ek zamaanaa hai
fursat hai yaa.n kam rahane kii, baat nahii.n kuchh kahane kii
aa.Nkhe.n khol ke kaan jo khole bazm-e-jahaa.n afsaanaa hai
teG tale hii us ke kyuu.N naa gardan Daal ke jaa baiThe.n
sar to aaKhir_kaar hame.n bhii haath kii or jhukaanaa hai
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frnd 4 ever -
23rd November 2006, 08:52 PM
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Originally Posted by Anjana Rahi
ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa ,
ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa
[ibtidaa-e-ishq = beginning of love]
qaafile me.n subah ke ik shor hai
yaani Gaafil ham chale sotaa hai kyaa
[qaafilaa=caravan; Gaafil=one who is careless/ignorant]
sabz hotii hii nahii.n ye sar_zamii.n
tuKhm-e-Khvaahish dil me.n tuu botaa hai kyaa
[tuKhm-e-Khvaahish=seeds of desire]
ye nishaan-e-ishq hai.n jaate nahii.n
daaG chhaatii ke abas dhotaa hai kyaa
Gairat-e-yusuf hai ye vaqt-e-aziiz
'Meer' is ko raayegaa.N khotaa hai kyaa
[Gairat-e-yusuf=Yusuf's honour; aziiz=dear]
dil kii baat kahii nahii.n jaatii, chup ke rahanaa Thaanaa hai
dil kii baat kahii nahii.n jaatii, chup ke rahanaa Thaanaa hai
haal agar hai aisaa hii to jii se jaanaa jaanaa hai
surKh kabhuu hai aa.Nsuu hoke zard kabhuu hai muu.Nh meraa
kyaa kyaa rang mohabbat ke hai.n, ye bhii ek zamaanaa hai
fursat hai yaa.n kam rahane kii, baat nahii.n kuchh kahane kii
aa.Nkhe.n khol ke kaan jo khole bazm-e-jahaa.n afsaanaa hai
teG tale hii us ke kyuu.N naa gardan Daal ke jaa baiThe.n
sar to aaKhir_kaar hame.n bhii haath kii or jhukaanaa hai
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wooooow, its reallly nice,,kya baat hai ANJANE JI,,
( sabz hotii hii nahii.n ye sar_zamii.n
tuKhm-e-Khvaahish dil me.n tuu botaa hai kyaa )
bohot khuub,aayinda bhi aap isi tarah apne khayalat,apni pasand ,hum sabse bantiyega ,
apna khayal rakhiye
bye
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forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
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aafreen ...wah.. -
30th November 2006, 10:12 PM
wah dost bahot achcha likha hai aapne...please keep it..
" Woh bichda is -Ada- se - k - Root hi badal gayi
Ek - Shaqs - sare shehar ko - Viraan - kar gaya"
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aarazuue.n hazaar rakhate hai.n -
4th December 2006, 05:05 PM
Thanks Munfairy jee & Pyaasa jee:
ek aur Ghazal meer taqi meer saaheb ka,
aarazuue.n hazaar rakhate hai.n
to bhii ham dil ko maar rakhate hai.n
barq kam hausalaa hai ham bhii to
dil ek beqaraar rakhate hai.n
Gair hai muuraad-e-inaayat haa_e
ham bhii to tum se pyaar rakhate hai.n
na nigaah na payaam na vaadaa
naam ko ham bhii yaar rakhate hai.n
ham se Khush zam-zamaa kahaa.N yuu.N to
lab-o-lahajaa hazaar rakhate hai.n
chhoTe dil ke hai.n butaa.N mashhuur
bas yahii aitabaar rakhate hai.n
phir bhii karate hai.n "Meer" saahib ishq
hai.n javaa.N iKhtiyaar rakhate hai.n
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frnd 4 ever -
5th December 2006, 12:24 PM
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Originally Posted by Mayank
Thanks Munfairy jee & Pyaasa jee:
ek aur Ghazal meer taqi meer saaheb ka,
aarazuue.n hazaar rakhate hai.n
to bhii ham dil ko maar rakhate hai.n
barq kam hausalaa hai ham bhii to
dil ek beqaraar rakhate hai.n
Gair hai muuraad-e-inaayat haa_e
ham bhii to tum se pyaar rakhate hai.n
na nigaah na payaam na vaadaa
naam ko ham bhii yaar rakhate hai.n
ham se Khush zam-zamaa kahaa.N yuu.N to
lab-o-lahajaa hazaar rakhate hai.n
chhoTe dil ke hai.n butaa.N mashhuur
bas yahii aitabaar rakhate hai.n
phir bhii karate hai.n "Meer" saahib ishq
hai.n javaa.N iKhtiyaar rakhate hai.n
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hi mayank ji,kaise hai aap?
kya kehne aapke,aap meer taki meer ki itni pyari pyari ghazal hamien post kar rahe hai,is ke liye shukriya,
waise woh shayar to dil nikal kar rakh diya karte the,wakayi unki ghazal padhkar kafi achha lagta hai,aur hamein kuch sikhne ko milta hai,
aap isi tarah hamein pyari pyari ghazal post karte rahiye,
thnx again
tk cr,bye
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
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and ever and ever!
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17th December 2006, 06:11 PM
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Munfairy jee:
meer kee GhazloN kii baat hi kuchh aur hoti hai.. to maiN isi laRI meiN ek aur Ghazal post kar raha huuN...
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na sochaa na samajhaa na siikhaa na jaanaa
na sochaa na samajhaa na siikhaa na jaanaa
mujhe aa gayaa Khud_ba_Khud dil lagaanaa
zaraa dekh kar apanaa jalwaa dikhaanaa
simaT kar yahii.n aa na jaaye zamaanaa
zubaa.N par lagii hai.n wafaao.n ki muhare.n
Khamoshii merii kah rahii hai fasaanaa
gulo.n tak lagaayii to aasaa.N hai lekin
hai dushwaar kaa.NTo.n se daaman bachaanaa
karo laakh tum maatam-e-naujavaanii
pa 'mir' ab nahii.n aayegaa woh zamaanaa
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18th December 2006, 10:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Mayank
na sochaa na samajhaa na siikhaa na jaanaa
na sochaa na samajhaa na siikhaa na jaanaa
mujhe aa gayaa Khud_ba_Khud dil lagaanaa
zaraa dekh kar apanaa jalwaa dikhaanaa
simaT kar yahii.n aa na jaaye zamaanaa
zubaa.N par lagii hai.n wafaao.n ki muhare.n
Khamoshii merii kah rahii hai fasaanaa
gulo.n tak lagaayii to aasaa.N hai lekin
hai dushwaar kaa.NTo.n se daaman bachaanaa
karo laakh tum maatam-e-naujavaanii
pa 'mir' ab nahii.n aayegaa woh zamaanaa
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hi mayank ji,kaise hain aap?
karo laakh tum maatam-e-naujavaanii
pa 'mir' ab nahii.n aayegaa woh zamaanaa
kya kahun mayank ji,,,?
to bas itna hi kahungi,,,
,k yeh mahan shayar kisi tarif ke mohtaaj nahi hai,
phir se ek baar aapka shukriya,itni pyari ghazal ko post karne ke liye.
apna khayal rakhiye
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( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
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ab jo ik hasrat-e-javaanii hai -
3rd January 2007, 04:23 PM
Thanks munfairy jee:
ess laRi meiN meer taqi meer kee ek aur Ghazal pesh karta huuN
ab jo ik hasrat-e-javaanii hai
umr-e-raftaa kii ye nishaanii hai
(This yearning for youth that I now have
is but a relic/sign of my past life/bygone time)
Khaak thii maujazan jahaa.N me.n, aur
ham ko dhokaa ye thaa ke paanii hai
(The world raised waves of dust/ashes
and I took it to be a ocean)
giriyaa har vaqt kaa nahii.n behech
dil me.n ko_ii Gam-e-nihaanii hai
(My weeping is not without reason
there must be some grief hidden in my heart)
ham qafas zaad qaidii hai.n varanaa
taa chaman parafashaanii hai
(We are prisoners who are fond of our cages
For the garden is but a wing's beat away)
yaa.N huye 'Meer' ham baraabar-e-Khaak
vaa.N vahii naaz-o-sargiraanii hai
(Here, Meer, we lower ourselves to the very dust
There, pride still reigns supreme)
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3rd January 2007, 07:00 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mayank
Thanks munfairy jee:
ess laRi meiN meer taqi meer kee ek aur Ghazal pesh karta huuN
ab jo ik hasrat-e-javaanii hai
umr-e-raftaa kii ye nishaanii hai
(This yearning for youth that I now have
is but a relic/sign of my past life/bygone time)
Khaak thii maujazan jahaa.N me.n, aur
ham ko dhokaa ye thaa ke paanii hai
(The world raised waves of dust/ashes
and I took it to be a ocean)
giriyaa har vaqt kaa nahii.n behech
dil me.n ko_ii Gam-e-nihaanii hai
(My weeping is not without reason
there must be some grief hidden in my heart)
ham qafas zaad qaidii hai.n varanaa
taa chaman parafashaanii hai
(We are prisoners who are fond of our cages
For the garden is but a wing's beat away)
yaa.N huye 'Meer' ham baraabar-e-Khaak
vaa.N vahii naaz-o-sargiraanii hai
(Here, Meer, we lower ourselves to the very dust
There, pride still reigns supreme)
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Assalam walekum,mayank ji
kaise hai aap?
sabse pehle,,aapko eid_ul_zoha,,aur naya saal mubarak ho ..
mayank ji aapki bheji har ghazal hum padhte hain,,aur use padhkar ek baat zarur sikhte hain,
ki ghazal likhne ke liye sirf achhe khayal ka hona zaruri nahi hai,balki achhe alfaaz ka hona bhi laazmi hai,
thnx aapke bheje meer taqi meer ji ke yeh ghazal kisi ko achha likhne main madad bhi karte hai,
thnx again
plzz isi tarah achhi ghazal post karte rahiyega
tk cr Allah hafiz
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(,) (,) (,) (,)
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and ever and ever!
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