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laal jode me jaise yeh dulhan ban kar aayi. |
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laal jode me jaise yeh dulhan ban kar aayi. -
24th August 2005, 08:07 PM
shaam dhal gayi, raat chali gayi
chaand nikalne ke baad, uski yaad aayi bhujha do shama, subah ho gayi, aaj phir unse milne ki gadhi aayi. ruki hai saanse, jindgi gayi hai thum, aaj jinke aane se , yeh khoosboo aayi. jhuka diya sar, ab maar do khanjar, tumse wafa karne ki, yahi saja paayi. likhi huyi panktiyan, jab sunayi unko, humari vyatha par, uski aankhen bahr aayi. ban gayi saathi, apni yeh SAAKI, laal jode me jaise yeh dulhan ban kar aayi. arun bhardwaj |
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25th August 2005, 10:04 PM
hi i m priya.
its nice one arun jee keep writing priya |
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26th August 2005, 02:03 PM
thank
priya jee arun |
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27th August 2005, 02:49 AM
Hey Arun,
Aapko pehli baar padha...bahaut acacha likha hai aapne...u have expressed it so beautifully... Aise hi likhte rahiye hamesha and iss se bhi acacha... Take care Palak  =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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27th August 2005, 06:02 PM
hi
palak jee thanks for appreciation. i read u also. u write also good poetry. ok keep in touch arun |
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28th August 2005, 01:54 PM
hi
arun thanks... i m new on this site. so i haven't post any poem. bye keep in toych priya |
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