Re: Tareef aapki....... -
11th February 2006, 11:07 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by karndhar Tareef aapki karein kaise alfaz nahin milte,
Aap jaise kisi aur mein andaaz nahi milte,
Khuda jaane kya kasar hai hamari chahat mein,
Hum milte hain aapse, humein aap nahin milte !
wah karansahab aacha laga aapki shayri padkar.........
yuhi likhte rehiyega.......
chand ho pari ho ya koi afshara
pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara
jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra"
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aapki purani poetry padi hai aaj, acchi lagi hume, par aap ek ek sher hi kyuN likhtey haiN, ahsaas acche hain aapke, aap poori gazal likha kijiye na
aapki naye gazal ke intzaar mein
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
SALAM APNA BOHAT ACHA LIKHA HA.KARNDHAR JI SUNITA JI BIKUL THEK KAHA RAHI HAIN.APP KI POETRY KA HUM SAB KO INTEZAR RAHA GA.VERY NICE. TAKECARE ALLAHHAFIZ
KOI ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE,
JO CHEEN LAITA HAI ANSOO MERAY RONE SE PEHLE,
PHIR REHTA HAI WOH RAAT BHAR AISAY SAMNE,
MAIN AKSAR CHAL PARTI HON USKA HAATH THAMNE,
AB NEEND BHI AYE TO MAIN SONA NAHI CHATI,
KISI QEEMAT PE BHI MAIN USKO KHONA NAHI CHATI,
HO JAYE WOH KASH MERA MUJHE KHONE SE PEHLE,
JO ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE.
Thanks for appreciation -
22nd September 2008, 01:06 PM
Sunita ji, Muskaan ji & Nashua ji
Aap sabko meri rachna badhiya lagi yeh jaankar bahut khushi huee.
Aap sabhi ki tareef aur hausla afzai ka shukriya.
Mera prayas rahega ke main agli bar shayri.com ke chahnewalon ke liye koi badhiya ghazal pesh kar sakoon.
Once more, Thanks a lot !