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Cool muskra-kar chal diye - 29th August 2005, 09:49 PM

aapki ek nazar ko betaab hai ye nazm...
arj kiya hai..

hothon ki surkhiyaan kah rahi humse
hothon ki surkhiyaan kah rahi humse
tujhe mujhme pyar ki talash hai.
me kya karoon majboor hoon lekin,
tujhe paane ko ye dil bhi betab hai.

tujhe phool dene wale ne, phool wahin se uthaye the,
humne teri raah me jo phool bichaye the.
tum itne webafa nikle, muskra-kar chal diye
tum itne webafa nikle, muskra-kar chal diye
usi muskrahat par humne kuch din bitaye the...


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29th August 2005, 09:59 PM

arun ji,
pain reflects in ur words but awesomly written n expressed by u. dard baintne se kam hota hai n bhagwan ne aapko hunnar diya hai kalam likhne ka. so feel free to express ur thoughts n pen down . keep sharing more oftenly with us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



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na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
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Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Re: muskra-kar chal diye - 29th August 2005, 10:07 PM

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Originally posted by a4arun4u
aapki ek nazar ko betaab hai ye nazm...
arj kiya hai..

hothon ki surkhiyaan kah rahi humse
hothon ki surkhiyaan kah rahi humse
tujhe mujhme pyar ki talash hai.
me kya karoon majboor hoon lekin,
tujhe paane ko ye dil bhi betab hai.

tujhe phool dene wale ne, phool wahin se uthaye the,
humne teri raah me jo phool bichaye the.
tum itne webafa nikle, muskra-kar chal diye
tum itne webafa nikle, muskra-kar chal diye
usi muskrahat par humne kuch din bitaye the...


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a4arun

Arun ji,

Aaapne bahoot accha likha hai..

Aapka dard mehsoos hota hai

hamesha likhte rehna

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30th August 2005, 07:27 AM

Hey Arun,

Bahaut acacha likha hai aapne...too good...
Bahauts imple words mai apne ehssas bayaan kiye haina apne...loved reading it...

Take care,
Palak



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thanks - 30th August 2005, 09:32 PM

hello frineds

niral jee, palak jee , ruhani jee and others
thanks for giving b'ful words to these lines....


kabhi hum jinke liye likhte the sunaya nahin unko
aaj apke liye likhte hain, suna rahe hain apko.


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31st August 2005, 01:36 PM

hi arun jee

itna dard na jehlo.
ho sake to dava le lo.

phoolon se kaam ab chalta nahin.
unko liye ab pyar ka guldasta de do.



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31st August 2005, 02:45 PM

Hi Arun!

Kaise ho dost? ummeed hai acche se honge...
Bahut accha likha hai tumne...padhkar accha lagaa... aise hi likhte raho.. Meri daad kubool kar lena... khayal rakho apna


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1st September 2005, 06:10 PM

hi
pulkit

aapki dua hai to jee late hai.
aap likhte hai to hus late hai,

well what do u do.


arun


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