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ashqon mein bhi jaan hoti hai - 7th September 2001, 09:06 AM

ashqon mein bhi jaan hoti hai
ye aankhon ki zabaan hoti hai

bikk-ta nahin dard ke siwaa kuch bhi
jahan husn ki dukaan hoti hai

girebaa(n) chaak ,bheegi aasteenen
kya aashiqon ki shaan hoti hai

maut sa yaar doosra nahin
yeh zindagi be-imaan hoti hai

deewanon ki misaal banti hai
maut jab meharbaan hoti hai


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kurbaan.............maikash jee
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kurbaan.............maikash jee - 21st January 2002, 12:11 AM

kya sher likha hai aapne. kurbaan jaun. hame yakeen nahi hota ki aapke is sher ka kisi ne reply nahi kiya. bahot khoob. aap sarvopari to pehle hi the. ye wala sher hame sach me bahot pasand aaya. vaise to ye nacheej bhi kuch sher likhta hai, par woh baat nahi jo aapne is sher me likhi hai. aaj aise hi shayri padhte padhte hum thoda peeche chale gaye. aur hame aapki ki patthoron me kohinoor sa ye sher mila. hame bahot khushi hui. khaash karke aapke ghazal ki ye lines hame bahot pasand aayi.

bikk-ta nahin dard ke siwaa kuch bhi
jahan husn ki dukaan hoti hai

girebaa(n) chaak ,bheegi aasteenen
kya aashiqon ki shaan hoti hai

hame hamesha yaad rahega aapka ye sher .........umr bhar.
vaise is nacheej ne bhi ek ghazal likhi hai haal hi me.
title hai - woh nisaani yaar ki................read it once.

hame bahot khushi hogi agar aap hamari woh ghazal padhe aur hamari galtiyaan hame batayen. hame intezaar rahega.

yours friend (if u dont mind)
rahUL i


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21st January 2002, 11:09 AM

Rahul saahab...Aabaab kabuul kijiye

Aapne jis kadar is ghazal ki tariif kii hai uske liye aapka shukriya adaa karna mere liye intehaai mushkil hai....phir bhi...aapkii inayat ka bahot shukriya.......!!

aapke hukm ke mutaabik maine aapki ghazal "woh nisaani yaar ki................read it once" pe apne chaNd tasuraat pesh kiye haiN....umeed hai aapko koii shiikayat nahiN hogi


hausla-afzaaii ka bahot bahot shukriya

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