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Rain-My Best Pal - 20th June 2005, 12:23 PM

hello friends....writin some thin on my own after some time...ur valuable suggestions r always welcome...

On a rainy day I met her for the first time
That was the most beautiful day of my life
Stars shone more than ever before
Rain was more beautiful like never before
She looked like an angel
Who came from heaven to take care of me
I love her from deep inside
But she was never in my stride
I said "I love you"
She said "you are my best friend"
Should I feel happy that she came in to my life
Or sad that she'll never be my wife
I really don't know
Oh! I love this rain so much
It was there with me to share best moments of my life
And now when I'm sad
It is still with me to share my pain

Thanks


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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Re: Rain-My Best Pal - 20th June 2005, 12:29 PM

Hi Karthik Bro,

Well Written buddy...

Rain and me..... one of my fav topics...

Well If it pains let it rain..
for once it rains away a Rainbow is not far away...

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hi - 20th June 2005, 09:33 PM

hello Karthik

Amazingly written

rainand me....yes its my fav topic too

truely said by Rohin, Well If it pains let it rain..
for once it rains away a Rainbow is not far away...


god bless you

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20th June 2005, 10:22 PM

Very interesting...Karthik Bhai!

Thanks

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21st June 2005, 12:47 PM

hey karthik......

wat can i say....!!! very well written....
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no words to say/...... keep writing..
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21st June 2005, 12:58 PM

Karthik ...

intresting, amazing, fantastic, or so touchy ,,

i m really enjoying it...

keep it up

Urs

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21st June 2005, 01:05 PM

hey karthik dear its very well written buddy.just carry on writing like this.

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21st June 2005, 05:16 PM

rohin bhayya....thanks a lot for readin it....nice tht u liked it....
yes it is my fav topic too....as u've said.....i'm desperately waitin for the rainbow.....don no if i'll c it some time
ne ways
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
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Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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21st June 2005, 05:18 PM

priya my sis....how r u dear????
felt great readin ur reply....
n yes i'm waitin only for the rainbow now
keep comin
take care
ur bro


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
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Re: Rain-My Best Pal - 21st June 2005, 05:58 PM

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hello friends....writin some thin on my own after some time...ur valuable suggestions r always welcome...

On a rainy day I met her for the first time
That was the most beautiful day of my life
Stars shone more than ever before
Rain was more beautiful like never before
She looked like an angel
Who came from heaven to take care of me
I love her from deep inside
But she was never in my stride
I said "I love you"
She said "you are my best friend"
Should I feel happy that she came in to my life
Or sad that she'll never be my wife
I really don't know
Oh! I love this rain so much
It was there with me to share best moments of my life
And now when I'm sad
It is still with me to share my pain

Thanks
hi karthik,
well well all i can say is that man u have the ability to express ur thoughts. gr8. this one was awesome. thx buddy for sending me pm. i read it n dont worry i m back among all of u. was away to chandigarh n just came back. u were worried tht i wont come here anymore but aisa kuch nahi hai. dont worry n smile buddy. this was amazingly well expressed by u. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



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Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

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Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
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21st June 2005, 06:06 PM

hello jas.... great to c u back ......well u went to chandigarh n dint even tel tht u were goin to leave .....u cud hav given a mesg naa...
ne ways...happy tht ur back...
well...vat ever i rite u appreciate....my pleasure tht u liked the poem
take care n come online yaar


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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21st June 2005, 06:08 PM

danny bhayya.......nice tht u liked the poem.....but
aap amanush se danny kab bane......
take care keep readin


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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21st June 2005, 06:14 PM

hey mano...
no words????kyun????

i'm there with u
when u hav no words to say
i'm there with u
to help u express urself
when ur speechless
i'm always there for u

howz it????not so khaas...kya karun yaar on da spot..
keep readin
great to c ur reply
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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21st June 2005, 06:16 PM

kunal bhayya....u made my day readin n appreciatin my words....
delighted to c ur reply....keep comin
take care bhayya


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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21st June 2005, 09:47 PM

hello lucky ji.....nice tht u liked it....n yaar ...thanks for the reply.....keep comin this way..
u take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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22nd June 2005, 12:34 AM

hi karthik!

beautifully written once again! or if i wanted to lie...very stupid ...lol....
no...you wrote very nicely...
and dont worry...once the rain is gone...there is always a rainbow and a sun! dont worry....
just remember....im ur symbol of luck...toh dont worry at all....tumhari "lucky" tumhare saath hai

take care
bye
u kno who this is....
but ill say it anyways
your sweet but annoying american desi lucky friend


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22nd June 2005, 09:58 AM

On a rainy day I met her for the first time
That was the most beautiful day of my life
Stars shone more than ever before
Rain was more beautiful like never before

Woww.. really beautifully said!!


She looked like an angel
Who came from heaven to take care of me
I love her from deep inside
But she was never in my stride

WaaaaaaH... beautiful expression....!


I said "I love you"
She said "you are my best friend"
Should I feel happy that she came in to my life
Or sad that she'll never be my wife

Hmmmmmm... u shud be happy


I really don't know
Oh! I love this rain so much
It was there with me to share best moments of my life
And now when I'm sad
It is still with me to share my pain

Wow.. really very touchy.. Karthik!

Hey Bro!

Very sweet expression... Bahut hi pyaar likha hai tumne is baar bhi.. I loved reading it... accept my praises...Take Care.... Keep writing..


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Hi karthik,

Very well written..

Keep writing..

Best wishes,
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22nd June 2005, 10:27 AM

dearest warda........ thanks for ur reply....
felt really nice lookin at ur reply...hmm ur symbol of gud luck....
ven ur with me here ....y will i fear.....
take gud care of ur self.....i guess ur done with ur school
...(jus kiddin)
have fun "lucky"
ur sweet friend


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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22nd June 2005, 10:30 AM

pulkit bhayya.....its my pleasure tht u liked my poem....i'm really glad......thanks for always encouragin me...n appreciatin me.....
keep readin this way.....u said i shld b happy...so i'm gonna post some thin nice n happy next time around ....for u ok...
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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22nd June 2005, 10:31 AM

hello niral ji.....nice to c ur reply....glad tht u liked it....
thanks a lot
keep comin dear
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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23rd June 2005, 01:08 PM

awesome!!!
this is so beautiful....

n also d feelings described

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sonal ji....u've always appreciated my works...n i am thankful for tht
glad tht u liked this one...thanks for the reply once again
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
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Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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