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Mere dil mein kiya hai -
9th March 2003, 01:09 AM
Mere dil mein kiya hai yeh tum kaab jano gay
Meri ankhoon mein kiya hai yeh tum kaab jano gay Mere labhoon mein kiya hai yeh tum kaab jano gay Dil, Ankhein, Labh, yeh teen raastein hain jo pyar ki manzil ki taraf jate hain. Koun sa choose karna hai yeh tumhara faisala Izhare Ishq kar keh to dekho nahi to humara faisala suno Rabi |
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waah.... -
9th March 2003, 12:13 PM
kya baat hai ....bahut achcha likah hai tumney ..keep it up.............
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9th March 2003, 11:06 PM
thank u very much for the reply this makes me feel good and make me keep on writing..sukriya
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wah -
10th March 2003, 05:00 AM
wah boht acha likh ha app na. keep it up
Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya |
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10th March 2003, 08:11 PM
Zahar ji...hello
thank u very much for appreciating my work..aap jaise logoon ka sahara rahe gha to mein inshallah lekhti rahoon ghi...  |
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your welcome -
10th March 2003, 09:05 PM
je bilkul hum sub ya ha per ek dusra ki taref kerna ka liya hi ha. or logo ki hosla afzai kerna ka liya. keep up the good work
Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya |
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10th March 2003, 10:23 PM
Exaclty I agree.....
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hi -
10th March 2003, 11:48 PM
jeeee bilkul is baat sa to sub ko agree ho na chahiya. kyu kia khayal ha app ka?
Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya |
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11th March 2003, 04:56 AM
mein to bilkol agree karti hoon. agar hum nahi kuch kehain gay logoon ki shayri keh bare mein tab phir koun shayri lekhe gha or phir kis ki honsala afzai hogi..sab to phir yeh club chor keh chale jain gay or phir there would be nothing...hum sab ka farz hai tareef karna or issi tarhan humri shayri lekhne ko bhi dil chahe gha..everyone will be happy or koi mayoos nahi hokar jai gha..
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you are right -
11th March 2003, 07:20 AM
yes you are absolutly right. or agar hum kisi ka taref nahi kara ga to log to mayos ho ja a ga. or is webside per hum sub ka farz banta ha ka hum logo ki help kara. or un ki madat kara. un ka muskil waqt ma sath da . or un sa kha ka or boht acha likhta ha taka o log likhta raha.
allah hafiz Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya |
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11th March 2003, 10:08 AM
jee bilkol...
yakeen karti hoon keh jis din se maine shayri.com ko sign in kiya hai uss din se sab ko reply milta hai n koi mayoos nahi dekhta inshallah ageh bhi aisa hi hoga koi mayoos nahi dekhe gha..inshallah humara farz sar ankhoon per.. allah hafiz |
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HI -
11th March 2003, 10:24 AM
Wah, Mash-Allah kaya Khobe Kaha Ha Aap Na,,,
Buhat Hi Aacha,,, """Aahsas Aagar Ha Tu Muhabbat Karo Mahsoos''''''" ~~Har bat Ka Izhar Zaoroi Nahi Lub Sa~~~ Keep it up,,, its very nice,,,,i realy love it,,, Take care,,and keep writing,,, B Happy,B Wealthy and B Brave,,, Aalaha Hafiz, ZS |
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hi -
11th March 2003, 08:08 PM
hi
rabhiji frist of aal great poem bhut hi acha likhti hein aap. aap aur zahri bilkul teek kehti ho i agree with u guys encouragment boost up people self confidence and esteem and helps us to write even better and agar hum kuch parein to humein reply karna chaiye because it shows that person if their poetry is good or not and wheather they can improve it or not. keep up romana |
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11th March 2003, 09:21 PM
Thank u both of u guys Zeeshan and romana jii..
I will keep righting..and Zeeshan jii....I know keh izhar karna zaroori nahi lekin kabhi kabhi insaan mayoos hojata hai..keh yeh wohi insaan hai jis mujhe jaha hai lekin izhar nahi kiya...i agree lekin kabhi to karna chahiye bechak aik hi baar,,well ne way thanku all for appreciating my works... allah hafiz sab khush raho allah hai na sab theek hojai gha... rabi |
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ji ha -
12th March 2003, 06:49 AM
ara mera matlab ya nahi ha ka app sub hamara liya acha comments likha. agar app logo ko koi chez acha nahi lagti ha to ya app logo ka farz banta ha ka app log us per likha ka i don't like your shayri. iso we can make are shayri better. is depend on all of you. ka ya app logo ko decide kerna ho ga ka kia chez achi lagti ha app logo ko or kia chez buri. zarori nahi ha ka app logo ki sirf taref hi kara. kyu rabi ma thek keh rahi ho na?
Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya |
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12th March 2003, 08:39 AM
yes exactly..bilkol theek hai yahi to hum sab ki khobhi hai keh achi lagi hai shayri to phir insaan ka farz to banta hai keh tarieef kare...i agree. with ya..
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