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Hi dear readers nd writers kaafi samay baad aaj aapke saamne kuch dil ki baat lekar aaya hu, ummeed karta hu k galtiyo ko maaf karte hue aap meri is rachna ka aanand lenge


ye ek aisi kahani hai,
jisme na raja na rani hai...

Kahani hai ek naujawan ki,
Uski talaash ki, uski jaan ki...

Usne dekhe the kayi sapne,
par sapne ho na sake apne..

Talaash thi usko apne sapno ki rani ki,
usko ho gaya ehsaas k ye bemaani thi...

Ab usne mann me ek naya vichaar aaya,
aur vichaar b usko bemisaal aaya...

Usne ek anaath ko god lene ka mann banaya hai,
aur samaaj ko ek naya aayaam dikhaya hai..

sab yuva aisa mann bana le agar,
desh me na ho koi anath beghar. . .

This is an idea, which can change not only one's life, but many lives hope u liked it . . . Please comments
   
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14th October 2009, 02:56 PM
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Hi dear readers nd writers kaafi samay baad aaj aapke saamne kuch dil ki baat lekar aaya hu, ummeed karta hu k galtiyo ko maaf karte hue aap meri is rachna ka aanand lenge


ye ek aisi kahani hai,
jisme na raja na rani hai...

Kahani hai ek naujawan ki,
Uski talaash ki, uski jaan ki...

Usne dekhe the kayi sapne,
par sapne ho na sake apne..

Talaash thi usko apne sapno ki rani ki,
usko ho gaya ehsaas k ye bemaani thi...

Ab usne mann me ek naya vichaar aaya,
aur vichaar b usko bemisaal aaya...

Usne ek anaath ko god lene ka mann banaya hai,
aur samaaj ko ek naya aayaam dikhaya hai..

sab yuva aisa mann bana le agar,
desh me na ho koi anath beghar. . .

This is an idea, which can change not only one's life, but many lives hope u liked it . . . Please comments
idea to accha hai..........bhai...........
   
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14th October 2009, 03:58 PM
Aapka bahut bahut shukriya zid ji, aapne apne keemti waqt se kuch waqt is post ko diya aur idea aapko pasand b aaya
   
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14th October 2009, 04:06 PM
Raaj Bhai yeh bahut yeh bahut achchi kala hai tum mein ke tum apne ahsaas ko achche se poetry mein dhal dete ho........

Nice to know your Idea........ Dua karunga ke tumhe tumhare Dream girl se saath dream son bhi mil jaye....... What n Idea.........

Keep it up, think on my idea too thats not a joke ....... I m serious at here too bro..

Keep smiling
May God Bless you..
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14th October 2009, 04:50 PM
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Raaj Bhai yeh bahut yeh bahut achchi kala hai tum mein ke tum apne ahsaas ko achche se poetry mein dhal dete ho........

Nice to know your Idea........ Dua karunga ke tumhe tumhare Dream girl se saath dream son bhi mil jaye....... What n Idea.........

Keep it up, think on my idea too thats not a joke ....... I m serious at here too bro..

Keep smiling
May God Bless you..
Thanx Sameer bhai... agar mai tumhari jagah hota to mai b apne dost k baare me aisa he sochta jaisa k tm soch rahe ho . . . Par tum meri jagah hote to tum bhi mere jaisa he sochte dear . . . Tum apni jagah sahi ho dost . . . And thanx again bro for ur lovely comment .. I always love ur comments . . .
   
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Hi dear readers nd writers kaafi samay baad aaj aapke saamne kuch dil ki baat lekar aaya hu, ummeed karta hu k galtiyo ko maaf karte hue aap meri is rachna ka aanand lenge


ye ek aisi kahani hai,
jisme na raja na rani hai...

Kahani hai ek naujawan ki,
Uski talaash ki, uski jaan ki...

Usne dekhe the kayi sapne,
par sapne ho na sake apne..

Talaash thi usko apne sapno ki rani ki,
usko ho gaya ehsaas k ye bemaani thi...

Ab usne mann me ek naya vichaar aaya,
aur vichaar b usko bemisaal aaya...

Usne ek anaath ko god lene ka mann banaya hai,
aur samaaj ko ek naya aayaam dikhaya hai..

sab yuva aisa mann bana le agar,
desh me na ho koi anath beghar. . .

This is an idea, which can change not only one's life, but many lives hope u liked it . . . Please comments


Nalin

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28th October 2009, 08:01 PM
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Buland bhai ke bulan jazbaaton ko is nacheez ka salaam
ye nacheez kaun hai ??? btw itne dino baad tumko vapis dekhkar achha laga... Thanx for comin on my thread...
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