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yadoo me bhashye rhakna - 25th December 2004, 07:07 PM
cha tha jise tut kar use pa na sake
ab to uski yadoo ka shahara hi rha gya
na jane kya baat hai bate bhi to nahi
kya hui khata humse bhtao agar to shi
khayalo me humesha aata hai uska akas ubhr
ase mere 'pyar'me kya rha gyi kashr
vo bana shavarna vo intzar karna
ab to vo sabhi baate rha gyi sapna
hui ho agar humse khata to maf karna
koi gum nahi jo mil na sako humse
bas aapni yadoo me bhshye rhakna
   
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29th December 2004, 09:31 PM
bahut khub. really beautiful


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30th December 2004, 02:54 PM
ab to vo sabhi baate rha gyi sapna
hui ho agar humse khata to maf karna
koi gum nahi jo mil na sako humse
bas aapni yadoo me bhshye rhakna

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Re: yadoo me bhashye rhakna - 30th December 2004, 04:54 PM
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Originally posted by chandni_jain
cha tha jise tut kar use pa na sake
ab to uski yadoo ka shahara hi rha gya
na jane kya baat hai bate bhi to nahi
kya hui khata humse bhtao agar to shi
khayalo me humesha aata hai uska akas ubhr
ase mere 'pyar'me kya rha gyi kashr
vo bana shavarna vo intzar karna
ab to vo sabhi baate rha gyi sapna
hui ho agar humse khata to maf karna
koi gum nahi jo mil na sako humse
bas aapni yadoo me bhshye rhakna
chandni ...

bohat khoob likha hai tumne ek bar phir ... jiske liye tum mujhe acchi lagti ho ... bohat seedhe aur sadhe lafzo main byan kiya hai .... meri daad teh dil se kabool karo ...

door tumse aaj phir koi saya hai...
jo tha apna wahi aaj paraya hai ...
hum duaon main denge tumhe "saccha_pyar"
ki hogi khata, par dil to lagaya hai ...

yahi kuch chota mota likh paya ...

aapka apna ....

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30th December 2004, 05:00 PM
hi

nice wording ....

keep it up ....


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hi - 31st December 2004, 11:28 AM
hi rohinji aapka bhut sukariya jo aapne humare kalm ko pada or reaply bhi kiya tnx
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hi - 31st December 2004, 11:32 AM
hi pulkitji aapka bhut bhut sukariya
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