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maut pe tha tumko yakeen............ -
29th December 2001, 03:15 PM
maut pe tha tumko yakeen , hum pe bhi etbaar tha.
e zindagi(aap) tere deedaar ko har pal bekaraar tha, poori kaainaat tere kadmo me rakhke ja raha hun, fir na kehna ki tumhe hamara intezaar tha. ek umr ho gayi hai... ghazal hote hote |
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aww -
16th May 2003, 01:06 AM
aww this is really cute rahul
Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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16th May 2003, 04:46 AM
hi rahul..
good dear n also welcome here keep writing n keep smiling khan banjara'''' <mohabbat ka maza to judai main hay> |
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bahot bahot shukriyaa.. |
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bahot bahot shukriyaa.. -
18th May 2003, 02:53 PM
shukriya. priya jee aur banjara jee.
ek waqt tha.. jab roz is bazm me haazri lagvaayaa karte the.. aajkal fursat nahi milti.. so nahi aa paate.. fir bhi jab bhi waqt mila.. apna kalaam leke jaroor haazir ho jaayenge... aur aap logon ke kalaamon ka intezaar rahega.. filhaal ek sher. bahot berukhi darbadar dekhte hain woh meri nazar se shaher dekhte hain aadaab. milte rahiyegaa. rab rakha rahUL i ek umr ho gayi hai... ghazal hote hote |
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18th May 2003, 03:09 PM
Wah! Rahul ji, aap waqt nikaal kar is bazm me aa hi jaya karo... mehfil thodi aur rangeen ho jayegi..
 *********************** Sab kho kar bhi kuchh paaya hai, Dil dekar jo chayn gawaaya hai, Aaj ye zammen haseen nazar aati hai, Har nazar me jo tera saaya hai. *********************** Is mehfil me aate rahiyega, aur ise aise hi sajaate rahiyega.. |
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19th May 2003, 08:39 AM
hi rahulji,
ye char lines me aapne bahot kuchh keh diya. very nice...... keep writing sanam jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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