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"kya ki he khata mene jo itne khafa ho tum pas ao zara baitho ye shikwe mitayeNge" rubeena 2nd sher khatabar hoo.n gar to hume.n muaaf kardo, wade wafa ke jo kiye sare hum nibhayenge.... dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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"kya ki he khata mene jo itne khafa ho tum pas ao zara baitho ye shikwe mitayeNge" -rubeena parveen 2nd share ab hum ja rahey hai.n yeh jaha.n chod kar, aur woh kahte hai.n aao ab hum galey lagayegey -sunita virender  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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26th September 2006, 02:56 PM
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ab hum ja rahey hai.n yeh jaha.n chod kar, aur woh kahte hai.n aao ab hum galey lagayegey -sunita virender rubeen ji aapne es post ko join kiya, bahut bahut shukriya, umeed hain ab aap bhi hamrey saath jaha aati raheygi. sorry dilip hum ne ek saath hi post kar diye share. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2006, 03:49 PM
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ab hum ja rahey hai.n yeh jaha.n chod kar, aur woh kahte hai.n aao ab hum galey lagayegey -sunita virender 4th "mana ki ho zind(zindagi)meri na itne qareeb ao phir duri zara si seh nahi payenge" Zindagi ko tumne mohbbat bana diya |
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26th September 2006, 03:53 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by Rubeena Parveen
[B]3rd share ab hum ja rahey hai.n yeh jaha.n chod kar, aur woh kahte hai.n aao ab hum galey lagayegey -sunita virender 4th "mana ki ho zind(zindagi)meri na itne qareeb ao phir duri zara si seh nahi payenge" -ubeena parveen 5th share aaj moka bhi hai aur dastoor-e-mohabat bhi hain, lag jao galey hum bhi kaha roj milney aayegey..... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2006, 04:17 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by sunita virender
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6th sher mahobbat ki hai to jaan deke bhi nibhayenge, bewafa ki tarha jhuthi kasme nahi khayenge... gratse aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th September 2006, 08:50 AM
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"kya ki he khata mene jo itne khafa ho tum pas ao zara baitho ye shikwe mitayeNge" -rubeena 2nd sher khatabar hoo.n gar to hume.n muaaf kardo, wade wafa ke jo kiye sare hum nibhayenge.... dilip 3rd share ab hum ja rahey hai.n yeh jaha.n chod kar, aur woh kahte hai.n aao ab hum galey lagayegey -sunita virender 4th "mana ki ho zind(zindagi)meri na itne qareeb ao phir duri zara si seh nahi payenge" -ubeena parveen 5th share aaj moka bhi hai aur dastoor-e-mohabat bhi hain, lag jao galey hum bhi kaha roj milney aayegey..... -sunita virender 6th sher mahobbat ki hai to jaan deke bhi nibhayenge, bewafa ki tarha jhuthi kasme nahi khayenge... pooja 7th sher rahe wafa per chalkar maine har bar chot khayi hai..... bewafao ki tarahab aaj hum bhi tumhe aajmayenge -dilip. " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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27th September 2006, 09:17 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dilip200
[B]1st sher "kya ki he khata mene jo itne khafa ho tum pas ao zara baitho ye shikwe mitayeNge" -rubeena 2nd sher khatabar hoo.n gar to hume.n muaaf kardo, wade wafa ke jo kiye sare hum nibhayenge.... dilip 3rd share ab hum ja rahey hai.n yeh jaha.n chod kar, aur woh kahte hai.n aao ab hum galey lagayegey -sunita virender 4th "mana ki ho zind(zindagi)meri na itne qareeb ao phir duri zara si seh nahi payenge" -ubeena parveen 5th share aaj moka bhi hai aur dastoor-e-mohabat bhi hain, lag jao galey hum bhi kaha roj milney aayegey..... -sunita virender 6th sher mahobbat ki hai to jaan deke bhi nibhayenge, bewafa ki tarha jhuthi kasme nahi khayenge... pooja 7th sher rahe wafa per chalkar maine har bar chot khayi hai..... bewafao ki tarahab aaj hum bhi tumhe aajmayenge -dilip. 8th share humne to tumse kabhi dagga kiya hi nahi hai, hum mar kar bhi aapni waffa nibhayegey......... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th September 2006, 10:54 AM
chaliye rubin ji ki start ki gayi gazal bhi apne anjam tak pahunch gayi hai..... har baar ki tarah ye gazal bhi badi jaldi poori ho gayi...
chaliye ab is sher se nayi gazal ki shuruaat karte hai.n "jab bhi jee chahe mujhse milna tum mere ghar aa jana do boond aankho me bharkar meri kabar per diya jalaa jana dilip ummid hai aap sabhi dost ise jaldi se apne anjam tal pahunchayenge......... " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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27th September 2006, 12:01 PM
"jab bhi jee chahe mujhse milna tum mere ghar aa jana
do boond aankho me bharkar meri kabar per diya jalaa jana [/b] dilip mein bhi aa gai ji 2nd sher Bekarari rahati hai tere ishq me har pal, aaar mere sapno me mujhe sulaa jana… gratse aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th September 2006, 12:02 PM
"jab bhi jee chahe mujhse milna tum mere ghar aa jana
do boond aankho me bharkar meri kabar per diya jalaa jana dilip 2nd share shayad tere chhune se mom ho jaye pathar sa mera badan, kabhi chupke se chandni raat main mujhe ang lagaa jana....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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27th September 2006, 12:02 PM
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===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th September 2006, 12:55 PM
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shayad tere chhune se mom ho jaye pathar sa mera badan, kabhi chupke se chandni raat main mujhe ang lagaa jana....... 'veer' fir se maffi chahungi ji..mera Likha kisi ko bahot chhota laga..isi liye ise fir likh rahi hu…. 3rd sher Bekarari rahati hai teri mahobat me shaamo-sahar, Ake mere sapnon me, is bekarar dil ko behalaa jana.. gratse aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th September 2006, 02:07 PM
"jab bhi jee chahe mujhse milna tum mere ghar aa jana
do boond aankho me bharkar meri kabar per diya jalaa jana dilip 2nd sher Bekarari rahati hai tere ishq me har pal, aakar mere sapno me mujhe sulaa jana… "veer" 3rd sher Bekarari rahati hai teri mahobat me shaamo-sahar, Ake mere sapnon me, is bekarar dil ko behalaa jana.. gratse aapki dost pooja 4th nafrat na rahe koi in khoon ke rishtoN maiN tum akar mohabbat ke kuch phool khila jana Rubeena Zindagi ko tumne mohbbat bana diya |
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27th September 2006, 02:35 PM
yaden or khwab kabhi sach ho nahi sakate
isliye maine aaj tanhai main jindgi guzar di. is ek abad main likh raha hoon chand jab tum sa laga beemar sa rahne lage dawa dee nahee hamne bas nazar utar di Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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27th September 2006, 03:49 PM
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gratse aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th September 2006, 03:53 PM
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nafrat na rahe koi in khoon ke rishtoN maiN tum akar mohabbat ke kuch phool khila jana Rubeena [/B][/QUOTE] 5th sher Vo bewafa har shqs se bol raha hai ki aiye aap bhi, Bhar mutthi namak pooja ke zakhmo pe laga jana.. ye mine aajkal ki iss zalim duniya ko dekhte hue banaya hai........ agar kisine ise ignor kiya to achhi baat nahi hogi............khuli dhamki de rahi hu sab ko.............agar ignor kiya to...................to kya mein dusra sher likh dungi............use jhelna parega fir..........isi liye galti na karna ok ji..........aap teeno ko bol rahi hu samajh gaye na aap............ gratse aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th September 2006, 08:06 PM
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Vo bewafa har shqs se bol raha hai ki aiye aap bhi, Bhar mutthi namak pooja ke zakhmo pe laga jana.. pooja 6th sher mere har zakham se bhi tere liye dua uthati hai tera jab bhi ji chahe inper fir se khanjar chala jana dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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27th September 2006, 08:37 PM
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jane kyu iss aashiyane me ab tak andhiyara chhaya hai, agar moka mile to iss andhere me ek cheerag jala jana.... gratse aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th September 2006, 10:12 PM
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jane kyu iss aashiyane me ab tak andhiyara chhaya hai, agar moka mile to iss andhere me ek cheerag jala jana.... gratse aapki dost pooja next sher meree in ashkbar ankhon main tere khwaab ayse iase amawas kee kisee raat main chand ka jaise aa jana Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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28th September 2006, 09:15 AM
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ab naye gazal ka aagaaz kaun kar raha hai. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2006, 10:13 AM
chaliye sunita ji nai gazal ka aggaz hum karte hai.....
1st share jeene ko to tere bina bhee jeete hai log, ashko ki jagha khoon-e-dil peete hai log....... 'veer' umeed karta hoon app sab dosto ka saath milega.....appka raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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28th September 2006, 10:20 AM
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jeene ko to tere bina bhee jeete hai log, ashko ki jagha khoon-e-dil peete hai log....... 'veer' 2nd sher nayab hushan se wafa ki ummit karte hai.n fir kyoun uski bewafai per rote hain log.... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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28th September 2006, 10:24 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]chaliye sunita ji nai gazal ka aggaz hum karte hai..... 1st share jeene ko to tere bina bhee jeete hai log, ashko ki jagha khoon-e-dil peete hai log....... 'veer' 2nd share jab se tera pyar paya hai, yehi socthi hu harpal, jo tere hai.n, tujhe thukra ke kaise jeetey hai.n woh log.. -sunita virender raj ji es share ki length kuch jayada ho gaye hai, agar aap esko correct karna chaho to kar saktey hai.n aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2006, 11:42 AM
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jeene ko to tere bina bhee jeete hai log, ashko ki jagha khoon-e-dil peete hai log....... 'veer' 2nd share jab se tera pyar mila hai, yehi socthi hu, tujhe thukra ke tere apne kaise jeete hai.n log.. -sunita virender ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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28th September 2006, 11:46 AM
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jeene ko to tere bina bhee jeete hai log, ashko ki jagha khoon-e-dil peete hai log....... 'veer' 2nd share jab se tera pyar mila hai, yehi socthi hu, tujhe thukra ke tere apne kaise jeete hai.n log.. -sunita virender 3rd share jo zakham babasta hai hamare manjhi se, na jane un zakhmo ko kaise seete hai log...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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29th September 2006, 12:36 AM
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iss mahobbat me to siirf majboori miilii hai hume, jane kyu humari majburi ko bewafai kahate hai log..... graze aapki dost pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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LOGO KA KAM HAI KAHNA -
29th September 2006, 12:57 AM
HA POOJA JI . LOGO KA KAM TO SIRF KAHNA HAI . EK DUSRE ME KAMI NIKALNA HAI . MAGAR AAP UDAS NA HOIYE . KISI KO TO AAP APNA SAMAJIYE .
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29th September 2006, 10:44 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by pooja4588
[B]4TH iss mahobbat me to siirf majboori miilii hai hume, jane kyu humari majburi ko bewafai kahate hai log..... - pooja 5th share jo dil kahta hai tum wahi karo, apni manzil kuad chuno, es jahaN mai.n kisi ko bhi sahi nahi kahte hai.n log.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th September 2006, 11:22 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by sunita virender
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gero.n se kya gila kare.n jab apne hi kaam na aaye.... pade waqt to chehra mukhote me.n chipa lete hai.n log dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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29th September 2006, 11:23 AM
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jo dil kahta hai tum wahi karo, apni manzil kuad chuno, es jahaN mai.n kisi ko bhi sahi nahi kahte hai.n log.... -sunita virender 6th share teri aagosh main bhee teri kami mehsoos hoti hai, jinke naseeb main tu nahi jane kaise jeete hai log...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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29th September 2006, 11:27 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]5th share jo dil kahta hai tum wahi karo, apni manzil kuad chuno, es jahaN mai.n kisi ko bhi sahi nahi kahte hai.n log.... -sunita virender 6th share teri aagosh main bhee teri kami mehsoos hoti hai, jinke naseeb main tu nahi jane kaise jeete hai log...... 'veer' 7th share ab sahi hai kuad judai pyar ki to mahsoos hua yeh, phele socthi thi janey kyu din - raat peetey hai.n log... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th September 2006, 11:29 AM
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jeene ko to tere bina bhee jeete hai log, ashko ki jagha khoon-e-dil peete hai log....... 'veer' 2nd sher nayab hushan se wafa ki ummit karte hai.n fir kyoun uski bewafai per rote hain log.... dilip 3rd share jab se tera pyar mila hai, yehi socthi hu, tujhe thukra ke tere apne kaise jeete hai.n log.. -sunita virender 4th share jo zakham babasta hai hamare manjhi se, na jane un zakhmo ko kaise seete hai log...... 'veer' 5TH iss mahobbat me to siirf majboori miilii hai hume, jane kyu humari majburi ko bewafai kahate hai log..... pooja 6th share jo dil kahta hai tum wahi karo, apni manzil kuad chuno, es jahaN mai.n kisi ko bhi sahi nahi kahte hai.n log.... -sunita virender 7th sher gero.n se kya gila kare.n jab apne hi kaam na aaye.... pade waqt to chehra mukhote me.n chipa lete hai.n log dilip 8th share teri aagosh main bhee teri kami mehsoos hoti hai, jinke naseeb main tu nahi jane kaise jeete hai log...... 'veer' chaliye sahab ye gazal bhi poori ho gayi...... sorry na aap mere do sher peeche bich me hi chod chuke the main wo bhi shamil kar liye .... jara gour farmaiyega........ ab nayi gazal ki shuruaat kigiye " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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29th September 2006, 11:30 AM
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jo dil kahta hai tum wahi karo, apni manzil kuad chuno, es jahaN mai.n kisi ko bhi sahi nahi kahte hai.n log.... -sunita virender 6th share teri aagosh main bhee teri kami mehsoos hoti hai, jinke naseeb main tu nahi jane kaise jeete hai log...... 'veer' ------------ khaab neendo ki dehleez par aakar laut jate hai, teri tarha yeh bhee mujhko aazmate hai......'veer' JI BIG B AAPNE BICH ME DILIP JI KA SHER UDA DIYA KOI BAT NAHI AAP UNKE SHER KO 6TH AUR AAPNE JO SUBMIT KIYA USE 7TH NUMBER AUR EK MERI AUR SE 8th sher mohabbat ki duniya me main bhi ek chahne wala hu chahne wale ko kyu badnaam karte hai aaj ye log...... --DHAVAL-- |
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29th September 2006, 11:31 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by sunita virender
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didi aapka ye ab ninth no. ka sher hai " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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29th September 2006, 11:32 AM
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29th September 2006, 11:35 AM
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ab sahi hai kuad judai pyar ki to mahsoos hua yeh, phele socthi thi janey kyu din - raat peetey hai.n log... -sunita virender 8th share teri judai main bhee saroor hai tere intzaar ka, kaya jane teri mohabat ko jo din raat peete hai log..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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29th September 2006, 11:37 AM
are janab ye kya kar rahe hain jara dekh to ligiye yahan kitne sher pahle kahe ja chuke hai.n
ye 11th sher ho gaya hai ab aap kahen to 12th bhi kah de.n " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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29th September 2006, 11:42 AM
BIG B JALDI SE POST KIJIYE KOI NAYA SHER WARNA 12 VA SHER POST HO JAYEGA FIR
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29th September 2006, 11:45 AM
chaliye main nayi gazal ka aagaz muni shree ki is kavita se karta hoo.n
1st sher jindgi jane ko thi humne mout ko bula liya kya kare.n humse akele raha nahi gaya " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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