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to kya baat thi.
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to kya baat thi. - 5th January 2002, 06:25 PM

tum "tum" ho yehi to taqdeere ka khel hai
agar tum "hum" hote to kya baat thi.


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oh god - 11th January 2002, 09:48 PM

ye sher to mujhe kehna chahiye woh bhi kuch is tarah...

tum tum ho ye to tum pe khuda ki rehmat hai
hum agar tum hote to kya baat thi.

umeed hai rahul ji aapko bura nahi lagega. aap ke sher ko tod marod ke maine ek ajeeb sa bana diya. hame umeed hi nahi poora yakin hai ki agar kuch galat kar diya ho to aap hame maaf kar doge. ek aur baat poochni thi aapse woh ye ki kya aapko kabhi life me love hua hai kisi se. ya kabhi chot khayi hai aapne love me. dont mind????????

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well i think ........
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well i think ........ - 13th January 2002, 01:26 AM

hi prachi jee, aapka ek aur reply padha ye bhi acha tha. haan kuch sawalaat bhara tha. fir bhi hame bahot khushi hui.

vaise to bahot kuch hai kehne ke liye fir bhi ek sher yaad aa raha hai sayad kuch thik se nahi hai, fir bhir arj kiya hai.......

haal - e - taqdeer bayan kar chuke unse fir bhi sawalaat karte hain
meri zindagi hai ek khuli kitaab, fir bhi malumaat karte hain.

hame thoda waqt dijiye ...... abhi khud hamare sawal ka jawab waqt ne nahi diya. jawab milte hi aapko sabse pehle bataunga.

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