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4th July 2006, 07:48 PM
dosto meri nai gazal appkay naam......
tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi, janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........ khoot ho mere pyaar main kaya patta, lakin koi bhee kami meri ibadat main nahi...... uskay sitam bhee hass kay saho gilla mat karo, yaar ki ruswai ka chalan chahat main nahi..... tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun, itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi...... tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say, ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi...... mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo, na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi....... mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro, dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi...... appka dost raj......... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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4th July 2006, 08:04 PM
tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........ tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say, ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi...... bahut khoob raj ji,acha laga aapko padhkar.har sher lajawaab hai. likhte rahiye yunhin |
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5th July 2006, 10:56 AM
hi raj jee
kya baat he apne dil ka tama dard bahut hi khubsurat andaz main kaghaz par utar dala ye hunar bhi sabhi main nahi hota lakin really apki ghazal bahut hi umda he padh kar bahut achha laga tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi, janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........ wahhhhhhh tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun, itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi...... bahut hi pur asar tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say, ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi...... nice one mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro, dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi...... really good keep writing take care bye Zindagi ko tumne mohbbat bana diya |
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5th July 2006, 01:17 PM
dear veer
lagta hai tumne bhee mohhabt ki hai, kyonki ithni gahrai, ase hi to nahi aa sakti. main to naya join kiya hoon bahut accha likte ho, likte raho " Koi jab Pyar se karta hai baten na jane kyoun yakeen nahi hota chot wo lagi hai dil per dard jiska kabhi kam nahi hota" Dilip |
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8th July 2006, 04:15 PM
jaan ji appko meri gazal pasand i appka bhut bhut shukria......yu hee hosla afzai kartay rehna......raj.....
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9th July 2006, 07:04 PM
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10th July 2006, 02:16 AM
Hi veer
how r u i am fine tume hara likha hamesha ki tarha bhoteh i aacha hai dil ko choogaya nice work keep it up. mushkan |
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10th July 2006, 12:39 PM
woooow kooool yaar
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Re: tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,......... -
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bahut khoob, appki rachna to pyar mai dubi hue hai, tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun, itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi...... tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say, ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi...... pyar se bhari es rachna ke liye mubarkbaad kabool kijiye janab.  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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24th July 2006, 11:18 AM
rubeena ji raj tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hai...or umeed karta hai ki app yu hee meri hosla afzai karti raho gi......raj.....
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dear veer
lagta hai tumne bhee mohhabt ki hai, kyonki ithni gahrai, ase hi to nahi aa sakti. main to naya join kiya hoon bahut accha likte ho, likte raho dilip ji app meri post par aiye usko itne gaur se parha or apni keemti raye dee.....usko pasand kiya main tahe dil se appka shukarguzaar hoon......umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath bana rahega......take care......raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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aur kuch nahi kahungi bas yahi ki aapne achha aur bahot aach alikha hai. bass aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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14th September 2006, 01:14 PM
Raj ji
aapki yah ghazakl man ko bahut bhayi... jitani tareef kerunga kam hi lagegi.. esi tarah aage bhi padhane ko milega mujhe.. aisi ummid kerta hoon.... tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi, janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........ < bahut khub veer ji... love ki pahchan yahi hai... > khoot ho mere pyaar main kyaa patta, lakin koi bhee kami meri ibadat main nahi...... < tumhe pujunga es tarah... kya baat hai... aapki ibadat mein... > uskay sitam bhee hass kay saho gilla mat karo, yaar ki ruswai ka chalan chahat main nahi..... < biswas sabse badi daulat hai... pyar mein dard ko sahana sabse jyada kimati cheej... > tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun, itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi...... < estarah ka swarthipan hona hi chahiye... akhir yah lova ka sawal hai... > tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say, ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi...... < bas sath tumhara mere liye sabkuchh hai.. tumhara sath hona mere liye paripurnta ko dersata hai... > mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo, na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi....... < behatreen lines...... > mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro, dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi...... < dafan hoker bhi amar rahega... per aatma rupi sharir to hamesha tere sath rahega.. so mujhe dafan mat kero... kal ko pachatana na pad jaay.. > Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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aadaab raj bhai, kaise hain? umeed karta hun khairiyat se hi honge.maafi ka talabdaar hun ki aapki mehfil me itni dino baad aaye. bhai aapne jo matla likha usne dil me ched kar diya,aagaaz bahut hi khoobsurat tha.par saara kalaam us khoobsurati ko shayad barkaraar nahi rakh paya.bhai jaan maine pehle v kaha tha aapse ki kabhi kabhi aapke sheron me kuch alfaaz thoonse hue lagte hain.jinhe aap hata do to sher aur v khhobsurat ho jayega aur jinki koi jaroorat nahi kalaam me.aapko main udahran deta hun. aapka matla hai...... tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi, janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........ isme ddosre misre se agar aap main hata den to dekhiye isme jyada asar hota hai ya nahi,aur doosri baat hai yahaan ye known hi ki aap apne bare me keh rahe hain,isiliye ye shabd hata dene se koi fark nahi padta. tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi, janta hoon tu meri kismat main nahi........ waise hi ddosre sher me bhi thoonsa hua lagta hai.aise hi aap dekhna kuch kuch shabd kitna kam kar dete hain teekhapan sheron ki. agar koi v baat meri aapko buri lage to main aapse us baat ke liye maafi ka talabdar hun.umeed karta hun ki aap aage v yunhi likhte rahenge............. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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hi big b aapki peskas ye bahot hi badhiya hai aaapki peshkas me ehsas basta hai
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16th September 2006, 09:24 PM
hi raj ,,kaise hain aap,
***** tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,******** ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi...... mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo, na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi....... well raj aap to hamesha se hi MASHA ALLAH achha likhte hain,,to aaj aapki phir se tarif karun?shayad yeh zaruri nahi,,magar haan itna zarur kahungi ki aap (( judai ,,,milna,,,pana,,ilteja )) in jazbaaton ko jiss khubi se kehte hai,wakayi tarif ke kabil hain,so aaj itna kahungi ki tujhe aage chalte jana hai yeh mat dekh ke rasta kitna lamba hai........ **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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23rd September 2006, 12:23 PM
hi raj
bahut khoob, appki rachna to pyar mai dubi hue hai, tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun, itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi...... tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say, ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi...... pyar se bhari es rachna ke liye mubarkbaad kabool kijiye janab. ------------ Sunita Virender Singh sunita ji appko meri gazal pasand i mere kalam ki keemat wasool ho gai........umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath milta rahega.......raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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17th October 2006, 06:58 PM
Hi veer
how r u i am fine tume hara likha hamesha ki tarha bhoteh i aacha hai dil ko choogaya nice work keep it up. mushkan muskaan ajj kal app kahan ho bhut din huye app kahin dikhai hee nahi deti...appne mujhe parha or pasand kiya iske liye main appka shukar guzaar hoon....yu hee saath dete rehna.....take care.....raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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rajveer ji ko mera salaam... Ek bahoot hi sunder kalaam ko anjaam diya hai aapne..... tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi, janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........ khoot ho mere pyaar main kaya patta, lakin koi bhee kami meri ibadat main nahi...... bahoot hi sunder ahsaas.... Harash |
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24th October 2006, 12:40 PM
woooow kooool yaar
keep it up cute girl app meri post par i mujhe parha or pasand kiya main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon yu hee saath dete rehna......raj,.... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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