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Na jala too mombattiyan....
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Love Na jala too mombattiyan.... - 26th April 2013, 04:31 PM

desh mein jis tareeke ke haalaat chal rahe hain, abhikuch dino pehle december mein delhi mein ek rape case saamne aaya tha, aur abhi ye bacchi ke saath, in ke alawa bhi pata nahin kitne hote hain, aaye din hum news paper mein aur tv pe dekhte hain...inhi haalaaton ko dekhte hue kuch panktiyan dil se nikli hain........


Na bujha too battiyan,
Na jala too mombattiyan
Jhank apne andar ek baar,
Dekh kahan hain galtiyan...

Kahan gaye cheer badane wale bhagwaan,
Kahan gaye asmat bachane wale krishna mahan,
Roj roj hote cheer haran se,
Kya kam pad gaye unke kapdon ka thaan...

Aaj yahan kal wahan hahakaar hua,
Aaj iska kal uska balaatkaar hua,
Chood do ginna ab unglion pe,
Aaj bahar to kal ghar mein shikaar hua...

kuch tv ka to kuch filmon ka haath batate hain,
kuch ladkiyon ke pehnaave ka dosh batate hain,
ye to tarika hai nimn maansikta ko chipane ka varna,
kahan log apne ko bhediya batate hain,

Jo kal tak ganda vichaar tha aaj charcha-e-bazaar hai,
Jo kal tak chupa tha aaj naachta sare baazaar hai,
Badta hee jayega ab ye na rukega,
Jo kal tak nazar mein tha aaj sasharir tayaar hai...

Pighalta hai mom aur jalta hai dhaga,
Betiyon ka baap rehta hai poori raat jaaga,
Koun jane fir kiski beti ke liye jalegi mombatti,
Kare to kya kare vo bechara abhaga....

Kuch to maa kee kokh mein aansuon tale dab gayin,
Bachi jo vo vehshi darindo kee bhent chad gayin,
Aadhi rehti hain zindagi bhar dari sehmi,
Baaki aadhi dahez kee aag mein zinda jal gayin,

Koun jaane in paapiyon kee aatma kahan soti hogi,
Na ho kisi kee behan beti, maa jarur hoti hogi,
Are ye neech harkat karne walon sun lo,
Koi roye na roye tumpe tumhari maa jarur roti hogi..

Balaatkariyon kee shikayat na karo balaatkariyon se,
Kya hoga sadak pe khade pradarshankariyon se,
Aage bad ke khud taang do sooli pe sabko,
Mat maango bheekh in bhikhaariyon se...



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30th April 2013, 01:57 PM

too much insenstivity that nobody like this.....abhi mohabbat kee hoti to kai reply aa jaate.,..



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30th April 2013, 02:29 PM

kuch tv ka to kuch filmon ka haath batate hain,
kuch ladkiyon ke pehnaave ka dosh batate hain,
ye to tarika hai nimn maansikta ko chipane ka varna,
kahan log apne ko bhediya batate hain,



behad umda likha hai aapne Aru bhai...!
na TV ka dosh hai na filmo ka aur na ladkyion ke kapdo ka (ab bhala 5 saal ki ladki ke kapde kya bure hone)...dosh hai aadmi ki gandi maansikta ka...dosh hai hamari sarkaar ka, jo aise darindoN ko faansi ke vajaye jail meiN daal kar rakh rhi hai, aise logo ko sar-e-aam faansi dena shuru kar do, dekhna kaise aise logoN ki akal thikane aati hai...!


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kuch tv ka to kuch filmon ka haath batate hain,
kuch ladkiyon ke pehnaave ka dosh batate hain,
ye to tarika hai nimn maansikta ko chipane ka varna,
kahan log apne ko bhediya batate hain,



behad umda likha hai aapne Aru bhai...!
na TV ka dosh hai na filmo ka aur na ladkyion ke kapdo ka (ab bhala 5 saal ki ladki ke kapde kya bure hone)...dosh hai aadmi ki gandi maansikta ka...dosh hai hamari sarkaar ka, jo aise darindoN ko faansi ke vajaye jail meiN daal kar rakh rhi hai, aise logo ko sar-e-aam faansi dena shuru kar do, dekhna kaise aise logoN ki akal thikane aati hai...!
Thanx sunita dii....aapne bilkul sahi kaha......par kya karein kuch haalaat aise ho gaye hain...kee kya batayein...



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thanx rajeev jee..............



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bahot acchii aur sacchi tasweer aapne pesh ki hai Aru bhai....

aaj desh ke jo halaata haiN wo sabke saamne hain aur chupaaane se nahi chuptii.. lekin kyaa kiya jaae... aam janta kamzor hai, aur unhe motivate karne jo log aaage aate hain unke peeche log lag jaate hain dabaane ki khatir.... le de kuch dino ka josh aur fir sab thandhaa...

khair ummeed par duniya kaayam hai.. ham bhi ummeed kayam rakhte hain ke desh ke in samkasyaaoN ka jald samadhan kiyaa jaae....

aapkii kavish behad pasand aayii... bas likhte raheiye.. apna khyaal rakhiye..

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bahot acchii aur sacchi tasweer aapne pesh ki hai Aru bhai....

aaj desh ke jo halaata haiN wo sabke saamne hain aur chupaaane se nahi chuptii.. lekin kyaa kiya jaae... aam janta kamzor hai, aur unhe motivate karne jo log aaage aate hain unke peeche log lag jaate hain dabaane ki khatir.... le de kuch dino ka josh aur fir sab thandhaa...

khair ummeed par duniya kaayam hai.. ham bhi ummeed kayam rakhte hain ke desh ke in samkasyaaoN ka jald samadhan kiyaa jaae....

aapkii kavish behad pasand aayii... bas likhte raheiye.. apna khyaal rakhiye..

Shaad...
Thanx a lot sameer bhai.....hum sabko apni soch badalni hogi..tabhi kuch ho sakta hai...hum aksar criminals ko dekhte hain par kabhi us mahol ko nahin dekhte jo criminal bana raha hai...jab tak vo mahol rahega tab tak criminal bante rahenge......



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Thanx a lot sameer bhai.....hum sabko apni soch badalni hogi..tabhi kuch ho sakta hai...hum aksar criminals ko dekhte hain par kabhi us mahol ko nahin dekhte jo criminal bana raha hai...jab tak vo mahol rahega tab tak criminal bante rahenge......
main aapki baat se poori tarah ittefaq rakhta hoon Aru bhai.. aur ummeed karta hoon ek din sab sahi ho jaaega....


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Kyaa HaalaaT Ke ChiTr Khinche HaiN ... Arvind JI

Bahut UmdaaH ... Nazm

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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kuch tv ka to kuch filmon ka haath batate hain,
kuch ladkiyon ke pehnaave ka dosh batate hain,
ye to tarika hai nimn maansikta ko chipane ka varna,
kahan log apne ko bhediya batate hain,


behad umda likha hai aapne Aru bhai...!
na TV ka dosh hai na filmo ka aur na ladkyion ke kapdo ka (ab bhala 5 saal ki ladki ke kapde kya bure hone)...dosh hai aadmi ki gandi maansikta ka...dosh hai hamari sarkaar ka, jo aise darindoN ko faansi ke vajaye jail meiN daal kar rakh rhi hai, aise logo ko sar-e-aam faansi dena shuru kar do, dekhna kaise aise logoN ki akal thikane aati hai...!

Aru ji aap ki kavita k baray kia kehna ek umda peshkash hai.....or fir ek bahut hi umda vichar virender ji ka.......
baat darasal yeh hai k hum sab umeed rakh reheiN kis se un leaders se jo khud blaatkari hain....blaat kaar ya shoshan sirf kisi abla ya besahara aurat ya ladki ka hi nahi hota ya ho raha hai balki un sab ka jo bhi in neta logoN ki nazar meiN meiN aa gya.ab to had se bhi bad gaya hai halaat jis desh ko Maa kehtay hain us ka roz hi shoshan kar reheiN heiN aisa lag raha hai jaisay sirf chor ya luteray hi kabiz heiN satta par.ab karnatak meiN kya hua BJP haar gayee congres aa gayee kya fark hai sirf party ka naam badla kaam to wohi hoga.aisay meiN ladkioN ki aawroo ka kisay khyaal mombatiaN jalao ja na jalao kya fark hai.videshoN meiN tou halaat yeh hai k Bharat ka zikar aatay hi log kehte heiN { a country of rapist and coruption} kitni bhi kahania logoN ko sunao k Bharat ek acha mulk hai koi zakeen nahi karta yahaN tak jo Bhartiay bachay jinka janam bahar k mulko meiN hua hai Bharat aa kar bas jaana tou door sir tourism k liay bhi tyaar nahi hotay jo aatay heiN unko maa baap mazboor kar k laatay heiN.pata nahi hamaray leaders ko kab is baat ka pata chalega..........
   
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kuch tv ka to kuch filmon ka haath batate hain,
kuch ladkiyon ke pehnaave ka dosh batate hain,
ye to tarika hai nimn maansikta ko chipane ka varna,
kahan log apne ko bhediya batate hain,


behad umda likha hai aapne Aru bhai...!
na TV ka dosh hai na filmo ka aur na ladkyion ke kapdo ka (ab bhala 5 saal ki ladki ke kapde kya bure hone)...dosh hai aadmi ki gandi maansikta ka...dosh hai hamari sarkaar ka, jo aise darindoN ko faansi ke vajaye jail meiN daal kar rakh rhi hai, aise logo ko sar-e-aam faansi dena shuru kar do, dekhna kaise aise logoN ki akal thikane aati hai...!

Aru ji aap ki kavita k baray kia kehna ek umda peshkash hai.....or fir ek bahut hi umda vichar virender ji ka.......
baat darasal yeh hai k hum sab umeed rakh reheiN kis se un leaders se jo khud blaatkari hain....blaat kaar ya shoshan sirf kisi abla ya besahara aurat ya ladki ka hi nahi hota ya ho raha hai balki un sab ka jo bhi in neta logoN ki nazar meiN meiN aa gya.ab to had se bhi bad gaya hai halaat jis desh ko Maa kehtay hain us ka roz hi shoshan kar reheiN heiN aisa lag raha hai jaisay sirf chor ya luteray hi kabiz heiN satta par.ab karnatak meiN kya hua BJP haar gayee congres aa gayee kya fark hai sirf party ka naam badla kaam to wohi hoga.aisay meiN ladkioN ki aawroo ka kisay khyaal mombatiaN jalao ja na jalao kya fark hai.videshoN meiN tou halaat yeh hai k Bharat ka zikar aatay hi log kehte heiN { a country of rapist and coruption} kitni bhi kahania logoN ko sunao k Bharat ek acha mulk hai koi zakeen nahi karta yahaN tak jo Bhartiay bachay jinka janam bahar k mulko meiN hua hai Bharat aa kar bas jaana tou door sir tourism k liay bhi tyaar nahi hotay jo aatay heiN unko maa baap mazboor kar k laatay heiN.pata nahi hamaray leaders ko kab is baat ka pata chalega..........
Thanx rajinder seep jee...aapka kehna bilkul sahi hai...kuch logon kee wajah se sabhi deshwasiyo ko sharmindini uthani padti hai,....na jane kab ye haalaat sahi honge..



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Aapko akrosh bharA chitran aaj ki halat ka khula chitran karta hai.
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Better mail this to Indian Wmen Comission .
But modify last four lines.
Sanjay sehgal
Thanx sanjay jee...sorry for late reply........



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I want to cry every night,
Because I miss the way we fight.

I pray for you every night,
Because I miss you not being in my sight.

I miss the sound of your voice,
That I am sick and tired of all this noise.

I miss the way you smell,
Oh that smell.

I love you so much I can’t deny,
For when I see you I will break down and cry.

For when I cry these happy tears,
I won’t have anymore fears.
You’ll be home safe with me,
That I’ll be able to sleep.
Oh how I miss you so much.

I’ll just have to wait and hope you will, keep in touch.
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I want to cry every night,
Because I miss the way we fight.

I pray for you every night,
Because I miss you not being in my sight.

I miss the sound of your voice,
That I am sick and tired of all this noise.

I miss the way you smell,
Oh that smell.

I love you so much I can’t deny,
For when I see you I will break down and cry.

For when I cry these happy tears,
I won’t have anymore fears.
You’ll be home safe with me,
That I’ll be able to sleep.
Oh how I miss you so much.

I’ll just have to wait and hope you will, keep in touch.
Thanks bikshak jee....,........,...............



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Ek Ek Labaz mein sacchai hai aru ji.... humare desh mein rape jaisa ghinona crime ho raha hai...bt yaha ki govt. shayad kuch nahi kar paa rahi hain..
   
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Ek Ek Labaz mein sacchai hai aru ji.... humare desh mein rape jaisa ghinona crime ho raha hai...bt yaha ki govt. shayad kuch nahi kar paa rahi hain..
Thanx a lot tanha sudhir jee.........



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waah aru ji waah kya khub kaha h aape.
kehne ko koi shabdh hi nahi hai mere pas.
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Yeh aik nazm nahi aik talkh haqeeqat hai,,
Aur jis andaaz ae biyaaN ki gyi hy waqiay qaabil e tareef hy,,

Aru jii.... Superb...

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,

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desh mein jis tareeke ke haalaat chal rahe hain, abhikuch dino pehle december mein delhi mein ek rape case saamne aaya tha, aur abhi ye bacchi ke saath, in ke alawa bhi pata nahin kitne hote hain, aaye din hum news paper mein aur tv pe dekhte hain...inhi haalaaton ko dekhte hue kuch panktiyan dil se nikli hain........


Na bujha too battiyan,
Na jala too mombattiyan
Jhank apne andar ek baar,
Dekh kahan hain galtiyan...

Kahan gaye cheer badane wale bhagwaan,
Kahan gaye asmat bachane wale krishna mahan,
Roj roj hote cheer haran se,
Kya kam pad gaye unke kapdon ka thaan...

Aaj yahan kal wahan hahakaar hua,
Aaj iska kal uska balaatkaar hua,
Chood do ginna ab unglion pe,
Aaj bahar to kal ghar mein shikaar hua...

kuch tv ka to kuch filmon ka haath batate hain,
kuch ladkiyon ke pehnaave ka dosh batate hain,
ye to tarika hai nimn maansikta ko chipane ka varna,
kahan log apne ko bhediya batate hain,

Jo kal tak ganda vichaar tha aaj charcha-e-bazaar hai,
Jo kal tak chupa tha aaj naachta sare baazaar hai,
Badta hee jayega ab ye na rukega,
Jo kal tak nazar mein tha aaj sasharir tayaar hai...

Pighalta hai mom aur jalta hai dhaga,
Betiyon ka baap rehta hai poori raat jaaga,
Koun jane fir kiski beti ke liye jalegi mombatti,
Kare to kya kare vo bechara abhaga....

Kuch to maa kee kokh mein aansuon tale dab gayin,
Bachi jo vo vehshi darindo kee bhent chad gayin,
Aadhi rehti hain zindagi bhar dari sehmi,
Baaki aadhi dahez kee aag mein zinda jal gayin,

Koun jaane in paapiyon kee aatma kahan soti hogi,
Na ho kisi kee behan beti, maa jarur hoti hogi,
Are ye neech harkat karne walon sun lo,
Koi roye na roye tumpe tumhari maa jarur roti hogi..

Balaatkariyon kee shikayat na karo balaatkariyon se,
Kya hoga sadak pe khade pradarshankariyon se,
Aage bad ke khud taang do sooli pe sabko,
Mat maango bheekh in bhikhaariyon se...
Behad sensitive poem on a sensitive subject....aapki poem me vo akrosh aur dard saaf jhalak raha hai jo in dino samaaj ke haalat dekhkar har sanvedansheel vayaki ke man me hoga.....sahi kaha aapne ki hamame se har kisi ko aage akar kadan badana chahiye kisi ayr ke bharose badlaav nahi hote badlaav hamesha khud ki soch sw hi hote hain only we can do this...aur ye ek achchi koshish hai..apki kavita ne kam se kam hame phir se ek baar sochne pe majboor to kiya...bahut badiya.



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Arvind ji Namaskar,

Bohot hi kamjor nas pakdi hai aapne is beemar samaj ki. Is behad zaroori mudde ko itni safai aur marmikta se uthane ke liye apki jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai.
Aapka apna
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Arvind ji Namaskar,

Bohot hi kamjor nas pakdi hai aapne is beemar samaj ki. Is behad zaroori mudde ko itni safai aur marmikta se uthane ke liye apki jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai.
Aapka apna
Bhushan
Thanx a lot bhushan jee...aapne meri bhawnaon ko samjha ..uske liye tahe dil se shukriya.......



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