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Love Kabhi Tujhe Paana Hai Kabhi Tujhe Khona Hai - 28th July 2014, 02:41 PM

Tujhe Kabhi Paana Hai Kabhi Khona Hai
Waqt Bewaqt Tujhe Rozz Aana Hai
Chahe Haqikat Me Chahe Khawabon Me
Chahe Akele Me Chahe Bhari Bheed Me
Tujhe Bus Yun Har Pal Mujhe Satana Hai
Kabhi Khud Ko Dekhte Hai Kabhi Toote Patton Ko
Tujhe Bhul Kar Khud Ko Mitana Hai
Raat Ki Khamosi Jaane Kitni Lambi Hai
Har Aahat Bhi Ajanbi Si Hai
Rote Rote Chalta Hai Koi
Jaise Dard Ka Koi Paimana Hai
Har Sham Wahi Tanhai Wahi Bhuji Si Rosni
Bus Barste Badalon Me Gum Ko Sajana Hai...!!


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28th July 2014, 02:55 PM

Thanxxxxx n I Know Nazneen Ji But Wo Maine Isse Rhyme Type Me Likha Hai......................................!!!
   
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Okkkk Removed 4th Line......................................I respect Ur Opinion........!!!!
   
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Love 28th July 2014, 08:20 PM

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Tujhe Kabhi Paana Hai Kabhi Khona Hai
Waqt Bewaqt Tujhe Rozz Aana Hai
Chahe Haqikat Me Chahe Khawabon Me
Chahe Akele Me Chahe Bhari Bheed Me
Tujhe Bus Yun Har Pal Mujhe Satana Hai
Kabhi Khud Ko Dekhte Hai Kabhi Toote Patton Ko
Tujhe Bhul Kar Khud Ko Mitana Hai
Raat Ki Khamosi Jaane Kitni Lambi Hai
Har Aahat Bhi Ajanbi Si Hai
Rote Rote Chalta Hai Koi
Jaise Dard Ka Koi Paimana Hai
Har Sham Wahi Tanhai Wahi Bhuji Si Rosni
Bus Barste Badalon Me Gum Ko Sajana Hai...!!


bahut khoob sudhir bhai...........radhe radhe


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29th July 2014, 03:41 AM

very very nice Sudhir jii,,,

Daad hi daad,,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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30th July 2014, 02:57 PM

Thanksssss Bhai.............................................. .Rahde Radhe..............


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30th July 2014, 03:00 PM

Thanx Hasan Bhai............................................!! !


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very very nice Sudhir jii,,,

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30th July 2014, 03:14 PM

bahot hi khubsurat nazm hai, Sudhirbhai....

daad qubul kijiye



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30th July 2014, 04:28 PM

Waah!! A beautiful sensitive poem !! Bahaut khoob !!


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31st July 2014, 02:12 PM

Thanxxxxxx Aadeil Bhai.............................................. ....!!

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Thanxxxxxxxxx Zaraa Bhai.............................................. ...........
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