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Haaey paisaa - 2nd May 2012, 11:04 AM

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2nd May 2012, 11:32 AM

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हाऐ पैसा


आज काल कित
ना जरूरी है पैसा
जिन्दा रहने की मज़बूरी है पैसा

किसी के लिए वक़त दो का निवाला
किसी के लिए मगरूरी है पैसा

कहीं सूखी रोटी कहीं सूखा चिबडा
कहीं चिक्कन चिल्ली तन्दुरी है पैसा

सर्द खून करता सफ़ेद कर देता
बना देता रिश्तों मे दूरी है पैसा

ता उम्र कोमल न हो पाए पूरी
उम्मीद ऐसी अधूरी है पैसा
Parveen Komal ji, bahut pyaari rachna hai aapki. Kuch panktiyon mein jo vyangya kiya gaya hai wo bahut hi teekha aur gambheer vishay hai. Aapki soch ko daad. Aise hi likhte rahiye. Balki yoon kahunga ki aur behtar likhiye.

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bahut sundarta se paise ke sacchai ko byan kiya h komal jee, lazawab , daad.



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bahut sundarta se paise ke sacchai ko byan kiya h komal jee, lazawab , daad.



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6th May 2012, 03:37 PM

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आज काल कित
ना जरूरी है पैसा
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किसी के लिए वक़त दो का निवाला
किसी के लिए मगरूरी है पैसा

कहीं सूखी रोटी कहीं सूखा चिबडा
कहीं चिक्कन चिल्ली तन्दुरी है पैसा

सर्द खून करता सफ़ेद कर देता
बना देता रिश्तों मे दूरी है पैसा

ता उम्र कोमल न हो पाए पूरी
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Bahut Khoob ... Praveen Ji !

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आज काल कितना जरूरी है पैसा
जिन्दा रहने की मज़बूरी है पैसा

किसी के लिए वक़त दो का निवाला
किसी के लिए मगरूरी है पैसा

कहीं सूखी रोटी कहीं सूखा चिबडा
कहीं चिक्कन चिल्ली तन्दुरी है पैसा

सर्द खून करता सफ़ेद कर देता
बना देता रिश्तों मे दूरी है पैसा

ता उम्र कोमल न हो पाए पूरी
उम्मीद ऐसी अधूरी है पैसा

parveen ji .... apkaa qalaam badaa dilchasp aur entertaining lagaa.

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Praveen ji, bahut sahi khana hai aapne............!


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