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Guzra huaa zamana -
1st August 2007, 04:56 PM
Salaam doston, Aaj firn ek chhoti si koshish ki hai kuchh likhne ki, ummeed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko pasand aayegi....aapke jawabon ka muntazir.... Door bahut door se ek awaaz aksar sunaai deti hai. main bhi aksar bhagta tha us awaaz ke peechhe. Duniya walon ne pagal kaha,deewana kaha sab kuchh sah gaya faqt us awaaz ke liye. woh meri chahat thi meri zindagi thi. bada gumaan tha mujhe apni mohabbat per. per WAQT ke haathon kaun bach saka hai. WAQT ne hamare saath aisa khel khela. apni chahat pe jitna bhi gumaan tha sara ka sara zameen pe aaker dher ho gaya. Door bahut door se ek awaaz aaj bhi sunaai deti hai. main aaj bhi bhagta hoon us awaaz ke peechhe magar bematlab. Jawed...  |
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1st August 2007, 06:51 PM
salaam jawed ji,aapko pehli pada hai, very talentd. ehsaas to vakai aapke bahut gehre hain. dheere dheere aapki kalam aur b acha likhegi. koshish karte rahein. apni chahat pe jitna bhi gumaan thasara ka sara zameen pe aaker dher ho gaya.above sher was my fav. really good.khush rahein,aapka dostmanish
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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heelo -
1st August 2007, 09:51 PM
keep it up
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