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Mulaaqat Tum Sey - 18th November 2005, 10:21 PM

once i heard a song don't remember which song it was, but after listening to it, i wrote this.........

hooi hai jab sey mulaaqaat tum sey
meri zindagi, zindagi ban gayi hai

merey dil mai ab tum rehney lagi ho
teri dosti, aashaqi ban gayi hai

kahi mai jab sey hai dil ki baat
teri be-rukhi, be-khudi ban gayi hai

mujhey dekh key tera palkain jhukaana
shaarat teri saadagi ban gayi hai

dua hai meri, tu sada khush rahe
teri khushi, ab meri ban gayi hai

take care


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nice - 19th November 2005, 12:59 PM

Pad kar samajh mein aaya ke "Dil ki lagi" "Dillagi" se kaise shuru hoti hai; Tumhari is nazm par prerna apna sar jhukati hai. keep it up.


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19th November 2005, 05:58 PM

dear STAR
u have written very good
keep writing
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21st November 2005, 02:29 PM

dear Prerna,
khushi hoi jaan kar key yeh aap ko achi lagi, yoonhi parhtey rahiye
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21st November 2005, 02:30 PM

Dear chamrz
thanx for the appriciation, bass yoonhi parhtey rahiye
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