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Originally Posted by Ek Ghazal
Mere Pyaare Dosto
Aap sab ko purvi ka aadaab/ namaskaar….
Aaj dard ki mahefil meiN apni ek nayi koshish aap sab ki nazar kar rahi hooN.
aap ki raa'ye ki muntazir......
Is zaalim duniya meiN kaun apne? kaun begaane hai?
Kabhi lagte ajnabi, to kabhi jaane-pahechaane hai
Na fikr kisi ko kisi baat ki, na khalti hai tanhaayi bhi
Sabr-e-gham bhulaane ko jaate woh maikhaane hai
Labo.N pe muskaan sajaaye firta hai har koii yahan
Sajaate hai mahefileN aur ruho.N mein viraane hai
Dilo.N se khelane ka haasil hai kya khoob hunar
Lunt kar jahan kisika, kahete khudko deewaane hai
Chhod dete hai jahan per Maut bhi bahetar lage
Khured ke rakhte hai yeh zakhm jitney puraane hai
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purviji......namaste
bahut khoobsurat ghazal sunaii hai apne................
ashaar to sare acche aur saaf hai hi adaa bhi acche hue mere khayal se......
ek jagah zara laga ki jumla nahi ban paya......is line me
Sabr-e-gham bhulaane ko jaate woh maikhaane hai
shayad sabr -e-gham apke context me fit nahi hota dikta.........mai magar ,,ofcourse,galat bhi ho sakta hu........
baki meri daad hajir hai.....bahut acche
regards