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maathe par bindi
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sindoor
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pahan
gale me
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kati
parmpara se
bandhi
laga
maathe par bindi
le chutki me
sindoor
bhare maang
pahan
gale me
mangalsutr
ho jaati hai
pal me
dharohar
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naari
teri
yeh hi
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Welcome to SDC............................................... .
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welcome to sdc....... mansha jee.... rachna aur khyalat bahut hee sunder lage.../aise hee likhti rahiye....... best of luck
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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bandhi
laga
maathe par bindi
le chutki me
sindoor
bhare maang
pahan
gale me
mangalsutr
ho jaati hai
pal me
dharohar
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naari
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Welcome To Shayri.Com ... Manshaa Thaakur Ji !
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welcome to sdc....... mansha jee.... rachna aur khyalat bahut hee sunder lage.../aise hee likhti rahiye....... best of luck
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shukria ........................... !
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21st December 2011, 06:27 PM
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Woh
khud se
kati
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bandhi
laga
maathe par bindi
le chutki me
sindoor
bhare maang
pahan
gale me
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ho jaati hai
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Manshaa Ji, Namaste...!
SDC parivaar maiN aap ka swaagat hai...!
Aapki pehli rachna sachmuch baDi acchi hai...! Tah-e-dil se daad qabool kareiN...!
Kuch yaad aaya isse paDkar
Naari...! Ajeeb hai teri kahaani
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Aati raheiN aur apna khayaal rakheiN, ok...?
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22nd December 2011, 05:49 PM
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khud se
kati
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bandhi
laga
maathe par bindi
le chutki me
sindoor
bhare maang
pahan
gale me
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ho jaati hai
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bahot sundar ehsaas Manshaa ji
daad qabul farmayen
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_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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23rd December 2011, 01:00 PM
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Woh
khud se
kati
parmpara se
bandhi
laga
maathe par bindi
le chutki me
sindoor
bhare maang
pahan
gale me
mangalsutr
ho jaati hai
pal me
dharohar
kisi ki
naari
teri
yeh hi
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Manshaa JI SDC Me Aap Ko Khush Aamdeed Kehtay Hain.........
Achi Koshish Hai Aap Ki..... Achay Khayalaat Se Saji Aap Ki Ye Nazm Achi Lagi....... Likhtay Rahen
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
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31st December 2011, 11:58 AM
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31st December 2011, 12:16 PM
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bandhi
laga
maathe par bindi
le chutki me
sindoor
bhare maang
pahan
gale me
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ho jaati hai
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Mansha Jee,
Aapki baat hum tak pahuch gayi... Aur mehsoos bhi ho gayi.
Bahut Khoob. Ek artist iska abhinay kar sakta hai aur ek painter ise canvas per ubhaar sakta hai..
Bahut khoob!!
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
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bandhi
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ho jaati hai
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ji nice one ................................
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
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Manshaa JI SDC Me Aap Ko Khush Aamdeed Kehtay Hain.........
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Mansha Jee,
Aapki baat hum tak pahuch gayi... Aur mehsoos bhi ho gayi.
Bahut Khoob. Ek artist iska abhinay kar sakta hai aur ek painter ise canvas per ubhaar sakta hai..
Bahut khoob!!
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26th January 2012, 11:02 PM
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bandhi
laga
maathe par bindi
le chutki me
sindoor
bhare maang
pahan
gale me
mangalsutr
ho jaati hai
pal me
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ati uttam ... mansha ji ...
dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhti rahiye ... radhe radhe ..........................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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27th January 2012, 10:49 AM
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bandhi
laga
maathe par bindi
le chutki me
sindoor
bhare maang
pahan
gale me
mangalsutr
ho jaati hai
pal me
dharohar
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naari
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yeh hi
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bahut khoob manshaa ji...
achhe khayalaat haiN...
likhti raheN....
mukhlis,
vikram 'mast'
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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Rachana bahut hi khoobsurat, aur saargarbhit hai .... bahut khoob ....likhate rahigaa...goodluck.....
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Mansha jee
Rachana bahut hi khoobsurat, aur saargarbhit hai .... bahut khoob ....likhate rahigaa...goodluck.....
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sindoor
bhare maang
pahan
gale me
mangalsutr
ho jaati hai
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