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Zindagi Aur Kinaara
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Zindagi Aur Kinaara - 24th November 2005, 06:20 PM

apni aik aur poem key saath aaya hoon umeed hai pasand ki jahey gi aur agar kohi kami baishi reh gayi ho to plzz correct me.

Socha naa tha kinaara mujhey mil jahey gaa
jab zindagi ki kashti, meri doobney lagi ho

Zindagi sey kohi kiyoonkar naata tor de
Jab zindagi khud sey Usey Dhoondhney lagi ho

Wo pyaar kiyoonkar chupaaya jaa sakey
Jab aankh hi khud sey bolney lagi ho

Manzilon kaa Taaiyun kohi kiyoonkar karey
Jab manzilain hi raahi dhoondhney lagi hon

Us kinaarey ko kohi kiya mitaahey gaa
Jab lehrain hi moo morney lagi hon

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26th November 2005, 07:44 PM

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28th November 2005, 06:28 PM

Thanx for encouragement..........
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28th November 2005, 09:36 PM

bahaut acchi koshish hai star.....yuhin likhte raho aur mehfil sajate raho....bye


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28th November 2005, 11:19 PM

Socha naa tha kinaara mujhey mil jahey gaa
jab zindagi ki kashti, meri doobney lagi ho

Zindagi sey kohi kiyoonkar naata tor de
Jab zindagi khud sey Usey Dhoondhney lagi ho

Nice words...!


Wo pyaar kiyoonkar chupaaya jaa sakey
Jab aankh hi khud sey bolney lagi ho

Manzilon kaa Taaiyun kohi kiyoonkar karey
Jab manzilain hi raahi dhoondhney lagi hon

Us kinaarey ko kohi kiya mitaahey gaa
Jab lehrain hi moo morney lagi hon

Bahut khoob....!

Bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne.. yun hi likhte rahiye...!


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