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Chuii muuii si ye khushiyan -
12th February 2006, 08:18 PM
khushiyaana/dard....................
Chuii muuii si ye khushiyan
Ban jaati hai Dard aamez ye
Chupa chupa rakhti hai
Na jaane kitne hin Iizaa ye
Oodh odhni pyaar ka
De jaati dilon ko khoob Alam ye
Pyaar se dhdakte dilon ko
De jaati hai Khalish ye
Nasha lage jisko iska
Phir de jaati Gum -e-Uqoobat ye
ChlaVe ki ye khushiyaan
De jaatI hai Juu-e-dard ye
Do pal ka khikhilaana
Zindagi bhar ka Fughaan ye
Aayega suruur-e-tap-e-gam
Bana jaati hai aisa Naqsh ye…………..
Urdu: Dard aamez
English: Painful, Distressing
Urdu: Iizaa
English: Pain
Urdu: Alam
English: Flag, Banner, Sorrow, Pain, Grief
Urdu: Khalish
English: Prick, Pain, Anxiety, Apprehension, Suspicion
Urdu: Uqoobat
English: Punishment, Torment, Torture, Pain
Urdu: Juu-e-dard
English: River of Pain
Urdu: Fugaan
English: Clamor, Cry Of Distress, Cry Of Pain, Lamentation, Wail
Urdu: Suruur-e-tap-e-gam
English: Pleasure From Burning In Pain
Urdu: Naqsh
English: Copy, Engraving, Print, Painting, Picture, Mark
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Wow..... -
13th February 2006, 08:41 PM
really amazing...!
cant explain ........
i didnt understand urdu,
but in the way u used it is really cool n wonderful.......
keep on writing....
by,
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13th February 2006, 09:18 PM
Chandsi ji,
Bahaut accha laga aapko parhkar...ek alag si chuwan mehsoos kari
Chuii muuii si ye khushiyan
Ban jaati hai Dard aamez ye
aapka dhanyavvad
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Re: Wow..... -
14th February 2006, 12:56 AM
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Originally posted by empty_eyes
really amazing...!
cant explain ........
i didnt understand urdu,
but in the way u used it is really cool n wonderful.......
keep on writing....
by,
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..........................hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
.................................................. .........THANKS!
.................................................. ..............aapki didi
.................................................. ....................CHANDSI
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14th February 2006, 01:03 AM
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Originally posted by Vipinbox
Chandsi ji,
Bahaut accha laga aapko parhkar...ek alag si chuwan mehsoos kari
Chuii muuii si ye khushiyan
Ban jaati hai Dard aamez ye
aapka dhanyavvad
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AAPKA BHI DHANYAVAAD!!
....................FOR EVERY THING
...............................................BYE AND TC
.................................................. ......CHANDSI
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14th February 2006, 09:38 AM
thanks a lot...!
4 ur reply...!
i thought u r still angry on me....!
i m really happy today..!
n u said "aapki didi"
its feels really good...!
if u dont mind can i mail u..!
i want to talk to u also....!
if u can come for chat plz come i will wait.....!
bye
take care
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an incomplete brother........
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14th February 2006, 12:35 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by empty_eyes
thanks a lot...!
4 ur reply...!
i thought u r still angry on me....!
i m really happy today..!
n u said "aapki didi"
its feels really good...!
if u dont mind can i mail u..!
i want to talk to u also....!
if u can come for chat plz come i will wait.....!
bye
take care
by
empty_eyes
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oye..............!
......................aap mujhe daraaya mat karo plz.........
...........................aapke mails or aapse chat karna ..........my god! i cant .....me sorry ............................
.................................................. .......................bye and tc
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14th February 2006, 12:37 PM
plzzzzzz...........
its a request......!
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Re: Chuii muuii si ye khushiyan -
14th February 2006, 12:55 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by chandsi
khushiyaana/dard....................
Chuii muuii si ye khushiyan
Ban jaati hai Dard aamez ye
Chupa chupa rakhti hai
Na jaane kitne hin Iizaa ye
Oodh odhni pyaar ka
De jaati dilon ko khoob Alam ye
Pyaar se dhdakte dilon ko
De jaati hai Khalish ye
Nasha lage jisko iska
Phir de jaati Gum -e-Uqoobat ye
ChlaVe ki ye khushiyaan
De jaatI hai Juu-e-dard ye
Do pal ka khikhilaana
Zindagi bhar ka Fughaan ye
Aayega suruur-e-tap-e-gam
Bana jaati hai aisa Naqsh ye…………..
Urdu: Dard aamez
English: Painful, Distressing
Urdu: Iizaa
English: Pain
Urdu: Alam
English: Flag, Banner, Sorrow, Pain, Grief
Urdu: Khalish
English: Prick, Pain, Anxiety, Apprehension, Suspicion
Urdu: Uqoobat
English: Punishment, Torment, Torture, Pain
Urdu: Juu-e-dard
English: River of Pain
Urdu: Fugaan
English: Clamor, Cry Of Distress, Cry Of Pain, Lamentation, Wail
Urdu: Suruur-e-tap-e-gam
English: Pleasure From Burning In Pain
Urdu: Naqsh
English: Copy, Engraving, Print, Painting, Picture, Mark
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Dear chandsi ji
Khushi hui ki aap in dino yaha regular aa rahi hai
Hamesha ki ek bohat khoobsurat rachna aapki
Shukriya
Apka Apna
Diggaj
Navard-e-ishq mein kya hua kya bataye hum
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha
Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne
K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj"
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waqt -
14th February 2006, 03:13 PM
waqt ho na ho tum ko parhna parata hai sach main jise likhne ka shouk ho tumhe parhne kee adab bhee banaye
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Re: Re: Chuii muuii si ye khushiyan -
14th February 2006, 04:43 PM
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Originally posted by Diggaj_Dave
Dear chandsi ji
Khushi hui ki aap in dino yaha regular aa rahi hai
Hamesha ki ek bohat khoobsurat rachna aapki
Shukriya
Apka Apna
Diggaj
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.........................vayaakool hoon... urdu sikhne ke liye or ek baar shuru huii hoon toh khtam hone ka naam nahi le raha mera mann .................bas mann kar raha hai koshish karti rahoon or ...........kooi mujhe bataaye ki main kahan kahan galat ya sahi hoon ..............................
aab yahan toh kooi mujhe bata nahi raha ki main kahan galat hoon ....................par ek dost hai jo .......urdu main hin M.A kar rahi hai ....................usse boolaai hoon shayad wo kutch tips de kar jaaye .....................i am so restless u c .......................
...........by the way thanks for ur reply ......................and for everything ........................................
.........................................bye tc ........
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Re: waqt -
14th February 2006, 04:54 PM
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waqt ho na ho tum ko parhna parata hai sach main jise likhne ka shouk ho tumhe parhne kee adab bhee banaye
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. ............sach toh ye hai mujhe bhi sabko padhna pasand hai ..........sabko padhti hoon .............
mujhe kooi bhi poem bura nahi lagta sabko bade chaav se padhti hoon chaahe wo kisii ka bhi post ho ......
...................thanks MAASOOM JI /ANIL JI ......reply ke liye or sabhi baaton ke liye ............................
mere poems main jahan bhi aapko galtiyaana mile plz bataaya kijiyega ........mujhe pasand hai .................khud ke poem ko padhna or usse sudhaarna .................coz main direct likhti hoon kooi rough work nahi hota issliye had se jyaada galtiyaan hoti hai ,,,,,,,,or main khud ko hin sudhaarti rehti hoon .........................issliye main aksar ek hin post pe saare poems likhti hoon taaki kisi ko bura bhi na lage ............................
.................................................. ..................................bye and tc
.................................................. ..........................................chandsi
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14th February 2006, 04:55 PM
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plzzzzzz...........
its a request......!
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.......................aap mujhe bahut daraate ho ....................
........................................plz dont do this alll......................
.................................................. ..................................DI
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i am not scary...! -
14th February 2006, 05:51 PM
Aap "DI" bhi kehte ho or darte bhi ho...!
koi "DI" apne bhai se darti nahi hogi..!
then y should u....!
I just want to c ur reflection in my empty eyes....
i m not so scary.
i just want to talk with u..!
i will wait 4 u,
i m online now on yahoo
n i m online till 9 pm.
plz come
for a brother...!
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Re: i am not scary...! -
14th February 2006, 11:45 PM
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Originally posted by empty_eyes
Aap "DI" bhi kehte ho or darte bhi ho...!
koi "DI" apne bhai se darti nahi hogi..!
then y should u....!
I just want to c ur reflection in my empty eyes....
i m not so scary.
i just want to talk with u..!
i will wait 4 u,
i m online now on yahoo
n i m online till 9 pm.
plz come
for a brother...!
by,
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15th February 2006, 06:21 AM
chandsi suprb
well done
bhaut achha laga tumhe padhkar
keep writing
shrdh
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15th February 2006, 04:17 PM
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chandsi suprb
well done
bhaut achha laga tumhe padhkar
keep writing
shrdh
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................................thanks for ur reply and for every words!
.................................................. ..................bya and tc
.................................................. ...............................chandsi
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27th February 2006, 04:40 AM
kabhii yuu.N bhii to ho
.............................................Javed Akhtar
kabhii yuu.N bhii to ho
dariyaa kaa saahil ho
puure chaa.Nd kii raat ho
aur tum aao
kabhii yuu.N bhii to ho
pariyo.n kii mahafil ho
ko_ii tumhaarii baat ho
aur tum aao
kabhii yuu.N bhii to ho
ye narm mulaayam Tha.nDii havaaye.n
jab ghar se tumhaare guzare.n
tumhaarii Khushbuu churaaye.n
mere ghar le aaye.n
kabhii yuu.N bhii to ho
suunii har manzil ho
ko_ii na mere saath ho
aur tum aao
kabhii yuu.N bhii to ho
ye baadal aisaa TuuT ke barase
mere dil kii tarah milane ko
tumhaaraa dil bhii tarase
tum nikalo ghar se
kabhii yuu.N bhii to ho
tanahaa_ii ho, dil ho
buu.Nde.n ho, barasaat ho
aur tum aao
kabhii yuu.N bhii to ho
Meraj Faizabadi
tere baare me.n jab sochaa nahii.n thaa
mai.n tanhaa thaa magar itanaa nahii.n thaa
terii tasviir se karataa thaa baate.n
mere kamare me.n aa_iinaa nahii.n thaa
sama.ndar ne mujhe pyaasaa hii rakhaa
mai.n jab seharaa me.n thaa pyasaa nahii.n thaa
manaane-ruuThane ke khel me.n ham
bichha.D jaaye.nge ye sochaa nahii.n thaa
sunaa hai band kar li us ne aa.Nkhe.n
ka_ii raato.n se vo soyaa nahii.n thaa
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