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dur rehkar bhi sada rehti hai,mujhko thame hue bahein uski -
8th February 2005, 05:25 PM
hi friends. kuch doston ne itna majhboor kiya ki na chahte hue bhi mein aaj yahan is section mein ek kalam likh rahi hoo. i hope u all love reading it.though i m know i m not gud in it but the way u all boost up my moral, i m trying here hard to be up to ur levels.
chehra mere tha nighahein uski khamoshi mein bhi woh baatein uski mere chehre par gazal likhti gayi sher kehti hui aankhein uski shok lamhon ka pata dene lagi tej hoti hui saanse uski aise mausam bhi guzare humne subhah jab aapni thi,shaamein uski dyaan mein uske yeh aalam tha kabhi aankh metaab{chand}ki,yaadein uski rang joinda{khoji}wo,aaye to sahi phool to phool hai,shakhein uski faaisla mauj-e-hawa ne likhaa aandhiyaan meri , baharein uski khud pe bhi khulti na ho jiski nazar janta kaun zabane uski neend is soch se tooti aksar kis tarah kat ti hai raatein uski door rehkar bhi sada rehti hai mujhko thame hue bahein uski! |
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Bahut khoob -
8th February 2005, 05:46 PM
Bahut hi behtreen ....Jasleen aapki ye poori ki poori rachna bahut hi pasand aayi.
yooNhi likhte rahiyega. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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8th February 2005, 05:58 PM
Hi Jasleen,
Beautidul thoughts. I loved reading it. Hope you post more of such poetries. khud pe bhi khulti na ho jiski nazar janta kaun zabane uski neend is soch se tooti aksar kis tarah kat ti hai raatein uski door rehkar bhi sada rehti hai mujhko thame hue bahein uski! really liked these lines Thanks Rohin |
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8th February 2005, 06:09 PM
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jasleen, dukh k sath kahna padta hai ke tumne aaj fir galat rasta apnaya. pahlay bhi tum galat thhi maine sath diya thha yah soch kar k galti ho jaati hai..... sudharne ka mauka milna chahiye par ............ afsos.............. http://www.urdupoetry.com/parvin22.html parveen sakir ki gajal................... kaise kar sakta hai koi is tarah......... bahut hi afsos huaa hai aaj aur humari isi site par khushi ne bhi yah post ki hai ............ parveen ji k naam se hi ......... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...thaa+nigaahe.n sirf afsos........................ ab tumhari post par aana mere liye nahi hoga............. meena |
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8th February 2005, 06:52 PM
hi jasleen,
well srry to know abt ur post buddy.u always wanted me to reply u here as i always used to love reading ur words.today after posting my first attempt i saw ur this post. well buddy my suggestion to u is to stop writing. no one can understand ur mentaql condition at the moment. i know u have no such intensions to write post with ur name. i hv checked ur dairy. i know sumtimes u love to write wat other shayars hv wrote, bt one mistake u dun write who is it written by. well buddy i wud suggest u tht stop writing any futher as this place is just gonna bring more tears instead of trying to understand wat mental state r u going through.i too posted one today bt no more on this site anymore as here ppl r here just to pulls one leg.cya soon online. till then bye |
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8th February 2005, 08:19 PM
hi friends,
this is for all those who view this post of jasleen. i just met her n told her about this post. she herself cud not reply ahead as she is hospital at the moment n says tht i had no intensions to hurt any one. i nvr knew abt it, bt its my second fault n its not granted any more. so the only thing left is tht forget the name jasleen for ever. i m srry i hv to post all this as she herself is not in tht condition and wud take some days to recover frm her illness. she only said tht plz i wud love if no ones reply further here as it wud hurt her more n said tht i back out for ever. u wont see me again on this site. wish u all best of luck, specially to rohin, pulkit, lokesh, shashi.who had been very supportive throughout. wud really miss them all. thx all of u |
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8th February 2005, 09:23 PM
Us apne se bhi bacho ey Chaand,
Jo khataaoN me tumhara hausla barhata ho, Us dushman ka ehsaan maano ey Chaand, Jo tumhe roj kuchh nayi seekh de jaata ho. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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8th February 2005, 09:57 PM
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mere chaand, .................................... tumhari meena |
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9th February 2005, 08:36 PM
meena di,
aapne jo kya sahi kiya. i dont deny this. but aapne kya yeh socha ki isse aage kya hoga. things flamed up like anything. jo dekho uska ek tamasha bana raha hai. aman ji ne to kya khoob tarif ke phool bande jasleen ki shaan mein. its disgusting. mere ko koi aise likhe mere liye doobh marne wali baat hogi. mana ki us se galti hui hai bt didi no man is perfect in this world. ek baat aur kahum i know i shud not hv replied u in open , bt for my friend i m forced too. didi jas aapki bahut respect karti hai. aur bado ka badapan isi mein hota hai ki bacha koi galti kare to usko sudhara jaye na ki bhare bazzar mein aise bola jaye. the way aman ji rected to her post is smameful. aaj to mujhe dukh hua pad kar. i dun knw hw will jasleen take all this. i am srry if i hurted u. though i had no such intensions. but aaj mein aapni dost ke liye bahut dukhi hoon. u call it a family. srry nthing like tht. |
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10th February 2005, 04:55 PM
meena didi,
this is my last reply to u. i dont know whether u wud read it or not, bt still ek koshish. didi iam sorry. just this much. leaving this site forever. thx aapne yahan tak saaath diya. i really respect u. suhavi ki taraf se mein mafi mangti hoon. plz excuse me. ab kabhi nahi aaonghi kisi ka dil dukhane ke liye. thx so much for ur support. |
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