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18th March 2004, 08:04 PM
hazaar Gam the merii zindagii akelii thii
Khushii jahaa.N kii mere vaaste pahelii thii [pahelii=riddle] vo aaj bach ke nikalate hai.n mere saaye se ki mai.n ne jin ke liye Gam kii dhuup jhelii thii judaa hu_ii na kabhii mujh se gardish-e-dauraa.N merii hayaat kii bachapan se ye sahelii thii [gardish-e-dauraa.N=wheel of time; hayaat=life] cha.Dhaa rahe hai.n vo hii aaj aastii.n mujh par ki jin kii piiTh pe kal tak merii hathelii thii [aastii.n=sleeve] ab un kii qabr pe jalataa nahii.n diyaa ko_ii ki jin kii dahar me.n roshan bahut havelii thii [qabr=grave; dahar=world] vo jhuk ke phir merii turbat pe kar rahe hai.n salaam isii adaa ne to "Mahir" kii jaan le lii thii [turbat=grave] By:Janaab Mhair Ratlami muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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21st March 2004, 08:30 AM
sanjoooooooooooooo
Bahut aacha hai .. hame pasand aaya . thanx for posting it here . janab mhair sahab ne bahut khuub farmaya hai hazaar Gam the merii zindagii akelii thii Khushii jahaa.N kii mere vaaste pahelii thii sach mein ..... ek paheli hi hai abhi tak ..... na jane kab .... milega is ka jawab ...aur kaun dega .. !! khuda jaane vo aaj bach ke nikalate hai.n mere saaye se ki mai.n ne jin ke liye Gam kii dhuup jhelii thii aksar aesa hi hua hai bahut baar ..... kya kare ... insaan aakhir insaan hai ... kya shikwa kare .jab bhagwan ne ise banaya hai .... is liye har zulm bhi kabuul hai . !! khayal rakhna Nanu |
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Dear Sanjooooo ! |
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Dear Sanjooooo ! -
19th April 2004, 10:30 AM
vo aaj bach ke nikalate hai.n mere saaye se
ki mai.n ne jin ke liye Gam kii dhuup jhelii thii Kya khoob hai jindgi. Jitna samjho utna hi ulajh jatii hai. achha hai. likhte raho, kya pata ki jindgi ki paheli kabhi sulajh jaye. :-Cease Humko aata hai huner dil me utar jane ka. |
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Laajawaab -
19th April 2004, 01:37 PM
Ye Johri...bhi na jaane kahaaN kahaaN se ...ye nageene bator laata hai... Sanjoo..mere dost... waakai daad deta hooN tumhaari nazar ki....jab bhi kuchh achchha talaashta hooN..to tumhaari chaukhat pe chala aata hooN..
Ab ye jo pesh kiya hai na tumne sach kahooN... Parhte parhte ... dil bhar aaya... vo aaj bach ke nikalate hai.n mere saaye se ki mai.n ne jin ke liye Gam kii dhuup jhelii thii cha.Dhaa rahe hai.n vo hii aaj aastii.n mujh par ki jin kii piiTh pe kal tak merii hathelii thii vo jhuk ke phir merii turbat pe kar rahe hai.n salaam isii adaa ne to "Mahir" kii jaan le lii thii ye sab to behtreen haiN...Shukriya dost.. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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20th April 2004, 12:07 PM
Shaloo..bass fhaltoo ki bate kara lo...
 ab aesa bhii kuch nahi kii tum hume samjahogii... ..chal chal man liya tum ko bhi pasaand aaii ye ghazal.....ek baat bataoo tum ko....hairaan mat hona jinn sahaab ne ye ghazal likhii hai naa...woh humare hii gaon..sorry shehaR kai hai... Gr888 Ratlam...Ha ha ha ha ha ha.....hai na humare shehaR kai panee mai kamal.... Sanju!cease_fire..dost ye humne nahi likhi hai jinn sahaab ne likhii hai unka naam bhii likha hai neeche...Mhair Ratlami..sahaab hai jii ye...shukriyaa isse pasand karne kaa...Sanju!!! Dear Rakesh.....bass kyaa..ab tum bhii...shayri k mamle mai hum to tumhare shiishya hii hai...kaha samjh hume itnni...bass iss kalaam ka ki khasiyat ye hai ki...ye mere shehar kai shayar sahaab ne likha hai....bohot achha lagta hai...jab unka naam mai woh mahir ratlami likhte hai to...shukriya dost yu tarif karne kaa....waise hume bhii apne dil ka haal jan na hota hai naa to ap kii hi post padh lete hai....sach...Sanju! muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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29th June 2004, 08:27 PM
hazaar Gam the merii zindagii akelii thii
Khushii jahaa.N kii mere vaaste pahelii thii [pahelii=riddle] vo aaj bach ke nikalate hai.n mere saaye se ki mai.n ne jin ke liye Gam kii dhuup jhelii thii judaa hu_ii na kabhii mujh se gardish-e-dauraa.N merii hayaat kii bachapan se ye sahelii thii Sanjoo ji, Bahut acha kiya jo aapne yeh ghazal hum sab ke saath share ki.. bahut achi likhi hui hai.. Aaj aapse baat karke bahut acha laga.. khush rehna ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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29th June 2004, 09:40 PM
Sanjoo...
Tumhein heere chun ne kee aadat hai...bahut achhe... hazaar Gam the merii zindagii akelii thii Khushii jahaa.N kii mere vaaste pahelii thii vo aaj bach ke nikalate hai.n mere saaye se ki mai.n ne jin ke liye Gam kii dhuup jhelii thii cha.Dhaa rahe hai.n vo hii aaj aastii.n mujh par ki jin kii piiTh pe kal tak merii hathelii thii vo jhuk ke phir merii turbat pe kar rahe hai.n salaam isii adaa ne to "Mahir" kii jaan le lii thii Mahir jee ne yahan jo bayaan kiya usne 'paras' kee bhi jaan le li thhii... dua mein yaad rakhoongi tumhein paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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