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Thumbs up Banke sitara AASMAA se roz TUJHE dekhunga........! - 22nd November 2006, 10:50 AM

"Aap sabhi dosto ko mera namskaar , dosto kuch ehsas aise hote hai jo hamare jindagi aur dil ke sab se kareeb hote hai aaj main aap sab ke bich kuch aise hi ehsas ko bayan karne ja raha hu jo sirf "uske" liye hai, ummid hai aaj tak aap ka jo mujhe pyaar mila hai wo pyaar is bar bhi jaroor milenga..main aaj jo bhi likh raha hu wo meri sister[ sunita ji] se mujhe ye sab sikhne ko mila hai aur main unse aage bhi hamesha sikhta rahunga [ lots of love sister]..ummid hai ye kosish aapko pasand aayegi....



apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................


Banke sitara AASMAA se roz TUJHE dekhunga........!


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22nd November 2006, 11:03 AM

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga

dhaval mere yaar mere bhai mere pyare shaitan

ye kya baya.n kar diya tune yaar. itna dard. is gazal ka har ek sher dard main dooba hua hai. esa lagta hai jaise dard ki syahi se tune ye kalam likha hai. wakai main badi mehnat ki hai yaar tune . wasie to tujhe is fourm main dekhkar meri dantne ki iksha ho rahi thi per jaise hi maine tera kalam pada main tujhe daad diye bina na rah saka.
shawas mere yaar ese hi din per din aur accha likhta ja yahi dua hai meri us khuda

bye yaar apna khyal rakhna.

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22nd November 2006, 11:54 AM

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"Aap sabhi dosto ko mera namskaar , dosto kuch ehsas aise hote hai jo hamare jindagi aur dil ke sab se kareeb hote hai aaj main aap sab ke bich kuch aise hi ehsas ko bayan karne ja raha hu jo sirf "uske" liye hai, ummid hai aaj tak aap ka jo mujhe pyaar mila hai wo pyaar is bar bhi jaroor milenga..main aaj jo bhi likh raha hu wo meri sister[ sunita ji] se mujhe ye sab sikhne ko mila hai aur main unse aage bhi hamesha sikhta rahunga [ lots of love sister]..ummid hai ye kosish aapko pasand aayegi....



apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................


Banke sitara AASMAA se roz TUJHE dekhunga........!

loving chottu bhai
tumne bahut mehnat ki hai es gazal par, yu hi dil lagga kar likhtey raho. bahut pasand aaye tumhari yeh gazal, vaise dilip ne sab kuch likh hi diya hai, ab mai.n kaya likhu. bas meri mubarakbaad kabool karo.

deeeeeeeerrrrrrr sarra pyar aur duao ke saath

teri didi


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bhut khub - 22nd November 2006, 12:12 PM

apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...

mere chhotu mere dhaval wah kya baat hai teri ye gazal parkar jo mere muh se sabse pehle nikla wahi tujhe likh raha hoon.....saach maan to mujhe yakee nahi ho raha ki yeh mere chhotu ne likha hai bhut kamaal ka likha hai har share lajawaab hai...tu to yaar chha gaya.....itna dard is umar me....bhut khub.....ye tera kalaam mere dil tak pounch gaya.......meri dil se daad kabool karna......apna khyaal rakhna or is udaan ko yu hee barqaraar rakhna.....raj......


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bohut khoob/ - 22nd November 2006, 12:53 PM

aap ne achhi ghazal likhi hai..Dhavalji..apko bohut bohut mubarak ho.

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dhaval aap kabhi kabhi itna gehara likh dete hai ki palken bhiig jaati hai. aapko kuch nahi ataa sacchi, sirf rulana ataa hai.......itna achha likha hai sacchi meri aankho se ek ansu jaroor gira hai......baaki aur meine girne nahi diya mujhe kisine mana kiya thha rone se isi liye....... .......waise aap kahin jaa rahe ho kya??!!!!.....

apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...

kisi ek ke liye kahana to galat hoga. har sher bahot pyaara hai. thhoda dard bhi hai......meri daad kabuul kijiyega.......ok ji

grazie

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22nd November 2006, 03:00 PM

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"Aap sabhi dosto ko mera namskaar , dosto kuch ehsas aise hote hai jo hamare jindagi aur dil ke sab se kareeb hote hai aaj main aap sab ke bich kuch aise hi ehsas ko bayan karne ja raha hu jo sirf "uske" liye hai, ummid hai aaj tak aap ka jo mujhe pyaar mila hai wo pyaar is bar bhi jaroor milenga..main aaj jo bhi likh raha hu wo meri sister[ sunita ji] se mujhe ye sab sikhne ko mila hai aur main unse aage bhi hamesha sikhta rahunga [ lots of love sister]..ummid hai ye kosish aapko pasand aayegi....



apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................


Banke sitara AASMAA se roz TUJHE dekhunga........!

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hi - 22nd November 2006, 04:52 PM

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"Aap sabhi dosto ko mera namskaar , dosto kuch ehsas aise hote hai jo hamare jindagi aur dil ke sab se kareeb hote hai aaj main aap sab ke bich kuch aise hi ehsas ko bayan karne ja raha hu jo sirf "uske" liye hai, ummid hai aaj tak aap ka jo mujhe pyaar mila hai wo pyaar is bar bhi jaroor milenga..main aaj jo bhi likh raha hu wo meri sister[ sunita ji] se mujhe ye sab sikhne ko mila hai aur main unse aage bhi hamesha sikhta rahunga [ lots of love sister]..ummid hai ye kosish aapko pasand aayegi....



apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................


Banke sitara AASMAA se roz TUJHE dekhunga........!
dhaval ji namsate
bahut achi shayri hai,
aise hi likhte rahiye....


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23rd November 2006, 12:45 PM

mere dost dilip

aaj bahot hi khui mili mujhe k meri mehnat aur kosish dono rang layi ha maine sach em ise mere baki ke kalaam se jayada mahenat ki thi aur aage bhi meri kosish yehi rahengi k main kuch aisa likhu k sab ko achha lage, aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya mujhe bahot hi khusi hui bas aise hi is dost ki himmat bane rehna dost khus rahiye

apna khayal rakhiye

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Love raelly a nice gazal. - 23rd November 2006, 02:31 PM

aap bahut achhe likhe hai ,gazal , aap ye gazalo ka silsila na chona mere yar , koyoki kuch bhuli bichadi kahani yad aati hain , humapki agli gazal ka intjar karege
   
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loving chottu bhai
tumne bahut mehnat ki hai es gazal par, yu hi dil lagga kar likhtey raho. bahut pasand aaye tumhari yeh gazal, vaise dilip ne sab kuch likh hi diya hai, ab mai.n kaya likhu. bas meri mubarakbaad kabool karo.

deeeeeeeerrrrrrr sarra pyar aur duao ke saath

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"sister aaj sach me itni khusI mili hai mujhe iske jaisi khusi aaj tak kisi bhi peshkas ke banane me nahi hui thi ye sab aap ki wajh se haii , sister jab aap muJhe call pe sab samjha rahi thi likhne ke bare me jab aapka call pura hua usike bad se maine apne ehsas ko bayan karna start kar diya tha maine bhi soch liya tha k main bhi is bar kuch alag aur achha likhu meri kosish safal rahi uski mujhe bahot hi khusi hui hai aaj bhi aapki wo smajhai hui sari baten mere pass hai aur hamesha rahengi sister , ye sb j badlav ap mujme aur meri peshkas me dekh rahi ho iska sara credit apko jata hai aur meri kosish yehirahengi k meri sister ke kehne pe main khara utru aur mainbhi kuhc behtrin sa likhu bas aapka asirwad hamesah mere sath rakhiyenga ye aapka chhotu zarur kuch achha likhenga aage bhi

sister apna khayal rakhiye
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apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...

mere chhotu mere dhaval wah kya baat hai teri ye gazal parkar jo mere muh se sabse pehle nikla wahi tujhe likh raha hoon.....saach maan to mujhe yakee nahi ho raha ki yeh mere chhotu ne likha hai bhut kamaal ka likha hai har share lajawaab hai...tu to yaar chha gaya.....itna dard is umar me....bhut khub.....ye tera kalaam mere dil tak pounch gaya.......meri dil se daad kabool karna......apna khyaal rakhna or is udaan ko yu hee barqaraar rakhna.....raj......

pranaam big b aaj bahot hi khusi hui k is kalaam ko aapke dil me jagah mili hai
main kosih yehi karunga k aage bhi main kuch aisa likhu k aap sab ko pasand aaye aur meri galtiyon me sudhar aaye bas aap sab ke sathse hi ye dhaval aaj yaha tak pahocha hai big b ye chhotu aap sab se hamesha sikhta rahenga aur likhta rahenga

bas aap apna ashirwad mere sar pe hamesa rakhiyenga

khus rahiye

apna khayal rakhiye

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25th November 2006, 06:53 PM

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aap ne achhi ghazal likhi hai..Dhavalji..apko bohut bohut mubarak ho.

aap ka dost
Mujeeb Parwaaz

mere dost mujeeb ji namskaar aur adaab

mujeeb ji khusi hui k aapko ye kalaam pasand aya aur aapne ise padha baskosish yehi rahengi k aage bhi main kuch aachha likhu aap bhi bahot hi khub likhte ho bahot achhalagta hai aapko padhna

bas yuhi is dost kO padhte rahiyenga

khus rahiye

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dhaval aap kabhi kabhi itna gehara likh dete hai ki palken bhiig jaati hai. aapko kuch nahi ataa sacchi, sirf rulana ataa hai.......itna achha likha hai sacchi meri aankho se ek ansu jaroor gira hai......baaki aur meine girne nahi diya mujhe kisine mana kiya thha rone se isi liye....... .......waise aap kahin jaa rahe ho kya??!!!!.....

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lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
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teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
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kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...

kisi ek ke liye kahana to galat hoga. har sher bahot pyaara hai. thhoda dard bhi hai......meri daad kabuul kijiyega.......ok ji

grazie

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POOJA kais ho tum? i hope ke maje me hongi

ji nahi main kahi nahi ja raha abhisocha nahi hai kahin janeka agarjaneka sochunga to apako zarur kahunga aur aapko mera ya kalaam pasand aaya dil se bahot hi achha laga mujhe khusi hui ke meri ye kosish pasand aayi main aage bhikosish karunga isse bhi achha likhu bas aap sab ke sath se hi main kuch likh raha hu aaj ye sath hamesakayam rakhna , apna khayal rakhna aur ansuo ko bachake rakhna khus raho

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bahut achi shayri hai,
aise hi likhte rahiye....

RAJANI JI NAMSKAAR

aapko meri ye rachna pasand aayi aapka main tahe di se shukriya ada karta hu aur main aage bhi kosish karunga k main aur bhiachha likhu bas is dost ko padhte rahiyenga

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Bahaut accha laga aapko parhkar. har ek pankti pasand aayi. Yunhi parhney ka awsar detey rahiyega.

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vipin ji aapne meri is rachna ko dil se padha aurpasand kiya sach me bahot hi khusi hui mujhe aur prerna mili k aage bhi main kuchachha likhu taki sab ko likha hua pasand aaye

main yuhi likhta rahunga aage bhi , apna khayal rakhiyenga vipin ji

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aap bahut achhe likhe hai ,gazal , aap ye gazalo ka silsila na chona mere yar , koyoki kuch bhuli bichadi kahani yad aati hain , humapki agli gazal ka intjar karege


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"Aap sabhi dosto ko mera namskaar , dosto kuch ehsas aise hote hai jo hamare jindagi aur dil ke sab se kareeb hote hai aaj main aap sab ke bich kuch aise hi ehsas ko bayan karne ja raha hu jo sirf "uske" liye hai, ummid hai aaj tak aap ka jo mujhe pyaar mila hai wo pyaar is bar bhi jaroor milenga..main aaj jo bhi likh raha hu wo meri sister[ sunita ji] se mujhe ye sab sikhne ko mila hai aur main unse aage bhi hamesha sikhta rahunga [ lots of love sister]..ummid hai ye kosish aapko pasand aayegi....



apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................


Banke sitara AASMAA se roz TUJHE dekhunga........!

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dhval ji jo na gira kisi ka marna ka baad bhi, jo na royaa kisi ka janaa ka baaad bhi aaj wo roya hai barsoo.n ka baad.........

lauut jana hia ek din phir us berbadi ka masum mai .. or lena hai hisab apni un jafoo.n ka " fakira"

sweet dear, ishq mai jo ek bond barsso.n sa nahi dikhi . ajjj us ka ajj dedaar ho gyaa............




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SUN FAKIRA KI KAHNEE

USKA DARD OR SHERO. KI JUBANI.....
KUCH NHI IS DUNIYA MAI " DOSTI KA SIVA
NHI KOI DOST IS DUNIYA MAI MAUT KA SIVA

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apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...




Hello Dhaval ji
Aap ki Gazal mujhe bahut pasand aai, aapne bahut achaa likha hai, aap ka har labez Gam or jodaai me duba hua hai. kyaa baat hai jo is tarah likhte hain aap ? Aap isee trah likhtee rahen mujhe aapki Gazal ka intezaar rahega


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Wink bahot pyara likhte ho - 27th November 2006, 04:22 PM

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apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...





A SHAYRI FOR HER.......................................


Banke sitara AASMAA se roz TUJHE dekhunga........!
bahot pyara likhate ho ye aapki kalpana hai ya aapke sister ki par jo bhi hai kafi pyari our dilko chu lene walihai.


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dhaval bohat achay ahsaas hain aap ke direct dil se niklay hain na is liye bohat acha likha hai keep writing
koi to ho ji namskaar

kais hai aap?

aapko meri ye kosish pasand aayi aapka main tahe dil se shukra guzar hun , bas aap yuhi muhe dil se padhte rahiyenga apna khayal rakhiyenga
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dhval ji jo na gira kisi ka marna ka baad bhi, jo na royaa kisi ka janaa ka baaad bhi aaj wo roya hai barsoo.n ka baad.........

lauut jana hia ek din phir us berbadi ka masum mai .. or lena hai hisab apni un jafoo.n ka " fakira"

sweet dear, ishq mai jo ek bond barsso.n sa nahi dikhi . ajjj us ka ajj dedaar ho gyaa............




fakira.................................
mere dost fakira ji adaab aur namskaar

kya baat kahi hai aapne bahot hi achha laga mere dost apaka ye jawab padh ke aapne mujhe padha aur meri ye kosish ko saraha bahot khuSi hui main kosish karunga k aage bhi kucH aisa likhu jo aap sab ko pasand aaye is dost ka sath dete rahiyenga

hamesa khus rahiye

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apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
zindagi ko dheere dheere sametunga...

lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

teri baahon me dam na niklega mera
chand saansain aur khuda se mangunga...

kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

faasla ho chhahe jitna bhee hum mein
banke sitara asmaa se roz tujhe dekhunga...

banke khoon bahenge ashq aankhon se
jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
jab kabhi saath guzre lamho ko sochunga...




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Aap ki Gazal mujhe bahut pasand aai, aapne bahut achaa likha hai, aap ka har labez Gam or jodaai me duba hua hai. kyaa baat hai jo is tarah likhte hain aap ? Aap isee trah likhtee rahen mujhe aapki Gazal ka intezaar rahega


"Gamo ki kader karo or unke saath jiyu .
Gam kabhi fareeb na denge Khushi ki tarah.."

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mere dost shaan ji adaab aur namskaar

mere dost main ais abas isiliyelikhta hu kyuuki mera dil majboor ho jata hai mainto apne dil ke hathon majboor hu dil jo sochta hai bas us ehsas ko apni peshkas banaya karta hu aapko meri ye peshkas pasand aayi sach me bahot hi khusi hui ummid hai aap aage bhi si dost ko padte rahenge
apna khayal rakhiye

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laxmi ji pele to main aapka is parivaar me sawagat karta hu tahe dil se ummid karta hu aapka wqt aur ye safar yaha khusi ke sath bitenga aapne mujhe padha aur saraha bahot hi khusi hui janke
aur aapne jo baat ki hai k ye meri kalpana hai to laxmiji ye mere ehsas hai jo aap ise padh rahe ho main bas apne ehsas ko bayan karne ki kosish kar raha hu aur aap aisa bhi keh sakti ho k meri sister ka sath ha aaj main yaha jo kuch bhi sikha hu unhi ki wajhse hai unhone mera har kadam par sath diya hai aur main unse hamesa kuch na kuch sikhne ki kosish karta hu aur karta rahunga

aap bas is dost ko padhte rahiye bahot achha lagaaapka yun meri post pe aana

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"Aap sabhi dosto ko mera namskaar , dosto kuch ehsas aise hote hai jo hamare jindagi aur dil ke sab se kareeb hote hai aaj main aap sab ke bich kuch aise hi ehsas ko bayan karne ja raha hu jo sirf "uske" liye hai, ummid hai aaj tak aap ka jo mujhe pyaar mila hai wo pyaar is bar bhi jaroor milenga..main aaj jo bhi likh raha hu wo meri sister[ sunita ji] se mujhe ye sab sikhne ko mila hai aur main unse aage bhi hamesha sikhta rahunga [ lots of love sister]..ummid hai ye kosish aapko pasand aayegi....



apni zindagi ke aakhri palon mein
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lunga jab tera hath haathon mein
tera hath aakhri bar seene pe rakhunga...

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kaouf-e-tanhai kii wehshat hai mujhe
tere bina akela main waha kaise rahunga...

mujhe tum zinda rakhna yaadon mein
har raat main tere khaawon mein aaunga...

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jab teri dab dabai aankhon ko dekhunga...

rouh tarppegi har pal 'dhaval' ki dekhna
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Banke sitara AASMAA se roz TUJHE dekhunga........!
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yuhi likhte rahiye.
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28th November 2006, 09:37 PM

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dhaval ji
bahut khub likha hai har sher apne.dil mein utar gya har lafj apka likha hua.
yuhi likhte rahiye.
sakhi with smile

sakhi ji namskaar

aapko meri ye kosish pasand aayi , aapka maintahe dil se shukra guzar hun k aapne meri rachna ko dilse padha aur pasand kiya bas yuhi is dost ko padhte rahiyenga
apna khayal rakhiye

khus rahiye

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