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apanii aag mein Khud jal jaayenge..! |
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apanii aag mein Khud jal jaayenge..! -
14th July 2003, 07:27 PM
ab ye hogaa shaayad apanii aag mein Khud jal jaayenge
tum se duur bahut rah kar bhii kyaa paayaa kyaa paayenge dukh bhii sachche sukh bhii sachche phir bhii terii chaahat mein ham ne kitane dhoke khaaye kitane dhoke khaayenge aql pe ham ko naaz bahut thaa lekin ye kab sochaa thaa ishq ke haathon ye bhii hogaa log hamen samajhaayenge kal ke dukh bhii kaun se baaqii, aaj ke dukh bhii kai din ke jaise din pahale kaate the ye din bhii kaT jaayenge --------------------Manoj Kureel |
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14th July 2003, 07:45 PM
Bahut achha likha hai bhai ..
Dil se likha hua mahsos hota hai . . padh kar bahut achha laga .. Likhte rahiye .. |
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15th July 2003, 03:06 PM
Manoj ji,
Sach, bohat khubsoorat ghazal hai aapki!.. Har shayar ka apna alag andaaz hota hai.. us andaaz se unki pehchaan hoti hai.. hume lagta hai ki jald hi sab aapko apke kalaam ke zariye pehchaanne lagenge.. basm yunhi khubsoorat kalaam likhte rehna..  |
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15th July 2003, 04:05 PM
shukriya afsaan ji
sach kahoon aap ki hauslaafzai bahoot achi lagi.aap khud bahoot umda likhti hai aur mein aap ka har kalaam padhta hoon.mein yehi umeed karta hoon ki aap aage bhi shayari ke anmol moti bikherti rahe aur mein aap ke jaise likhne ki koshish karta rahoon. take care -Manoj Kureel |
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Apanii.......... |
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Manoj jee, Nice one. Aapka hawsla dehkar acha laga.
Pyaar meh shayed aise hi kuch hojate hein. Lekin jab koi kisise Pyaar hojeta hein, aisa hi kuch hota hein. God bless. Shimul. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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Re: Apanii.......... |
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16th July 2003, 03:19 PM
shimul ji hauslaafzai ke liye bahoot bahoot shukriya....
manzil na de, charaaG na de, hausalaa to de tinke kaa hii sahii tu magar aasaraa to de -Manoj Kureel |
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mein shayar to nahi |
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mein shayar to nahi -
16th July 2003, 03:40 PM
hi manoj
hello khub likha appne aab tarif karu kya appi jo appne ise bnaya~~ |
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