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मत मारो उड जाने दो mat maaro uD jaane do -
8th March 2011, 11:19 AM
Happy Women Day
मत मारो उड जाने दो
चिडीया को चहचहाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो
उसका भी हक दाने पर है
उसको भी तुम खाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो............
नर और मादा के चक्कर में
मादा को मत मारो तुम
नन्ही मुन्नी चिडीया को
प्यार से जरा पुकारो तुम
कुदरत का संगीत है वो
उसको मधुर तराने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो ..............
चिडीया को जब जन्म मिले
मिलके जशन मनाओ तुम
चन्दा मामा के जैसी है
लोरी उसे सुनाओ तुम
खुलके वो परवाज करे
मुंडेरों पे गाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो..............
(Parveen Komal )
mat maaro uD jaane do
chiDeeyaa ko chahachahaane do
mat maaro uD jaane do
usakaa bhee hak daane par hai
usako bhee tum khaane do
mat maaro uD jaane do............
nar aur maadaa ke chakkar me.n
maadaa ko mat maaro tum
nanhee munnee chiDeeyaa ko
pyaar se jaraa pukaaro tum
kudarat kaa sa.ngeet hai vo
usako madhur taraane do
mat maaro uD jaane do ..............
chiDeeyaa ko jab janm mile
milake jashan manaao tum
chandaa maamaa ke jaisee hai
loree use sunaao tum
khulake vo parawaaj kare
mu.nDero.n pe gaane do
mat maaro uD jaane do..............
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8th March 2011, 12:14 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by parveen komal
Happy Women Day
मत मारो उड जाने दो
चिडीया को चहचहाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो
उसका भी हक दाने पर है
उसको भी तुम खाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो............
नर और मादा के चक्कर में
मादा को मत मारो तुम
नन्ही मुन्नी चिडीया को
प्यार से जरा पुकारो तुम
कुदरत का संगीत है वो
उसको मधुर तराने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो ..............
चिडीया को जब जन्म मिले
मिलके जशन मनाओ तुम
चन्दा मामा के जैसी है
लोरी उसे सुनाओ तुम
खुलके वो परवाज करे
मुंडेरों पे गाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो..............
(Parveen Komal )
mat maaro uD jaane do
chiDeeyaa ko chahachahaane do
mat maaro uD jaane do
usakaa bhee hak daane par hai
usako bhee tum khaane do
mat maaro uD jaane do............
nar aur maadaa ke chakkar me.n
maadaa ko mat maaro tum
nanhee munnee chiDeeyaa ko
pyaar se jaraa pukaaro tum
kudarat kaa sa.ngeet hai vo
usako madhur taraane do
mat maaro uD jaane do ..............
chiDeeyaa ko jab janm mile
milake jashan manaao tum
chandaa maamaa ke jaisee hai
loree use sunaao tum
khulake vo parawaaj kare
mu.nDero.n pe gaane do
mat maaro uD jaane do..............
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Komal ji, jitnaa komal subject hai, utni hi komaltaa se aapne kavita mai use samaa liyaa hai .........
bahut badhiyaa... bas aise hi likhiye .........
subject aur presentation . dil choo gaye
repss meri taraf se ......!!
Gurdas ji ka ek gana yaad aa gaya
kuch line share karta HUN
Dhee ghare jamme ta buraa kyuN manande lokki
puttraaN layee mangde duaaVaaN kyuN
Dheeyaan hattho kho ke maavaaN putta nu khwaadiyaan
dheeyaaN nu paraiyaaN kahan mavaaN kyuN
dheeyaaN hoke dheeyaaN nu hi poun fitkaaraaN dheeyaaN
lath jaan buriyaaN balavaaN
PairaaN chi panjebaaN, hatthaaN vich chudiyaaN
Vehre vivh rehn chankoundiyaaN
jive kise devte di aarti utare koe
suba-shaam rahen goundiyaaN
sariyaan dheeyaan de dukh lag jaan mennu rabba
inhaa nu na laggan havaawaN
baabul tere da dil kare dheye meriye
shukriyaa
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8th March 2011, 12:24 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by parveen komal
Happy Women Day
मत मारो उड जाने दो
चिडीया को चहचहाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो
उसका भी हक दाने पर है
उसको भी तुम खाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो............
नर और मादा के चक्कर में
मादा को मत मारो तुम
नन्ही मुन्नी चिडीया को
प्यार से जरा पुकारो तुम
कुदरत का संगीत है वो
उसको मधुर तराने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो ..............
चिडीया को जब जन्म मिले
मिलके जशन मनाओ तुम
चन्दा मामा के जैसी है
लोरी उसे सुनाओ तुम
खुलके वो परवाज करे
मुंडेरों पे गाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो..............
(Parveen Komal )
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radhe radhe
bahut hi komal ehsaas pesh kiye hai ... khaas mauke par ... ek asardaar kavita .... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...
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इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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8th March 2011, 11:19 PM
thanks vikaas bhai . apka new getup bhi bahut pasand aya
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8th March 2011, 11:26 PM
shukria vikas bhai . aapka new getup bhi kabil e tareef hai
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9th March 2011, 02:42 AM
ChiDiya Ki Upmaa MeN Lipt .... Vishye Ki Gambhirtaa Ko .. Bahut Acche Se Aadaa Kiyaa Hai Kavita MeN ..... Komal Ji ........
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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9th March 2011, 11:04 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by parveen komal
Happy Women Day
मत मारो उड जाने दो
चिडीया को चहचहाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो
उसका भी हक दाने पर है
उसको भी तुम खाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो............
नर और मादा के चक्कर में
मादा को मत मारो तुम
नन्ही मुन्नी चिडीया को
प्यार से जरा पुकारो तुम
कुदरत का संगीत है वो
उसको मधुर तराने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो ..............
चिडीया को जब जन्म मिले
मिलके जशन मनाओ तुम
चन्दा मामा के जैसी है
लोरी उसे सुनाओ तुम
खुलके वो परवाज करे
मुंडेरों पे गाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो..............
(Parveen Komal )
mat maaro uD jaane do
chiDeeyaa ko chahachahaane do
mat maaro uD jaane do
usakaa bhee hak daane par hai
usako bhee tum khaane do
mat maaro uD jaane do............
nar aur maadaa ke chakkar me.n
maadaa ko mat maaro tum
nanhee munnee chiDeeyaa ko
pyaar se jaraa pukaaro tum
kudarat kaa sa.ngeet hai vo
usako madhur taraane do
mat maaro uD jaane do ..............
chiDeeyaa ko jab janm mile
milake jashan manaao tum
chandaa maamaa ke jaisee hai
loree use sunaao tum
khulake vo parawaaj kare
mu.nDero.n pe gaane do
mat maaro uD jaane do..............
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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10th March 2011, 07:19 AM
thanks naresh bhai apka : kaise hain aap .
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19th March 2011, 08:03 PM
Radhika ji , apka bahut bahut shukria pasand karne ke lie
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Parveen jee,
aap ke ehsaas behad achchhe lage aur sachaaii se sarobar...... daad qubuul keejiye...
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bahut bahut shukria mayank ji apka . dil se shukarguzar hoo.n
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thanks . to all
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25th July 2011, 09:34 AM
Parveen jee:
namaste!
dil ko Chhu gayii aapki yeh koShiSh.. dil se daad!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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24th August 2011, 10:11 AM
CHIDYA.............................Ko ud jane do
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19th April 2012, 10:45 PM
चिडीया को चहचहाने दो
मत मारो उड जाने दो
thanks radhika
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