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2nd February 2010, 02:09 PM
mere mehboob se mila de ae khuda
meri ibadat ka sila de ae khuda
teri rahmaton ka karzdaar hoon main
uski rahon me phool khila de ae khuda
zindagi ki rahen suni hai uske bina
Karwaan jashne bahar ka chala de ae khuda
uski payal ke saare sur band hai
suron ko gana yaad dila de ae khuda
ek arse se raaton ko main soya nahin
uske tasuvvur mai sula de ae khuda
milne se pahle mar bhi jaaye gar 'ishk'
Dusre janam mai usse mila de ae khuda
Aapka Apna Ishk
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2nd February 2010, 03:57 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
mere mehboob se mila de ae khuda
meri ibadat ka sila de ae khuda
teri rahmaton ka karzdaar hoon main
uski rahon me phool khila de ae khuda
zindagi ki rahen suni hai uske bina
Karwaan jashne bahar ka chala de ae khuda
uski payal ke saare sur band hai
suron ko gana yaad dila de ae khuda
ek arse se raaton ko main soya nahin
uske tasuvvur mai sula de ae khuda
milne se pahle mar bhi jaaye gar 'ishk'
Dusre janam mai usse mila de ae khuda
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DEAR ISHQ JI,
AAPKE SHER TO EK SE BADH KAR EK ACHHE HAI
MUJHE LAST KI LINE BAHUT ACHHI LAGI AISE HI LIKHTE RAHIYE.
BYE BYE
AANSHU.
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4th February 2010, 06:44 PM
Kya baat hain Ishk saheb, aapke is kalam me aarzoo bhi hain dua bhi hain ishq bhi hain dard bhi hain.......dad kabool kare.
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5th February 2010, 07:46 PM
Khubsurat ehsaason......ko aapne humare dil mai utaar diya......bahut khub.....dil se daad hazir hai.....yuhi likhte rahen...khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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7th February 2010, 10:24 AM
simple and sweet............................
Zainy
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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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8th February 2010, 04:58 PM
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DEAR ISHQ JI,
AAPKE SHER TO EK SE BADH KAR EK ACHHE HAI
MUJHE LAST KI LINE BAHUT ACHHI LAGI AISE HI LIKHTE RAHIYE.
BYE BYE
AANSHU.
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dear aanshu
radhe radhe
hausla afzaai ka shukriya aise hi saath dete rahiye
aapka apna
ishk
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8th February 2010, 05:00 PM
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Kya baat hain Ishk saheb, aapke is kalam me aarzoo bhi hain dua bhi hain ishq bhi hain dard bhi hain.......dad kabool kare.
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sajid bhai
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12th February 2010, 08:02 AM
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Khubsurat ehsaason......ko aapne humare dil mai utaar diya......bahut khub.....dil se daad hazir hai.....yuhi likhte rahen...khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
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naresh bhai
radhe radhe
hausla afzai ka shukriya aise hi saath dete rahe
aapka apna
ishk
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12th February 2010, 08:04 AM
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simple and sweet............................
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27th February 2012, 11:18 PM
Doston ............. radhe radhe
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2nd March 2012, 03:40 PM
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waah . shayad aur kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi rahi .
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14th March 2012, 08:32 PM
ishq ji....mashallah....bohot khoobsoorat ehsaas or behad umda andaaz...likhte rahiye
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
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Rajinder jii, bahut khoob likha hai aapne, tamana aur duaa aik saath bahut khoob !
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ishq ji....mashallah....bohot khoobsoorat ehsaas or behad umda andaaz...likhte rahiye
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shweta jee
radhe radhe
shukriya............................
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15th April 2012, 11:31 AM
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KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal rakhen
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Ahsaas achha hai lekin agar khuda ki jagah Ai Dosat likhte to aur bhi masaledaar mahoul ban jaata . Vaise Bhi vaar vaar khuda ko taqleef dena ek mamooli baat ke lie achha nahi lagta , khuda ko aur bhi bahut sare important kaam karne hote hain ye mera niji vichaar hai . aap mane ya na mane dildara...
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Rajinder jii, bahut khoob likha hai aapne, tamana aur duaa aik saath bahut khoob !
reagrds
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Rajender jee:
namaste!
bahot achchhi koShiSh... liKhta rahen aage bhee
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal rakhen
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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Ahsaas achha hai lekin agar khuda ki jagah Ai Dosat likhte to aur bhi masaledaar mahoul ban jaata . Vaise Bhi vaar vaar khuda ko taqleef dena ek mamooli baat ke lie achha nahi lagta , khuda ko aur bhi bahut sare important kaam karne hote hain ye mera niji vichaar hai . aap mane ya na mane dildara...
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bahut sahi salah dee hai sir aapne bilkul theek baar baar khuda ko kyon takleef den kisi important kaam ke liye hi pukaarna theek hai bahut sundar vichaar hai ek premi hi aisa vichaar kah sakta hai baat dil me utar gayee..........radhe radhe
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30th September 2012, 05:09 PM
very true and nice.............................................. .......
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30th September 2012, 11:08 PM
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mere mehboob se mila de ae khuda
meri ibadat ka sila de ae khuda
teri rahmaton ka karzdaar hoon main
uski rahon me phool khila de ae khuda
zindagi ki rahen suni hai uske bina
Karwaan jashne bahar ka chala de ae khuda
uski payal ke saare sur band hai
suron ko gana yaad dila de ae khuda
ek arse se raaton ko main soya nahin
uske tasuvvur mai sula de ae khuda
milne se pahle mar bhi jaaye gar 'ishk'
Dusre janam mai usse mila de ae khuda
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Rajinder ji bahut hi umda likhte hain aap aise hi likhte rahe khush rahe
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par manjil par jaana too.ne
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19th October 2012, 08:11 AM
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very true and nice.............................................. .......
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shukriya ... arvind ji ....... radhe radhe ..........
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24th October 2012, 01:21 PM
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Rajinder ji bahut hi umda likhte hain aap aise hi likhte rahe khush rahe
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shukriya rashmi jee..................radhe radhe
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25th November 2012, 06:57 PM
milne se pahle mar bhi jaaye gar 'ishk'
Dusre janam mai usse mila de ae khuda
bahut bahut umda kalaam aur soch pesh ki aapne, daad qubool kijiye janab
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27th November 2012, 07:40 PM
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milne se pahle mar bhi jaaye gar 'ishk'
Dusre janam mai usse mila de ae khuda
bahut bahut umda kalaam aur soch pesh ki aapne, daad qubool kijiye janab
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shukriya asif bhai.............radhe radhe
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4th January 2013, 12:40 AM
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mere mehboob se mila de ae khuda
meri ibadat ka sila de ae khuda
teri rahmaton ka karzdaar hoon main
uski rahon me phool khila de ae khuda
zindagi ki rahen suni hai uske bina
Karwaan jashne bahar ka chala de ae khuda
uski payal ke saare sur band hai
suron ko gana yaad dila de ae khuda
ek arse se raaton ko main soya nahin
uske tasuvvur mai sula de ae khuda
milne se pahle mar bhi jaaye gar 'ishk'
Dusre janam mai usse mila de ae khuda
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bahot sunder shabd rachna
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29th January 2013, 12:54 PM
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bahot sunder shabd rachna
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shukriya neetu jee..............radhe radhe
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