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tum salaamat raho apna haafiz khudaa -
28th September 2002, 12:56 AM
zakhm dete haiN dil ke tumhe ye duaa
tum salaamat raho apna haafiz khudaa kiski chaukhaT pe hum jaan deNge sanam gar na humko milaa tere Ghar ka pataa kab mujhe thii tere jism kii aarzoo ? paak thii ye nigah, saaf thaa dil meraa dard-e-dil meiN hai shiddat baDii dosto raastaa maikadey ka bataa do zaraa ab ye haalat hamari hai shaam-o-sahar aaNkh bheegi huii , chehraa utraa huaa khat jalaa daale tasveereiN bhi phaaD diiN dil se yaadeN na ho paayiiN phir bhii judaa ab naa "maikasH" mulaaqaat hogi kabhii un kaa kuchh, meraa kuchh ho gayaa raastaa maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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badia sher -
28th September 2002, 01:45 AM
bahut acche likte ho, keep it up!!
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28th September 2002, 02:18 AM
shukriay sahab....bas koshish kar leta huuN
maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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hi -
28th September 2002, 02:25 AM
Hello Maikaish
Bahotha dino baad kuch apne likha hai. Its very well written as always. Chota Sa Dil Love like you have never been hurt, and Dance like no one is watching." "Janee kya likha hai us Rub ne apne kismat par, roz hathon ko dekh kar unee parne ke koshish karthe hai" |
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28th September 2002, 02:50 AM
"chota sa dil" saheba
sabse pehle to SSA kabuul kijiye bohat din hue aap jaise dostoN se dua-salaam hue......doosri baat ye ki ab to aap apna naam badal hi daaliye kyUnke maiN aaj doosri dafaa aapse ye guzaarish kar raha huuN...maine pehle bhi shayad aapse kaha tha ka ki aapka dil harghiz bhi "chota" nahiiN hai.... ba-har-haal ghazal pasaNd farmaane ke liye mera shukriya tasleem kijiye maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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Gujara hua Kal -
4th October 2002, 12:33 PM
Hello Maikashji.....
Kya Kahe hum Appese Hum pata nahi, wah wah to sub bhejenge app ko to mere pass is ke alawa koi alphaas nahi,. sahi me sidhe dil se likhete hain app././.. ***********Gujare Hua Kal Ki Yaad ati hai,kuch lamho se ankhen bhar ati hain , woh subah rangeen sham nirali dub jati hain , jub app jaise dosto ki yaad ati hai. M T Monal |
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7th October 2002, 08:34 AM
Monal sahab
itni izzat afzai ka tah-e-dil se shukurguzaar huuN aapka....aapko ghazal qaabil-e-ga'ur lagi samajhiye mere mehnat zaya nahiiN gayi......dil se likhne pe ek baat yaad aayi :- sau baar ye dil dard ki bhaTTi meiN jaley hai tab aik ghazal husn ke saanche meiN dhaley hai maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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8th October 2002, 01:58 PM
hello maikaish ji
aap ki nazmain aur shayr padne ko bhut hi kam milte hain lakin hamesh badia hote hain i hope ke aap bhut hi jald hamain ik aur aise hi shayr se navaaze gain keep it up bye |
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adaab kabool kijiye -
8th October 2002, 04:02 PM
maikash sahab kaise hain aap janab apka kalaam bara bahut tareef ke kabil hai mashallah janab kuch humain bhi sikha dein plz likhte rahega kudha hafiz.............
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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8th October 2002, 05:52 PM
Wah kya kahe...Aap jab bhi likhte hain bohoth hi acha likhte hain.
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8th October 2002, 08:37 PM
Maiksah jee salam
dekha maikash jee main kehta tha ke log aapko bhoole nahin hain aap jaise shayar shayri.com pe aate hain yeh hamare khsuhkismti hai aapke sheyr dil ko choo jate hain itna dard hai aapki gazlon mein itni muhabbat itni wafa hai ke socha hoon vo kaun hogi jisne aap jaise insaan ko dukh diya hoga please let u sknow if u think thats not too much to ask aapko bura laga ho to chota samajh kar maaf kar dena aapka chota sa fan rahul |
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9th October 2002, 05:23 AM
neha saheba
tasleem daad ka bohat shukria.....sunkar achcha laga ke aapko khaaksaar ki har ghazal pasaNd aati hai......Intehaayi mashkoor huuN aapka aapne mere kam likhne ki jaanib ishaara kiya hai to aisi baat nahiiN hai jee.....likhta to huuN lekin post zara kam karta huuN.......aur waise bhi ustaad jee kaha karte haiN ke bhai quantity ki jagah quality pe zor dijiye....ab ustaad-e-mohtaram ki baat na suneiN to kya kareiN..... doosra reason ye hai ke kabhi yahaN maiN har roz ek na ek ghazal post kiya karta tha lekin un dionoN yahaN sabse jaan-pechaan thi magar aaj-kal sab dost aisey haiN ke jinse ek dafaa bhi baat nahiiN huii......zara tamaam mehfil se ta'ruff ho jaye phir aapse vaada raha ke maiN baqaiida se haazir hua karuNga naaye kalaam ke saath maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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9th October 2002, 05:28 AM
salman sahab
aadaab bhai maiN to achchaa huuN aap kahiye kis tarah guzar rahi hai....? taariif ka bohat hi shukria miyaaN.....!! aur rahi sikhaane ki baat to bhai maiN to khud abhi seekh raha huuN......!! aur aapka private message mila tha mazrat chahta huuN ke jald jawaab na de paya......uski wajah ye thi ke mujh nalaayaq ko aapki pareshaani samajh nahiiN aayi aapse darkhuvaast hai ke phir se mujhe mail ya message meiN "tafseel" se likh kar bataiiye ke maiN aapse kis kaam aa sakta huuN......maiN apni taraf se har koshish karuuNga....!! maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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9th October 2002, 05:30 AM
Amrita jee
aapne ghazal pasaNd farmaayi to samjhiye ke mera dil reh gaya ke meri mehnat bekaar nahiiN gayi.....shukurguzaar huuN aapka maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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9th October 2002, 08:23 AM
ashk sahab
namaste bas bhai bas....ab itni taariif ka kya karuNgaa maiN....? itni muravvat se mat pesh aayiye....hum jaisoN ka kya hai aaj yahaN haiN ..."kal nahiiN" aapne itni badii email bhi jo bheji hai maine abhi padhii.....aur jistne sawaal aapne puucHe unka sabka jawaab dena mere liye shayad mumkin na ho......... aapne farmaya ke := "vo kaun hogi jisne aap jaise insaan ko dukh diya hoga" maiN ko itna bhi achcha insaan nahiiN huuN ke mujh dukh na mileN......aur phir dukh mujhe raas bhi bohat aate haiN aur duaa kijiye ke raas aate raheN varna maiN ghazleN kahaaN se likhuNgaa aur hamari-aapki mulaqaat kaise hogi........baaqi ke sawaaloN ke jawaab maiN aapko email kar duuNga...... philhaal khaas taur se aapke liye chaNd ghazleN post kiye jaata huuN....shayad aapko mujhe samajhne meiN kuch aasaani ho....mulaizaa kijiye ...... ziNdaa raheN to kyaa hai jo mar jaayeN ham to kyaa duniyaa meN Khaamoshii se guzar jaayeN ham to kyaa hastii hii apanii kyaa hai zamaane ke saamane ek Khvaab haiN jahaaN meN bikhar jaayeN ham to kyaa ab kaun muNtazir hai hamaare liye yahaaN shaam aa gaii hai lauT ke ghar jaayeN ham to kyaa [muNtazir hona = intezaar karna] dil kii Khalish to saath rahegii tamaam umr dariyaa-e-Gam ke paar utar jaayeN ham to kyaa .................................................. ....................... toDnaa TuuTe huye dil kaa buraa hotaa hai jis kaa koii nahiiN us kaa to Khudaa hotaa hai maaNg kar tum se Khushii luuN mujhe maNzuur nahiiN kis kaa maaNgii huii daulat se bhalaa hotaa hai log naahak kisii majabuur ko kahate haiN buraa aadamii achchhe haiN par vaqt buraa hotaa hai kyoN Munir apanii tabaahii kaa ye kaisaa shikavaa jitanaa taqadiir meN likhaa hai adaa hotaa hai .................................................. .......................... Khush rahe yaa bahut udaas rahe zindagii tere aas paas rahe chaaNd in badaliyoN se nikalegaa ko_ii aayegaa dil ko aas rahe aaj ham sab ke saath Khuub haNse aur phir der tak udaas rahe lijiye aapki aik aur shikayat/farmaayish duur ho gayi aur bina kahe meri daastaaN bhi bayaaN ho gayi....!! aapka khat ka jawaab jald dene ki koshish karuNga.....der ho jaaye to muaaf kijiyega maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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12th October 2002, 06:56 AM
Maikash sahab
kya baat hai kya kehne janaab mashah allah maza aa gaya , kya khoob likhte hain aap dard ka samandar bikhra pada hai aapki nazmon aur ghazlon mein umeed hai jaldi aap ek aur ghazal.nazm sunaenge salaam qamar |
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12th October 2002, 02:06 PM
Thanks Maikash ji
aapne mere swaalon ka jawab diya uska bahut shukria lekin phir be aap mera main swaal taal gaye hain aapne apni inspiration ke baare men kuch nahin bataya kaun hai , kahan hai ??? i can guess from the gazals that u posted for me in your reply that you life or love has not treated to fairly and perhaps you have lost hope but Maikash ji life goes on , i'm sure and i will pray to god that you find someone soon who can fill that gap in your heart aur aap aisi baaten mat kijye ke aap "kal" yahan nahin hoge,bhagwaan aapko lambi umar dega . i'm in a little hurry today i will reply to your comments propely next time rahul ashk |
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13th October 2002, 09:58 AM
qamar sahab
aadaab tasleem kareiN is haqeer se Ghazal ko qaabil-e-daad samjhate hue aapne apna qeemati waqt kharch kiya uske liye bada mashkoor-o-mamnoon huuN GhazloN meiN dard ke samandar ke baare aapne zikr kiya to uske jawaab meiN maiN aapko apni ek nayi ghazal ke do she'r sunaata huuN ....mulaizaa kijiye :- jo daag dil pe laga hai voh cHupaauN kaise ?? jo mere saath huaa hai voh bhulaauN kaise ?? meri aawaaz meiN chhalle haiN meri rooh pe zakhm maiN tumko pyaar bhare geet sunaauuN kaise ?? lijiye shayri ne ek dafaa phir meri mushkil hal kar di maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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13th October 2002, 10:32 AM
Ashk sahab
namaste ab saaloN puraani baat ka aapse kya zikr karuN....? aur voh bhi sab ke saamne.....?? shayad munaasib na ho.....isliye aapse guzaarish hai aise sawaal mujhe na puucheN to badi inayat hogi aapki....!! bhai ab to kisi ka iNtezaar ....kisi ki talaash bhi nahiiN to kisi se milna kya.....?.....jis tarah ab tak katii hai aage bhi kat jaayegi.......aapki duaaoN ka dil ki gehraiiyoN se shukurguzaar huuN.....mujhe khabar nahiiN thi ke yahaaN itni muravvat milegi varna maiN kab ka laut chuka hota rahi lambi umr ki baat to sahab aap ye duaa kisi zarooratmaNd ko dijiye mujh jaisa shakhs itni lambi umr ka kya karega.....jitni lambi umr hogi , raNj-o-Gham ki qataar bhi utni hi lambi hogi......!! ziNdagi se ya kisi se bhi koi gilaa nahiiN....haaN khud se zaroor hai......maiN to ab bas shayri se dil behla leta huuN......Gham se dil lagaiiye to khushi na milne ka dukh nahiiN hota.....ye she'r suniye shayad aap behtar samajh paayeN :- badan me.n aag sii cheharaa gulaab jaisaaa hai ke zahar-e-Gam kaa nashaa bhii sharaab jaisaa hai phir mulaqaat hogi maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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3rd November 2002, 05:51 AM
hi maikash
i have read all your poetry and i could not help myself from writing few words of ackwoledgement. i must say that i was deeply touched by your words , bothe poetic and non-poetic. i admire your talent please keep writing bye kiran |
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27th April 2005, 04:26 PM
kiski chaukhaT pe hum jaan deNge sanam
gar na humko milaa tere Ghar ka pataa Maikash ji.... aaj poorane paane chaant raha tha.... to aapka ye kalaam padne ko mila..... sharaabi shahab ne sahi farmaya tha......aapki nayi post pe..... ek deewana pan hai is kalaam mein...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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