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dil bhale hi tut gaya - 12th April 2003, 09:04 PM

hi friends,
this is somthing very specisl message from mysideto u allllll.never do feel dishurted.......


dil bhale hi..

dil bhale hi tut gaya
main magar nahi tuta
saath besak tera chute gaya
ummed ka daman magar nahi chuta

khawab jo sajaya tha in aankho ne
tumhe dil mein lekar
khawab wo bahle hi tut gaya
khawab sajaane ka jajba magar nahi tuta
saath besak tera chute gaya
ummed ka daman magar nahi chuta

kar hi dali tumne mere saath
bewafai aakhir
is mohabbat mein
dil ek aur bhale hi tut gaya
mohabbat karne ka riwaz magar nahi tuta
saath besak tera chute gaya
ummed ka daman magar nahi tuta
dil bhale hi tut gaya
main magar nahi tuta

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13th April 2003, 11:07 AM

dil bhale hi tut gaya
main magar nahi tuta
saath besak tera chute gaya
ummed ka daman magar nahi chuta


khoob likha hai aapne Vinay ji....
daad qubool kijiyega....

aise hi likhte rahiye aur muskurate rahiye...


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13th April 2003, 09:31 PM

hi vinay ji

bohot acha likha apne. mai yeh bih kehna chahongi ke

jo rakhte hai auron ke liye pyar ka jasba,
woh loog toot kar bhi bikhra nahin karte!

lekin yeh bhi sach hai keaise log bhi kam hote hai.


~~Meena~~


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Mai to phool hoon tanhaiyon ka, Mujhe bas virane ki talash hai.

   
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thanxz - 16th April 2003, 09:46 PM

hi khamosi,
thanks a lot for appereciating that
i hope to write the same in future
waise insan wahi hai jo gir gar sambal jjaye.is liye hamen hamesa mukarate rahana chaiye
bi keepsmiling
.................vinaydahiya


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