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Ishk me.n har zulm sahe dil ke waste...... -
12th December 2014, 01:59 PM
Ishk me.n har zulm sahe dil ke waste......
Ek bad dua bhi na nikli qatil ke waste..
Har koi chal diya apni rah.....
Ek kashti bhi naa ruki sahil ke waste...,..
Charon taraf hai mere andhera.......
Ek chirag bhi naa jala jahil ke waste..
Gujr jaati hai umr chalte chalte.......
Aas jagi rahati hai manzil ke waste.....
Do raahe par fansi jab bhi zindagi............
Chod diya har faisla aadil ke waste......
Intzaar me.n raha apni chahat ke........
Ho naa saka izhaar e ishk gafil ke waste......
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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12th December 2014, 02:57 PM
kyaa baat hai rajinder saahab..............
waaahhhhhhhhhhhh bahot khoob likha haai aapne is baaar to bas kamaal hi kamaal
bahot si daad pesh hain aapko...... saath me thode se reps points +++++
Shaad...
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12th December 2014, 08:32 PM
Bohot khoob likha aapne Rajinder sahab
Kya baat hai........waaaaaaaaaah
Dherrooon daad
Apka apna
Bhushan
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12th December 2014, 10:15 PM
wah Rajinder jo bahut khoob rahi appki.ghazal
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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13th December 2014, 01:23 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
Ishk me.n har zulm sahe dil ke waste......
Ek bad dua bhi na nikli qatil ke waste..
Har koi chal diya apni rah.....
Ek kashti bhi naa ruki sahil ke waste...,..
Charon taraf hai mere andhera.......
Ek chirag bhi naa jala jahil ke waste..
Gujr jaati hai umr chalte chalte.......
Aas jagi rahati hai manzil ke waste.....
Do raahe par fansi jab bhi zindagi............
Chod diya har faisla aadil ke waste......
Intzaar me.n raha apni chahat ke........
Ho naa saka izhaar e ishk gafil ke waste......
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Wah wah wah....janaab kasam se bhut pyaari gazal huii hai...dil se daad hazir hai...subhaan allah..
Raj...
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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3rd February 2015, 06:29 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
kyaa baat hai rajinder saahab..............
waaahhhhhhhhhhhh bahot khoob likha haai aapne is baaar to bas kamaal hi kamaal
bahot si daad pesh hain aapko...... saath me thode se reps points +++++
Shaad...
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24th March 2015, 01:17 PM
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Bohot khoob likha aapne Rajinder sahab
Kya baat hai........waaaaaaaaaah
Dherrooon daad
Apka apna
Bhushan
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Shukriya.................Bhushan bhai...............
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24th March 2015, 06:54 PM
Bahut khoob ishq jee...
daad kubul karein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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7th April 2015, 03:27 PM
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wah Rajinder jo bahut khoob rahi appki.ghazal
Sanjay Sehgal
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjay Bhai....................
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7th April 2015, 04:38 PM
waaaaaaaaaaah...
ishQ jee.. kia kehny ....
bohat umdah ghazal hui hy ..
dil se daad qabool kejiye!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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8th April 2015, 11:29 AM
wah ji wah bohut hi sundar rachna.
ishwar ka aashirwaad rahe sada apke wastey
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25th April 2015, 03:03 PM
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wah wah wah....janaab kasam se bhut pyaari gazal huii hai...dil se daad hazir hai...subhaan allah..
Raj...
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shukriya rajveer jee.............................................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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25th April 2015, 04:07 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
Ishk me.n har zulm sahe dil ke waste......
Ek bad dua bhi na nikli qatil ke waste..
Har koi chal diya apni rah.....
Ek kashti bhi naa ruki sahil ke waste...,..
Charon taraf hai mere andhera.......
Ek chirag bhi naa jala jahil ke waste..
Gujr jaati hai umr chalte chalte.......
Aas jagi rahati hai manzil ke waste.....
Do raahe par fansi jab bhi zindagi............
Chod diya har faisla aadil ke waste......
Intzaar me.n raha apni chahat ke........
Ho naa saka izhaar e ishk gafil ke waste......
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Namaskaar Rajindar ji
aapke kalaam padna accha lagta hai, aap badi saadgi se likhtey hai aur ehsaas bahut khoobsurti se bayaan karte hai.
regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th May 2015, 03:42 PM
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Bahut khoob ishq jee...
daad kubul karein..
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Shukriya Madhu jee.......................................
Aapka Apna Ishk
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17th May 2015, 03:47 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
Ishk me.n har zulm sahe dil ke waste......
Ek bad dua bhi na nikli qatil ke waste..
Har koi chal diya apni rah.....
Ek kashti bhi naa ruki sahil ke waste...,..
Charon taraf hai mere andhera.......
Ek chirag bhi naa jala jahil ke waste..
Gujr jaati hai umr chalte chalte.......
Aas jagi rahati hai manzil ke waste.....
Do raahe par fansi jab bhi zindagi............
Chod diya har faisla aadil ke waste......
Intzaar me.n raha apni chahat ke........
Ho naa saka izhaar e ishk gafil ke waste......
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Bohot khoob andaaz-e-bayaan, aur badae sunder jazbaat.
Dil se daad aur mubarakbaad.
Sagar Aashna
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3rd June 2015, 11:38 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaah...
ishQ jee.. kia kehny ....
bohat umdah ghazal hui hy ..
dil se daad qabool kejiye!
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Shukriya Hassan Bhai........................................
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6th June 2015, 08:08 PM
Kya baat hai rajinde jee.....saare aashaar dil ko choo gaye........daad hee daad nikli hai dil se.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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1st July 2015, 12:36 PM
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wah ji wah bohut hi sundar rachna.
ishwar ka aashirwaad rahe sada apke wastey
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Shukriya Sarika jee..........................
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20th July 2015, 12:10 PM
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Namaskaar Rajindar ji
aapke kalaam padna accha lagta hai, aap badi saadgi se likhtey hai aur ehsaas bahut khoobsurti se bayaan karte hai.
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rachna ko pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya sunita jee
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20th July 2015, 12:21 PM
Rajender ji
Sundar rachna hai. Achche khayalaat hain. Magar wazn ke lihaz se kaafi gunjaish hai. Aap isse doobara dekheN. Mujhe yaqeen hai aur nikhar jaayegi. Agar baat aapko achchi na lagee to peshgi muafi chahta huN. Kyunke mera maqsad aapki dilshikni qataee nahiN hai. Behtar aur behtareen shayri hai.
Khaksaar
Praveen
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
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17th August 2015, 10:25 PM
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Bohot khoob andaaz-e-bayaan, aur badae sunder jazbaat.
Dil se daad aur mubarakbaad.
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Shukriya Sagar Aashna bhai rachna ko pasand karne ka..........................
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11th September 2015, 10:47 PM
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Kya baat hai rajinde jee.....saare aashaar dil ko choo gaye........daad hee daad nikli hai dil se.....
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Shukriya Aru bhai........................................
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9th October 2015, 04:11 PM
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Rajender ji
Sundar rachna hai. Achche khayalaat hain. Magar wazn ke lihaz se kaafi gunjaish hai. Aap isse doobara dekheN. Mujhe yaqeen hai aur nikhar jaayegi. Agar baat aapko achchi na lagee to peshgi muafi chahta huN. Kyunke mera maqsad aapki dilshikni qataee nahiN hai. Behtar aur behtareen shayri hai.
Khaksaar
Praveen
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Praveen jee aapki rai se mai itefaaq rakhta hoon wazan ke lihaaz gunjaish jaroor hogi bas mere andar jo jazbaat ubharte hain aur jo shabd ubharte hain mai likh deta hoon. koshish karunga ki aur achhe shabdon ka istemaal kar sakun.....
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