door hokar kaha jayege

[Parwaazz]

Hum aap ke dil se door hokar kaha jayege
Mouj hai sahil se door hokar kaha jayege

Gham rahega key Aap ki enayat na huyi
Par hum mehfil se door hokar kaha jayege

Chale kadam hamare kahi bhi aye Khuda
Aakhir manzil se door hokar kaha jayege

Kuchh waqt do unhe woh laut kar aayege
Mouj hai sahil se door hokar kaha jayege

Hona hai halaal aapke hi haatho hume to
Apne hasee qatil se door hokar kaha jayege

[ISHK EK IBADAT]

Originally Posted by Parwaazz

Hum aap ke dil se door hokar kaha jayege
Mouj hai sahil se door hokar kaha jayege

Gham rahega key Aap ki enayat na huyi
Par hum mehfil se door hokar kaha jayege

Chale kadam hamare kahi bhi aye Khuda
Aakhir manzil se door hokar kaha jayege

Kuchh waqt do unhe woh laut kar aayege
Mouj hai sahil se door hokar kaha jayege

Hona hai halaal aapke hi haatho hume to
Apne hasee qatil se door hokar kaha jayege

parwaaj bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob har sher lajawaab hai bhai ye gtm me jeet ka haq rakhti thi Matla to itna khoob hai ki dil se daad baar baar nikal rahi hai
duaon ke saath bas yun hi likhte raho yahi dua hai

[naresh_mehra110]

Hona hai halaal aapke hi haatho hume to
Apne hasee qatil se door hokar kaha jayege


Its too good.........parwaaz Ji.........Bahut badiya.....dil se daad !

Kash ! aap isse GTM me post karte ........khair ....

[Taish]

parwaazz sahab ko mera salaam,

janaab khayal ahche lage par do cheezeN kehna chahunga, ek to radeef itna lamba istemaal mat kijiye, ye khayal ko thoda daba deta hai, aur aapne ek h line ko do sheroN me hoo-ba-hoo stemal kiya hai, kosish kijiye ki hoo-ba hoo lines repeat na hoN, umeed karta huN aage v aapko padhne ka mauka yuNhi milta rahega, waise agar meri kisi v bat ka aapko bura lage to mafi ka talabgaar rahunga...!!

[Parwaazz]

ISHK EK IBADAT
RADHE RADHE

Jee aapka bahot bahot shukriya..........

[sajid_ghayel]

Nice work.....................