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i am not wrong for loving a person like you -
27th December 2005, 07:07 AM
I know I have not been ur first choice
I can not be best too I am failed on your taste too For that today I want to apologize When we met you were so alone, You were not interested to make friends You were hurt and sad coz ur old love end I wanted to be with you that time I wanted to support you I dnt know how developed this feeling and emotions I dnt know when you become my inspiration This is not your fault but my own. Plz let me be with you I dnt want to be so alone I would give you everything everything at all, I want to be with you to catch every tear that might fall. I mean every word which I say. I love you so much please don't go away. I may not be your idol for life long, as you see, but only for you I am trying my best I can be. I love you even more than you know, Plz dnt leave me, you're in my heart wherever I go. Please kiss me and hold me so tight, encourage me that things will be all right, you the one i always wanted in my life you made my all feelings alive for this i have waited so long for you only my heart sing song A true person I am, as I always will be, If I have hurted your feelings please forgive me. Give me one more chance, I want to be with you Plz dnt say no , I don't ever want to lose you. you are the one who makes all of my dreams come true plz say I am not wrong for loving a person like you. 
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27th December 2005, 09:11 AM
wonderful shraddha..i loved each n every line of it...well there was a time when i had asked this same question"if i was wrong for loving you"but now i dont ask anymore coz i know that there is no answer to this.anywaz u have done a great job with words.well done...keep writing.take care.
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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27th December 2005, 10:42 AM
u were simply outstanding. i liked it as anything. u r a great gift to the site. u will reach the heights in poems...........................keep writing
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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27th December 2005, 10:58 AM
aapki kavita padhte hi dil se bas yahi nikla woooowwww.graet job shraddha ji.keep posting.aur apna khayal rakhna.
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hi!! -
27th December 2005, 11:02 AM
Shradhha...
After a long long time sumthing on this site has touched my heart so beautifully!....U'v written it so nicely...really the flow..d continuety...is so well captured...it gives a awsome feeling! keep it up dear! tc komal |
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27th December 2005, 12:17 PM
Fabulous.
an outstanding creation shradhha... beautifuly described yourself with amazing feelings. take care! |
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Kya baat hai -
27th December 2005, 12:29 PM
Keep it up
I am proud of you And congrats on your new job |
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27th December 2005, 04:55 PM
Hi shrdh,
U've expressed urself so beautifullly...This poem has an innocence about it...pure feelings...I loved it...! Plz do keep writing...TC..! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th December 2005, 07:23 PM
hey dear shradhdha...
wonderful yaar...really nice...i'm sure u can improve further...n hope to c even more wonderful posts frm u...n by the way...ur signature line is amazin take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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farhana ji -
28th December 2005, 06:54 AM
farhana ji ,
aap aayi aur meri poem padi iske liye sukriya.aapka aana hi mere liye badi baat hai .aapko pasand aayi bhaut khushi hui jaankar .aise hi aati rahiyega aapki shrdhha
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DEar mehul -
28th December 2005, 06:57 AM
aap mere saath har pal hain aur aapke hone se housla bhi hai .mera saath nibhane ka sukriya mehul .aur haan bhaut badi baat kahe di aapne.yaha par bhaut log hain jinko padkar dil ro padta hai itne schhe zazbaat aur sunder words hote hain .mujhe to abhi bhi bhaut kuch seekhna hai .mainene to apni dil ki feelings ko likhne ki kosish ki thi .aapko pasand aayi achha laga uhi aate rahna .
aapki pyari dost shrdh
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DEar shoaib -
28th December 2005, 07:00 AM
dear shoaib
thnx for reading and supporting me .aap logon ke saath k karan hi main apni feelings share kar paati hoon.mere zazbaat pasand aaye sunkar bhaut khushi hui aate rahiyega aapki dost shrdh
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komal ji -
28th December 2005, 07:06 AM
komal ji ,
phile to main aapka thnx kahna chahungi ki aap aayi mujhe pada aur aapko mere jazbaat pasand aaye .achha laga jaankar .hounsla afajaae ka sukriya aati rahiyega.apna khyaal bhi rakhiyega aapki shrdh
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DEar parul -
28th December 2005, 07:08 AM
parul ji ,
aapka aana hamesha se hi achha laga hai aur mere liye hamesha hi ek support raha hai ,bhaut achha lagta hai jab aapki feelings ko koi to samjhe aur use mahssos kare pasand kare sach aap sabko padkar bhaut khushi milti hai aise hi aati rahiye . thnx shrdh
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28th December 2005, 07:12 AM
pulkit ji ,
sukriya meri baat ka maan rakhne k liye ,aap aaye mere liye bhaut badi baat hai .aur main to abhi seekhna chahti hoon .kitne aise ehssas hai jo man mai hokar bhi likh nahi paate hain unhe likhne ke liye kabhi sabad nahi milte to kabhi housla . aap logon ke saath se mujhe puri umeed hai main kuch seekh paaungi . thnx for coming plz be with me to correct and support aapki fan shrddha
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28th December 2005, 07:16 AM
DEar
kartik ji aapko pasand aayi .bhaut khushi hui jaakar .aapki baat maankar improve karne ki kosish kar rahi hoon .bus aap saath den aur samay samay par batate rahe ki kaha keese i can improve . aap aaye bhaut achha laga .aapki poem really touchy hoti hai .moment of love "is one of them made me cry .really gud aapko mera chota sa try pasand aaya izazat afajaae ka sukriya aise hi aate rahiyega aapki dost shrdh
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DEar sandeep -
28th December 2005, 07:22 AM
hi mint
nice to see u here . thnx for supporting me .really feeling wonderfull u came and read me.thnx for cuming plz keep coming urs friend shrddha
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27th January 2006, 05:42 PM
uoon laga ek meera na ek kanha se prem ka prsad manga hai bahut sundar bahut achee bahut komal bahut nazuk
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27th January 2006, 05:49 PM
heyy shradhaa...very nice...
the best of wht u've written take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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27th January 2006, 05:54 PM
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This is a really beautiful kalam by you. Keep it up and and keep sharing your feelings with us. Take Care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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aapne meri choti si kosish ko itni badhi izazat di , uske liye main aabhari hoon shrdh
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28th January 2006, 08:17 AM
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keep writing!!!!  »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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Re: i am not wrong for loving a person like you -
29th January 2006, 12:51 PM
you the one i always wanted in my life
you made my all feelings alive for this i have waited so long for you only my heart sing song A true person I am, as I always will be, If I have hurted your feelings please forgive me. Give me one more chance, I want to be with you Plz dnt say no , I don't ever want to lose you. you are the one who makes all of my dreams come true plz say I am not wrong for loving a person like you. waaah kyaa kehne aap ke ..... aap ki likhi huyee har baat hame apni si lagati hai.... aise lagta hai ki aap ki naarazagi wali baaten bhi ho isme..... aap yu hi likhte rahiye or hame yu hi aap ko padne ka mouka milta rahe........... ............................... FRIENDSHIP IS LIKE ONION..... WHICH HAS MANY LAYERS IN IT, IT ADDS TASTE IN YOUR LIFE. BUT IF U TRY TO CUT IT, YOU WILL HAVE TEARS IN YOUR EYES......  JAISE LOUT JATI HAIN LAHREN KINARA DEKHKAR.... TUM KANDHA NA DENA MERE JANAZE KO.......................... KAHIN FIR ZINDA NA HO JAU TERA SAHARA DEKHKAR..... |
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29th January 2006, 05:54 PM
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i am sure that i will break this limit soon . and will achive new things . thnx for being my side shrdh
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29th January 2006, 05:56 PM
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DEar mukhra nice to see u here .u read me i m glad thnx for coming shrdh
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i am glad that u liked my poem ,nice to see u here ,hope that i will be there to support me in future too. shrdh
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hi -
3rd February 2006, 02:18 PM
very-very good.ab shabd anhi hain tariff k liyeeeeee
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hi thats a real good one keep up the spirit
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glad to see u here ,tumhe achhi lagi khushi hui shrdh
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4th February 2006, 06:54 PM
m so late that i have no new words for its praise every1 has said everything.frankly u r much better in xpressing in english compared to hindi.wud say only 1 thing n thats keep writing.
GHAYAL ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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5th February 2006, 06:44 PM
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achha laga aapko yaha dekhkar umeed hai aap uhi mere housala badhane k liye aati rahengi thnx for appreciation shrdh
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u r late but tum aaye ye hi bhaut badhi baat hai tumne padha bhaut achha laga dil ko achha laga i will sure try to write in english more thnx shrdh
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