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To Kiya Hota - 22nd November 2005, 04:01 PM

yeh mai ney bohot pehley likhi thi umeed hai pasand aaye gi

Hum naa bichartey to kiya hota
Jo ho chukaa wo naa hota

Agar tum aaj merey saath hotey
Mai bhi thora, hansaa hota

Haal-e-dil sab nahi keh paatey
Aey Kaash mai ney kaha hota

Mehboob sab ko nahi milta
Aey kaash mujhey milaa hota

Hum bhi kiya pachtaahain Adil
Naa Pyaar kabhi hooa hota


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22nd November 2005, 04:28 PM

kitna ahcha hota agar maine,
khela nahi zindagi ka jooa hota.

bahut ahcha likha hai star ji.aap bas yunhi likhte rahiye.khayal ahche lage mujhe aapke.

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23rd November 2005, 12:59 PM

Hi...

achha likha hai aapne.. likhate rahiye


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25th November 2005, 09:28 PM

very nice.. liked it a lot..

ab sochte hain tum laut te bhi
to kaunsa bhala hota
jab chale gaye tab akele the
gar aate bhi to tanha hota...

lovely.. keep writing... aapka naam Adil hai...?
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25th November 2005, 09:43 PM

very nice.. liked it a lot..

ab sochte hain tum laut te bhi
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lovely.. keep writing... aapka naam Adil hai...?
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26th November 2005, 02:46 PM

Jinab ghayal sahab
shukriya nawazish key ney is kalam ko pasand keeya, hamey umeed hai aap aahinda bhi hamey perhtey rahain gey
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26th November 2005, 02:48 PM

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Aap kaa bohot bohot shukriya key aap ney hamarey kalaam ko saraaha, meri haesha yah koshish hoti hai key acha sey acha likh pahoon aap ki duahon kaa talabgaar
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26th November 2005, 02:50 PM

Mohtarma Gudiya ji
thanx a lot for reading my poem, and encouraging me.
ji mera naam Adil hi hai
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