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Bharun hataya se pahle -
20th February 2011, 12:02 PM
भ्रुण हत्या से पहले
मुझे काटने से पहले
मेरी मां को कर दो पूरी तरह बेहोश
उसे दरद है,
तुम उठा लो कैंची और नश्तर
छिन्न भिन्न कर दो मुझे
पैसे कमाओ और अपनी डाक्टर बन रही बेटी की फ़ीस भरो
क्युंकि तुम्हारा खून सर्द है
मैं अभी चीख नहीं सकती
इस लिए डरो मत , मै बेजुबां हूं
तुम्हारी नज़र में मैं एक अधूरा ईंसान हूं
मेरा कुसूर ये है कि मुझे आकार देने वाला एक मर्द है
पर्मात्मा ! मुझे दोबारा लड्की मत बनाना
मुझे जानवर बनाना या परिन्दा
क्युंकि उनमे नहीं होता नर मादा का भेद भाव
नही होता इन्सान कहलाने वाला दरिन्दा
जिसका खून सुर्ख नही ज़र्द है
अगर करनी का फ़ल पड्ता है भुगतना
तो तुम भी रहना तैयार
क्युंकि अगले जनम मे तुम्हारी
मासूम गर्दन पे भी होगी तेज धार
पर्मात्मा दयावान के लिये है मेहरबान
लेकिन दुष्टों के लिए बेदर्द है
bhruN hatyaa se pahale
mujhe kaaTane se pahale
meree maa.n ko kar do pooree tarah behosh
use darad hai,
tum uThaa lo kai.nchee aur nashtar
chhinn bhinn kar do mujhe
paise kamaao aur apanee DaakTar ban rahee beTee kee fees bharo
kyu.nki tumhaaraa khoon sard hai
mai.n abhee cheekh nahee.n sakatee
is lie Daro mat , mai bejubaa.n hoo.n
tumhaaree nazar me.n mai.n ek adhooraa I.nsaan hoo.n
meraa kusoor ye hai ki mujhe aakaar dene vaalaa ek mard hai
parmaatmaa ! mujhe dobaaraa laDkee mat banaanaa
mujhe jaanawar banaanaa yaa parindaa
kyu.nki uname nahee.n hotaa nar maadaa kaa bhed bhaaw
nahee hotaa insaan kahalaane waalaa darindaa
jisakaa khoon surkh nahee zard hai
agar karanee kaa fal paDtaa hai bhugatanaa
to tum bhee rahanaa taiyaar
kyu.nki agale janam me tumhaaree
maasoom gardan pe bhee hogee tej dhaar
parmaatmaa dayaavaan ke liye hai meharabaan
lekin duShTo.n ke lie bedard hai
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20th February 2011, 12:35 PM
Parveen Komal Ji ! Aadaab !
Kaise hai ? bahut dino ke baad aapki rachna padh raha hoon ... bahut accha likha hai aapne ... bhruN hatyaa jaisi samajiik buraii ke pratii awaam meN jaagriitii laane kaa praiyaas acchaa lagaa ... dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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21st February 2011, 05:31 PM
पर्मात्मा ! मुझे दोबारा लड्की मत बनाना
मुझे जानवर बनाना या परिन्दा
क्युंकि उनमे नहीं होता नर मादा का भेद भाव
नही होता इन्सान कहलाने वाला दरिन्दा
जिसका खून सुर्ख नही ज़र्द है
Aapki is peshkash ko koti koti Pranaam mere bhai. Rep+++++++++++++++
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21st February 2011, 07:12 PM
bohat khoob............................................. .........
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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27th February 2011, 08:54 PM
bahut shukria naresh bhai aapne hausla afjahi ki, thanks
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Parveen Komal Ji ! Aadaab !
Kaise hai ? bahut dino ke baad aapki rachna padh raha hoon ... bahut accha likha hai aapne ... bhruN hatyaa jaisi samajiik buraii ke pratii awaam meN jaagriitii laane kaa praiyaas acchaa lagaa ... dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... !
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27th February 2011, 08:56 PM
sajid bhai ! aap jaise bhaio.n ki zarra nawaji hai varna khaaksaar kis kabil hai , shukria apka
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27th February 2011, 08:58 PM
thanks zainy ji aapka , tareef ke lie shukria .
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1st March 2011, 08:22 PM
Kamal
Is baar tum nae kadve haqeqat ko lafzoan main biyaan kiya hai
Kaash ae baat insaan samajh pata
kaash
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1st March 2011, 10:33 PM
Quote:
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bhruN hatyaa se pahale
mujhe kaaTane se pahale
meree maa.n ko kar do pooree tarah behosh
use darad hai,
tum uThaa lo kai.nchee aur nashtar
chhinn bhinn kar do mujhe
paise kamaao aur apanee DaakTar ban rahee beTee kee fees bharo
kyu.nki tumhaaraa khoon sard hai
mai.n abhee cheekh nahee.n sakatee
is lie Daro mat , mai bejubaa.n hoo.n
tumhaaree nazar me.n mai.n ek adhooraa I.nsaan hoo.n
meraa kusoor ye hai ki mujhe aakaar dene vaalaa ek mard hai
parmaatmaa ! mujhe dobaaraa laDkee mat banaanaa
mujhe jaanawar banaanaa yaa parindaa
kyu.nki uname nahee.n hotaa nar maadaa kaa bhed bhaaw
nahee hotaa insaan kahalaane waalaa darindaa
jisakaa khoon surkh nahee zard hai
agar karanee kaa fal paDtaa hai bhugatanaa
to tum bhee rahanaa taiyaar
kyu.nki agale janam me tumhaaree
maasoom gardan pe bhee hogee tej dhaar
parmaatmaa dayaavaan ke liye hai meharabaan
lekin duShTo.n ke lie bedard hai
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parveen komal ji
radhe radhe
bahut khaas ... bahut gambhir subject ... aur bahut khoob ..........
yuhi likhte rahiye ..............
Aapka Apna Ishk
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इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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1st March 2011, 10:37 PM
simply superb... a bitter fact in words... heart touching... keep it up... mishka
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1st March 2011, 11:15 PM
Speechless...............!
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8th March 2011, 11:27 AM
thanks razia. nice to see u dear .
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8th March 2011, 11:28 AM
thanks for praise ishk bhai .
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8th March 2011, 11:30 AM
bahut bahut shukria aapka mere bhai .
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8th March 2011, 11:59 AM
Perveen komal ji,,,,bahut khoob !!!!!!!!! es dunia ko ek kaduwa sach dikhane ke liye,,,,,I 'm really thankful to you,,,,,well done !!!!!!!!!
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Perveen komal ji,,,,bahut khoob !!!!!!!!! es dunia ko ek kaduwa sach dikhane ke liye,,,,,I 'm really thankful to you,,,,,well done !!!!!!!!!
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kajal ji aapka bhi bahut shukria .
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14th June 2011, 02:55 PM
thanks .....................to all..........................thanks
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thanks .....................to all..........................thanks
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