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Har thokar ne meri !! -
1st September 2002, 11:07 AM
hi friends ...
This is my 100 posting on this site .. and my some friends wanted this posting to be a special one ... I donot know wether i will come up to their expectations or not.. but atleast i have tried my best .... hope all of u also like my this heart beat ( this poem) .here it goes .. one very true poem ... which is a hard fact of life . Har thokar ne meri mujh ko chalna seekha diya mere aankh ke ashqo ne ,khud per hasna seekha diya Nadiya ke paani ne mujh ko ,chalte rehna seekha diya baarish ki boondo ne mujh ko , gir ke bikharna seekha dya Aasman ke panchi ne , mujhe udnaa seekha diya aur sarso ke kheto ne , jameen pe rehna seekha diya Aap ki mohabaat ne, mujh ko jeena seekha diya aap ki khamoshi ne , gum ka rasta deekha diya Jazbaato ne mujh ko , rona seekha diya aye- waqt tuune mujhe , samjhota karna seekha diya !!!!  |
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Sikha diya. |
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Sikha diya. -
1st September 2002, 09:19 PM
"aankho me nami ke saath muskuraane ka hunnar tuze sikha diya,
dard bhare raashto me hasake chalana tuze sikha diya, ab chalana ya nahi chalana ye tumhari apani marzi he mere yaar, hamane to tumhe apana samaj ke ye khushi ka raasta dikha diya." |
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1st September 2002, 10:14 PM
talking eyes,
batonne teri , muze pyar ka matlab sikha diya, shayari ne teri , muze sabkuch sikha diya ! Jay |
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2nd September 2002, 05:46 PM
Wah! Wah!
Is sher se mujhe bhi ek sher yaad aya "kehne vale kehkar chalegaye sunne vale sunkar rehgaye samajhne vale samajhbhigaye samjhane vala koi na raha" -Gattu shakeel - gattu |
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7th April 2003, 10:35 AM
Aapke pyar ne, didi, mujhe jinaa sikha diya....I love you didi...Shivang.. |
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8th April 2003, 07:05 PM
good keep it up!!
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har thhokar ne ..... |
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har thhokar ne ..... -
9th April 2003, 01:50 AM
Har thokar ne meri mujh ko chalna seekha diya
mere aankh ke ashqo ne ,khud per hasna seekha diya shalu, bahot khub likha hai. |
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12th April 2003, 04:44 PM
I have only one word to describe it....... WOW!
aur haan, it was special!  |
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15th April 2003, 05:56 PM
hi "talkingeyes",
apne bohot hi acha likha hai. galtiyon aur thokron se hi insaan ko sikhna chahiye. zadadar woh log hi kuch aise zakhm dekr kuch sikha jate hai, jo dil ke kareeb hote hai. unke jane ka gum to bohot hota hai lekin jate jate bhi ek aisan kar jate hai jo itna kuch sikha jate hai. Na kisi apne ki arzoo aab, Na kisi baigane ki talash hai, Mai to phool hoon tanhaiyon ka, Mujhe bas virane ki talash hai. |
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helloo |
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helloo -
17th April 2003, 06:38 PM
talkingeyes...
kya khub kaha apne waqt ke sath sath hum sab kuch sikh hii lete hai...apki nayi post ki raah mai===saddia |
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VERY NICE |
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VERY NICE -
9th June 2003, 04:38 PM
YOU HAVE DONE VERY NICE WORK ..........KEEP IT UP . CONGRATES FOR 100
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kia kahey talkingeyes.......wah wah !! |
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kia kahey talkingeyes.......wah wah !! -
17th December 2003, 11:24 PM
dear ,
Tumhari jitni tarif ki jaye kam hay.....fir bhi tarif ke lie bhasha dhundna parta hay . Har ek poem pe akey may khamosh rah jata huun . Samajh me nahi ata kia kahuun is poem ka . Mere pass shabdo ka itna bhandar bhi nahi hay ke tumhari uchit tarif karuun . Khali jitna mann me ata hay likh dalta huun . Janti ho na may bengali huun....aur Bengali bhi kaha ka...Kolkata ka....islie mere pass hindi shabd kam par jata hay ... Ek bar fir tumne dikha dia ke tum agar sahi stage pe ao to bahot saro ke chhutti kar sakti ho . Waise may to dil se ye hi chahta huun ke is dunia me sirf ek hi poet rahey...jiska naam ho TALKINGEYES . |
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