~~Ehsas~~

Rimjhim · **~~Ehsas~~ -** 12th July 2003, 07:12 PM

Doston koshish ki hai ki apne dil ke ehsas ko paper par likh doon, aur wohi maine kiya hai ab aap log bataiye ki kya main poori tarah se safal ho paayi hoo ismai...

pyar me dhire-dhire jalna acha lagta hay
khood hee kahna ,khood hee sunna acha lagta hay.

kuch bhi khas nahi hay mujhma fir bhi jane kyo
bhid sa hatker tanha chalna acha lagta hay .

dard,thadap,aur aansoo jab se mila mujha
jhakm ko har dam taja rakhna acha lagta hay .

jisne mujh par ek najar bhi dali nahi kabhi
uska liye hi rooj savarna acha lagta hay .

makhmal ka ab narm galicha chubhane lagta hay
teri khatir dhoop me chalna acha lagta hay .

Rimjhim

chetan agrawal · **mein shayar to nahi -** 12th July 2003, 07:51 PM

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hi

hello rimjhim
how are you
appne bhahut hi achchi gajal likhi es ke liye app tarif e kabil hai
bah ba bah ba kmal kar diya appne
dhoti ko phadker rumal kar diya appne
kam shabdo mein ghahari abhivakti bhut achcha hai
keep it up
bye take care

Rimjhim · **Hi -** 12th July 2003, 07:57 PM

Chetan ji shukriyaa tarefe ke liye. Aur waise hum aapko ek baat aur batayen, aapka tareef karna jo style hai naa thora diff. hai but don't worry i like it :-).

Thanx once again.

Rimjhim

meena chheda · **bahot hasin -** 13th July 2003, 11:17 AM

rimzhim,
aaj fir se tumari gajal ki boonde hmae bhigo gayi hai... jab bhi aati ho apne naam ko prastut karti hi ho. achha laga bhigna muje... sari gajal aur khas to yah line...
jisne mujh par ek najar bhi dali nahi kabhi
uska liye hi rooj savarna acha lagta hay .

makhmal ka ab narm galicha chubhane lagta hay
teri khatir dhoop me chalna acha lagta hay .

jaanu na tera mera rista kya hai
aaj kyum muje tuj maie ...
apna chera nazar aa raha hai

Rimjhim · **Hi -** 13th July 2003, 06:33 PM

Meena ji,

aapka bahaut bahaut shukriyaa. Ab kya karoon mom and dad ne naam hi aisa rakh ahai Rimjhim, u know wht kabhi kabhi to main oonse baar bara puchti hoo ki kya aap logo ko koi aur naam nahi pasand aaya ka, jo oothakar ke Rimjhim rakh diya, phir woh kahte hain ki yeh naam isiliye rakha hai kyonki yahan pronounce karne mai easy ho, USA mai rahti hoo naa main, but kabhi kabhi to mujhe apna naam acacha nahi lagta hai.

Anywayz aapki aayi aapne meri gazhal padhi aur itni saari tarefe ki meri bhi mere nama ki bhi aur meri post ki bhi ooske liye dil se shukriyaa, thankyou very much, aise hi aati rahna...

RImjhim

meena chheda · **a reeeee -** 13th July 2003, 06:48 PM

oh rimzhim,
tumhe itna achaa naam kyun pasand nahi? muje to bahot hi achha laga ... sach kahu to tumhari rachna padhhne tumhare naam ne hi muje pahli baar bulaya thha.

Rimjhim · **ok -** 13th July 2003, 06:50 PM

Woh kya hai naa Rimjhim bahaut diff. sa name hai, but mujhe ek baat acachi lagti hai ki it's not a common name. Log bahaut jaldi pehchaan jaate hain. But mere friends pata hai kabhi kabhi mujhe Rimjhim ki jagah baarish ki boonde kahkar bulate hain.

Aur phri mujhe bahaut gussa aata hai. Waise ab to mujeh apne naam ko thankyou kahna parega ki oosne aapko yahan bulaya. Thanx once again...Waise apa apne baare mai kuch batao naa.

Rimjhim

meena chheda · **haahahahahhah -** 13th July 2003, 06:55 PM

oh meri rimjhim ,
kya jaan na hai meena k baare maie?
maie to woh khuli kitaab hu
jin k patte bhi ab purane ho gaaye hai

Rimjhim · **Ok -** 13th July 2003, 06:58 PM

Meena ji general info, like aap kahan se hain, kay karti hain, just that..

Rimjhim

punnu · 14th July 2003, 05:01 AM

hi rim . how are u madam . woooow bahut hi pyara likha hai apne ase hi likhte rahiyga aur haan ek baat apka naam bahut hi acha hai mujhe ase aam bahut pasand hainjinmain feelings batayi jati honl like armaan. i choose for my cousin brother . i don't know how he looks like but when come to know that it's boy i just told everyone main choose karungi apne bhiya ka naam and i choose armaan. ijust luv this name and ishika
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bye
luv
parneet
asa hi likhte rehana aur kush raho . kabhi udas na hona jindagi main

mitaparekh1@hot · **bahot khub -** 14th July 2003, 11:30 AM

HI kuch bhi khas nahi hay mujhma fir bhi jane kyo
bhid sa hatker tanha chalna acha lagta hay .

RIMZIM BAHOT KHUB LIKHA HAI.
akley rahene se gam ko andar hi andar ghutna shayad achha lagta hai

**hi -** 14th July 2003, 11:52 AM

LO KAR DIYA REPLY
VAISE REPLY KARNE LAYAK KUCH HAI TO NAHI ISME

manoj kureel · **Re: ~~Ehsas~~ -** 14th July 2003, 02:06 PM

hello rimjhim ji
kya khoob likha hai...laajawab..taareef ke liye shabd nahin hain mere pass.itna umda kalaam aapne itne saral alfaaz mein likha hai . aap ki yeh gazal hamesha ke liye dil mein bas gayi hai.aap bahoot acha likhti hai.aap ki aur rachnaon ka hamesha intezaar rahega mujhe.

Apne Mehboob Sanam Ko Dil Kabhi Bhool Na Paye,
Saath Chalte Hai Pal Pal Biti Yaadon Ke Saaye .

bye and take care
-Manoj Kureel

Rimjhim · **Hi -** 15th July 2003, 09:49 PM

Parneet,

Thanx a lot yaar, tumne mere naam ki tarefe ki chaliye hum bhi aapke naam ki tarefe karte hain, u have got a nice name, really you do. Waise u know wht abhi mera India jaane ka to koi program hai nahi itni garmi hain wahan par to soch rahi ki tumhare paas aa jaoon, are nahi yaar just joking bahaut kaam hai summer vacation to it's better if i finish my work :-). Tum kab India ja rahi ho??? I have been to India once, becoz i was born and brought up here.

Chalo reply me.

Rimjhim
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Shukriyaa mita ji, tareef ka, aapko pasand ayai bas ia m honored, thankyou very much.

Rimjhim
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jaantih oo mohit reply karne layak kuch tha hi nahi, tumne uhin takleef ki, kyon apna precious time waste kar rahe ho, plzzzzz tum apna time mere liye waste mat karo, it's a request.

Rimjhim
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Shukriya manoj ji aapko pasand aaya humko behad khushi hui, tahnkyou so much for encouraging me :-).

Rimjhim

**HI -** 16th July 2003, 12:37 PM

THEEK HAI THEEK HAI
VAISE EK BAAT KAHU
CHALLO PM MEIN PADH LENA

Rimjhim · **Hi -** 16th July 2003, 04:04 PM

Mohit tumhara pm padh liya, tum bhi padh lena, ok!!! Bye.

Rimjhim