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jakhm - 28th November 2004, 08:57 PM

"barbadiyo ka thofa pyar se mila
harjakhm hume aapne hi yaar se hi mila
chirag se ye kasa dhua tha utta?
bas usi aag se me tha gher mera jala
jivan mahak utta tha ful ki kushboo se
ab!murza gya jo ful tha khila
aahat to hui thi par samaj na saki
aaya thabha karne bekhof jaljala
halat ase the kase bachate khud ko?
jab shamne tha mere dusmno ka khafila
puchati hu main aapne taqder se aapni
kab tak chalega ye shilshila
ab na koi shikayat na koi gila'
jo bhi mila hume aapne nashib se mila"
   
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28th November 2004, 09:13 PM

ChanDaNi Ji,

ab na koi shikayat na koi gila'
jo bhi mila hume aapne nashib se mila"

SuCh KaHa Hai AaP Ne. INSaaN APNe SoCh Ke MuTaBiK Ji Le To BaaT Hi Kya Ho!

YaHan KiS Se SiKWa, Kis Se KaRen GiLa
Jo Tha KiSMaT Mai WaHi HaM Ko Hai MiLa.

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BaS ITNa To BaTaa Do Ki Kya Thi KhaTaa HuMaaRii.

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masha -allha - 28th November 2004, 09:26 PM

Hi chandniji bahut khub likha hai

I like this"barbadiyo ka thofa pyar se mila
harjakhm hume aapne hi yaar se hi mila.

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hi - 29th November 2004, 12:31 PM

hi nisha ji bhut acha laga ki aapne humara ye poem pada or reaply bhi diya tnx alot
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29th November 2004, 12:49 PM

jab shamne tha mere dusmno ka khafila
puchati hu main aapne taqder se aapni
kab tak chalega ye shilshila
ab na koi shikayat na koi gila'
jo bhi mila hume aapne nashib se mila"


Hi Chandni,

Nice Work...Do keep it Up!!


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Re: jakhm - 29th November 2004, 12:49 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by chandni_jain
"barbadiyo ka thofa pyar se mila
har jakhm hume aapne hi yaar se hi mila
chirag se ye kasa dhua tha utta?
bas usi aag se me tha gher mera jala
jivan mahak utta tha ful ki kushboo se
ab!murza gya jo ful tha khila
aahat to hui thi par samaj na saki
aaya thabha karne bekhof jaljala
halat ase the kase bachate khud ko?
jab shamne tha mere dusmno ka khafila
puchati hu main aapne taqder se aapni
kab tak chalega ye shilshila
ab na koi shikayat na koi gila'
jo bhi mila hume aapne nashib se mila"
hi chandni
aaj apko pahli baar pada hai.acha laga apka likha.apne hi jakhm det hai chandani ji gair nahi.
apna ard yuhi byaan karte rahiye.
sakhi


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hi - 30th November 2004, 05:48 PM

hi acharya ji tnx jio aap humari mhafil me aaye or usme baag bhi liya matlb humari poem padi or uska jawab bhi diya bhut bhut sukariya
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hi chandani! - 2nd December 2004, 03:28 PM

hi chandani!

nice work once again any ways keep it up and keep writing such shyries lagta hai kafi gham mein doobe hooe ho tum any ways keep it up and takecare.

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hi - 3rd December 2004, 05:40 PM

hi pulkitji tnx jo aapne humare ye poem padi or reaply kiya bhut acha laga hume
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